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It has a good start but it might also go down heel quickly if not planned and executed well. I don't know how you wish to go about it but if he wishes to leave the island then realistically he will have to have at least yonko level power to servive in one piece world because the moment people see him with xebecs ship and sword as well as him having yami yami no mi, not only the world government but also kaido and bigmom will do everything in their power to erase his existence. And don't think they will let everything go just because thinking all of these as coincidence because with xebecs identity alone is something they will do everything to delete. However, everything being said I do hope it will be a good read.
5 star review Ask me anything about the story sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
It has a good start but it might also go down heel quickly if not planned and executed well. I don't know how you wish to go about it but if he wishes to leave the island then realistically he will have to have at least yonko level power to servive in one piece world because the moment people see him with xebecs ship and sword as well as him having yami yami no mi, not only the world government but also kaido and bigmom will do everything in their power to erase his existence. And don't think they will let everything go just because thinking all of these as coincidence because with xebecs identity alone is something they will do everything to delete. However, everything being said I do hope it will be a good read.