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teks dengan kamera chapters 145+ are trash. Naruto's arc really drives me crazy
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La meilleure fan fic de one piece que j'ai lu grammaires aux top, le seul problème et le mc et sont équipage qui est pas assez développé et le MC trop op à mon goût il peut ce battre avec tout les yonko et leur équipage avec juste sont équipage.
Not my cup of tea but it deserves a good rating i like the writing quality the only complaint I have is that it ruined my immersion in the story when demigure uses magic i mean if you write a fanfic stick with the power system of that anime there's really no need to add other anime power system or you could just give him an op fruit with no weakness
Good, guys, do you have any suggestions for one piece novels like this, where the MC summons characters from another world?
good it's good , very good , he f-ed up the story line and going strong , gave op mc true definition
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I’ll be honest that I thought that this was going to be a novel that I would skim through parts of it to get to the main points but to my surprise it has held my complete attention from the beginning till now and the way the story has been building up leaves nothing to be desired and am really looking forward to how everything is going to unfold so keep up your great work I’m having a lot of fun reading this
Muy bueno 11/10..................................................................................................................................
Good points that I see in this story is that the MC is not the classic one I saw in the manga and I like this character so let's forgive him, he kills everyone who gets in his way no matter who it is. The grammar at least in my opinion is good, easy to read and the bad thing in my opinion would be the shortness of the chapters along with the power of the MC, but it is easily ignored for the rest. In summary an entertaining story to read very different from the common One Piece.
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I really like it. One of the best fanfic of one piece (after limitless) in my opinion But can you please stop increasing the milestone for extra chapter?
plssssss make it 2 chapter per dayyy im craving for your work[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nooo, por qué se me hacen tan cortos los capítulos??? Se queda justo en la mejor parte, ...........,......................................................por favor autor sigue así...............................................................................................................................
Keep up the amazing work this has been one of the best one piece fanfics I have read.
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teks dengan kamera chapters 145+ are trash. Naruto's arc really drives me crazy
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La meilleure fan fic de one piece que j'ai lu grammaires aux top, le seul problème et le mc et sont équipage qui est pas assez développé et le MC trop op à mon goût il peut ce battre avec tout les yonko et leur équipage avec juste sont équipage.
Not my cup of tea but it deserves a good rating i like the writing quality the only complaint I have is that it ruined my immersion in the story when demigure uses magic i mean if you write a fanfic stick with the power system of that anime there's really no need to add other anime power system or you could just give him an op fruit with no weakness
Good, guys, do you have any suggestions for one piece novels like this, where the MC summons characters from another world?
good it's good , very good , he f-ed up the story line and going strong , gave op mc true definition
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I’ll be honest that I thought that this was going to be a novel that I would skim through parts of it to get to the main points but to my surprise it has held my complete attention from the beginning till now and the way the story has been building up leaves nothing to be desired and am really looking forward to how everything is going to unfold so keep up your great work I’m having a lot of fun reading this
Muy bueno 11/10..................................................................................................................................
Good points that I see in this story is that the MC is not the classic one I saw in the manga and I like this character so let's forgive him, he kills everyone who gets in his way no matter who it is. The grammar at least in my opinion is good, easy to read and the bad thing in my opinion would be the shortness of the chapters along with the power of the MC, but it is easily ignored for the rest. In summary an entertaining story to read very different from the common One Piece.
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ネタバレを明かす I really like it. One of the best fanfic of one piece (after limitless) in my opinion But can you please stop increasing the milestone for extra chapter?
plssssss make it 2 chapter per dayyy im craving for your work[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nooo, por qué se me hacen tan cortos los capítulos??? Se queda justo en la mejor parte, ...........,......................................................por favor autor sigue así...............................................................................................................................
Keep up the amazing work this has been one of the best one piece fanfics I have read.
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