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3-5-5-1-5. The story is on point, but the writing style is mostly descriptive and author tend to repeat stuff to fluff the word count. The chapter length is extremely short and this might be dropped. Shame, this is pretty good.
I hope that this story continue is a amazing good!!!!! I want to see how Luffy and Coby will meet and interact. I also like the way you've handled the plot without breaking away from the One Piece world. Although I'm still anxious if Coby will meet Luffy first or when he's on the original voyage. And Nami?.........will this Coby go help her before Luffy or will he wait to do the whole plot with them originally. I have a lot of ideas in my head that I would like to see and I hope to see at least half of them in your fanfic.
It's good 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
So Coby is becoming slowly something more then Side Character huh. This DF.? is Paramecia.?
I hope this story is not dead.? That would be such a pity. Since storys with Coby as a Mc are almost non-existent.
i like the story ....................................................................................................................................
I realy like this story. Coby is becoming stronger much early.before he even meets Luffy. Oh I have Idea Coby should go to Cocayashi island. it is Nami home. And kill Arlong. he realy deserve to die for what he did. Nami as Coby waifu.? anyone.?
Cool Story im also Captain Coby Fan.How update shedule look like.? And who will be in Coby Harem. ''HERO,, Deserve lots of LOVE. His confirmed Love interest is Hibari.
Is realy good one, one piece fanfic i found this web, keep going for author. Semangatttttttttttttttttttt untuk author 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
After read it for a while, i can say it's good enough for a first work. How the story telling work and how it's written made me read it to chapter 10 eventhough i'm not a fan of One Piece. Gotta read the rest if it touch chapter 30/40
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I found good treasure, i hope don't drop this novel❤😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
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3-5-5-1-5. The story is on point, but the writing style is mostly descriptive and author tend to repeat stuff to fluff the word count. The chapter length is extremely short and this might be dropped. Shame, this is pretty good.
I hope that this story continue is a amazing good!!!!! I want to see how Luffy and Coby will meet and interact. I also like the way you've handled the plot without breaking away from the One Piece world. Although I'm still anxious if Coby will meet Luffy first or when he's on the original voyage. And Nami?.........will this Coby go help her before Luffy or will he wait to do the whole plot with them originally. I have a lot of ideas in my head that I would like to see and I hope to see at least half of them in your fanfic.
It's good 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
So Coby is becoming slowly something more then Side Character huh. This DF.? is Paramecia.?
I hope this story is not dead.? That would be such a pity. Since storys with Coby as a Mc are almost non-existent.
i like the story ....................................................................................................................................
I realy like this story. Coby is becoming stronger much early.before he even meets Luffy. Oh I have Idea Coby should go to Cocayashi island. it is Nami home. And kill Arlong. he realy deserve to die for what he did. Nami as Coby waifu.? anyone.?
Cool Story im also Captain Coby Fan.How update shedule look like.? And who will be in Coby Harem. ''HERO,, Deserve lots of LOVE. His confirmed Love interest is Hibari.
Is realy good one, one piece fanfic i found this web, keep going for author. Semangatttttttttttttttttttt untuk author 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
After read it for a while, i can say it's good enough for a first work. How the story telling work and how it's written made me read it to chapter 10 eventhough i'm not a fan of One Piece. Gotta read the rest if it touch chapter 30/40
Luar biasa mantul , goodjob[img=recommend]. Tetep berkarya yg terbaik. Dan Istiqomah untuk jdi yg paling baik. [img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=fp]
I found good treasure, i hope don't drop this novel❤😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
If you like it, give a review and support for author 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍