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La historia es buena, y tiene muy buena redacción. Los personajes no son los mejores pero son lo suficientemente profundos. Aveces se exagera un poco el gore y como recalca mucho el hecho de que mueren muchos civiles. Ah, y también está el hecho de hacer a los villanos absurdamente fuertes. La historia tiene buena acción y escenas de batallas entendibles. Pero... El protagonista parece como si en su última vida fuera asocial o no tuviera inteligencia emocional. Lo cual es poco probable siendo el hecho de que murió de muy viejo y con 3 hijos. Además de que era mujeriego. ¿Y ahora que tiene un cuerpo divino no lo aprovecha o siquiera menciona como sus hormonas están a flote? Quizá el autor solo quiera enfocarse en el drama, algún romance muy liviano y la acción o aventura. Pero realmente aveces el romance pesado y el erotismo son necesarios para calmar a los lectores, sobretodos en mundos cargados de eventos constantes e información como Marvel. P.D.: Como dije en los comentarios, realmente espero que el autor reconsidere lo de hacer la historia un harem. El nivel de poder del protagonista, su pasado como mujeriego y teniendo hijos de diferentes madres. Así como su cuestionable conexión paterna con los miles de bestias mágicas en su dimensión. No dejan espacio para relaciones monogamas. Sin mencionar su esperanza de vida. Es irreal.
Really great read, please don't drop.....................................................................................................................
So far I like the story and as for me it has great potential, the author of the san asks you for more chapters and not to drop this story, and not a harem would be better(Writing through translator)
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Wow, Jack frost is one of my favorite character, maybe that's the first time I'm seeing Jack frost in fanfiction, i hope the author won't drop it. Good luck author 👍
Good fic. Kinda slow paced at the moment but it seems that it's gonna get faster from the lastest chap.(13). I like the cosmic entity thing that mc has going on and the fact that he has a "system" with the AI chip, very creative when compared to the norm of just getting a stat checking system with no lore behind it. Overall a decent story.
I'm hooked on this novel. I really like Jack attitude, till now. I just hope you could release chapters more often👍👍
I just love the character Jack Frost so much. Hope the author won’t ever never ever ever drop this. Totally recommend 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Please don't make Jane part of the harem. He moved a lot between Wolverine and Cyclops, dated one, slept with the other, and moved between them a lot, or if you're going to make her part of the harem, put that she's still a minor and hasn't become like this yet, please.
A story of a reincarnated person as Jack Frost fused with the powers of 2 other individuals. The story progression is wonderful and packed with information. This is gonna be even better with no harem.
Блин первый раз вижу Джека в фанфике так что однозначно 5 звёзд![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I loved everything from the character, the world-building, and the pacing of the chapters. I would love the read more and hope for more updates
Here's a tip if you want to improve your writing don't start creating +18 novels this is idiotic okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
A good read so far. Not many chs, but the start seems interesting enough. Let's see what you do with this fic, author.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Its a genuinely good fanfic with a kinda cliche start with a really powerful entity sending him to another world but with a intresting take with his powers and why hes getting them.
It's only 4 chapters but I liked it. Hope the protagonist doesn't make the usual mistakes of every Iskied character in Marvel.
where are you in only 17 chapters you got me intro your storie and a + it's no harem WHERE ARE YOU 🔥🔥🔥⭐ ( im french )
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La historia es buena, y tiene muy buena redacción. Los personajes no son los mejores pero son lo suficientemente profundos. Aveces se exagera un poco el gore y como recalca mucho el hecho de que mueren muchos civiles. Ah, y también está el hecho de hacer a los villanos absurdamente fuertes. La historia tiene buena acción y escenas de batallas entendibles. Pero... El protagonista parece como si en su última vida fuera asocial o no tuviera inteligencia emocional. Lo cual es poco probable siendo el hecho de que murió de muy viejo y con 3 hijos. Además de que era mujeriego. ¿Y ahora que tiene un cuerpo divino no lo aprovecha o siquiera menciona como sus hormonas están a flote? Quizá el autor solo quiera enfocarse en el drama, algún romance muy liviano y la acción o aventura. Pero realmente aveces el romance pesado y el erotismo son necesarios para calmar a los lectores, sobretodos en mundos cargados de eventos constantes e información como Marvel. P.D.: Como dije en los comentarios, realmente espero que el autor reconsidere lo de hacer la historia un harem. El nivel de poder del protagonista, su pasado como mujeriego y teniendo hijos de diferentes madres. Así como su cuestionable conexión paterna con los miles de bestias mágicas en su dimensión. No dejan espacio para relaciones monogamas. Sin mencionar su esperanza de vida. Es irreal.
Really great read, please don't drop.....................................................................................................................
So far I like the story and as for me it has great potential, the author of the san asks you for more chapters and not to drop this story, and not a harem would be better(Writing through translator)
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Wow, Jack frost is one of my favorite character, maybe that's the first time I'm seeing Jack frost in fanfiction, i hope the author won't drop it. Good luck author 👍
Good fic. Kinda slow paced at the moment but it seems that it's gonna get faster from the lastest chap.(13). I like the cosmic entity thing that mc has going on and the fact that he has a "system" with the AI chip, very creative when compared to the norm of just getting a stat checking system with no lore behind it. Overall a decent story.
I'm hooked on this novel. I really like Jack attitude, till now. I just hope you could release chapters more often👍👍
I just love the character Jack Frost so much. Hope the author won’t ever never ever ever drop this. Totally recommend 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Please don't make Jane part of the harem. He moved a lot between Wolverine and Cyclops, dated one, slept with the other, and moved between them a lot, or if you're going to make her part of the harem, put that she's still a minor and hasn't become like this yet, please.
A story of a reincarnated person as Jack Frost fused with the powers of 2 other individuals. The story progression is wonderful and packed with information. This is gonna be even better with no harem.
Блин первый раз вижу Джека в фанфике так что однозначно 5 звёзд![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I loved everything from the character, the world-building, and the pacing of the chapters. I would love the read more and hope for more updates
Here's a tip if you want to improve your writing don't start creating +18 novels this is idiotic okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
A good read so far. Not many chs, but the start seems interesting enough. Let's see what you do with this fic, author.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Its a genuinely good fanfic with a kinda cliche start with a really powerful entity sending him to another world but with a intresting take with his powers and why hes getting them.
It's only 4 chapters but I liked it. Hope the protagonist doesn't make the usual mistakes of every Iskied character in Marvel.
where are you in only 17 chapters you got me intro your storie and a + it's no harem WHERE ARE YOU 🔥🔥🔥⭐ ( im french )