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Great story, love the pacing and the way they establish the complexity of the MC.
honestly liked it up till the Druid thing the ending of the Arc? is just stupid in my oppinion you portreyed him as very cautios the whole time and then suddenly he is suprised she dissapears whith the staff and after that it just contiues in harrys story like why.Another thing i dont like is we dont know much of the mc 120 chapters in we dont know whats up with his eyes we dont know how strong he is another thing is the character interaction is it so hard for him not to be the lone wolf edge lord will drop it for now let me know if it improves later on maybe i pick it back up
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This is collectively the best fanfiction every written on here. From length to quality to how it captivates your attention. I’ve read a lot of stories on here if not most and this is hands down the best story on here
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The story gets too boring when it shifts its pov's on and Hermione. You should focus more on the powerhouses because they're way more interesting. Perhaps a Grindelwald interaction or another adventure through different magical communities. This story is at its peak during the mc's adventures outside, especially one concerning the ancient wizards. Cliodna is also an interesting character. You should include her more like making arcs concerning her and her background(the druids). Making her the ship to the mc is also an interesting idea, but I think it's better if there is no romance.
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This is the most unique fanfic I've ever encountered in HP so far and I'm not that stingy to give a review, this deserves a good review for how potentially "best" this would be. Hoping this would have longer chapters. bless you Author-nim, wishing you good luck and good health to write more and to give us more surprises.
I love the Writing Quality and the story very much.It's just the fact that when the POV changes to Harry, it feels too slow as we don't get to see the MC much , specially in the last arc and this feels frustrating.
Honestly can’t stand looking at these horrible reviews one of the best fics I’ve read. The fact that he doesn’t have memory makes it 10x better
Its a good story however there are some parts that make me feel like i wasted my time reading them so i believe the author needs to practice more as the best way to describe it is those parts feel super sloppy/rushed and not well merged into the story giving it that feeling of pointlessness.
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honestly was great till the author started glazing up harry and forced the mc to start looking after harry and essentially adopting him. again, another author who fails to realize most readers are tired of fanfics that focus on harry or give harry so much screen time and importance, they like the wizarding world and lore more than Harry. why even bother to write if you're just gonna make it about harry again 🤦🏻♂️
One of the most put together and thought out books ive ever read. Well done author please continue to write.
💰💰💰✔✔✔💯💯💯🎖🎖🎖🔥🔥🔥💹💹💹♛♛♛I love this plot!!!! absolutely love it!!!! more more please!!
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buena historia, amplia bastante el lore de harry potter y no se centra en escenarios ya quemados y repetidos hasta el extremo, casi no se nota la influencia china asíque buen trabajo traduciendo y adaptando. ayuda mucho que no tenga ningun sistema, eso siempre arruina los ff. ¿Alguna recomendación para algo similar?
Well written fanfic.... atleast mc is still sane and not thinking with his ---- Overall it's nice background story mc is powerful but for some reason it seems to lack a goal....he is just surviving and making himself powerful.
This is probably one of the best harry potter novel i have read. The starting chapters are quite confusing and there are some grammar and spelling errors. it gets better with new chapters. Dumbledore is not shown as a saint or a complete evil guy, why he does somethings and other answers are also told in the story. MC has good relationship with snape and the plot twist at the last chapters was one of the smoothest and best i have ever read.The Mc's backstory is not fully explained but in the new chapters he's outside of hogwarts so maybe we will know about it. But the Mc's memory and his knowledge about harry potter world is in a mystery and gets confusing maybe the author is planning another twist or something like that.
This story is just great. There are some grammar mistakes. But nothing serious. I love this story! .. ... .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
dont get me wrong its been good but the story has been draging on and on and nithjng particularly interesting happened till now i shelved this for a month to binge and it feels like i read one or two chapters of a good fic
I'll be honest I love the story. Love the main character. However it feels like the story is being dragged a lot. With a person like the MC he should have already figured out what the monster is.
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Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 4/5 Story Development 5/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 5/5 A great novel to read. Una buena novela para leer.
great story with consistent updates and long chapter length. World building is pretty good with the mc learning magic from many countries and coming into contact with the upper echelons of some of the magical species. personally I love that the mc is in a teaching position and am curious what he'll do about the slytherin students immature and hostile attitudes.
Great story, love the pacing and the way they establish the complexity of the MC.
honestly liked it up till the Druid thing the ending of the Arc? is just stupid in my oppinion you portreyed him as very cautios the whole time and then suddenly he is suprised she dissapears whith the staff and after that it just contiues in harrys story like why.Another thing i dont like is we dont know much of the mc 120 chapters in we dont know whats up with his eyes we dont know how strong he is another thing is the character interaction is it so hard for him not to be the lone wolf edge lord will drop it for now let me know if it improves later on maybe i pick it back up
ネタバレを明かす This is collectively the best fanfiction every written on here. From length to quality to how it captivates your attention. I’ve read a lot of stories on here if not most and this is hands down the best story on here
romance? .................................................................... .................................................................... .................................................................... .................................................................... .................................................................... .................................................................... .................................................................... ....................................................................
The story gets too boring when it shifts its pov's on and Hermione. You should focus more on the powerhouses because they're way more interesting. Perhaps a Grindelwald interaction or another adventure through different magical communities. This story is at its peak during the mc's adventures outside, especially one concerning the ancient wizards. Cliodna is also an interesting character. You should include her more like making arcs concerning her and her background(the druids). Making her the ship to the mc is also an interesting idea, but I think it's better if there is no romance.
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This is the most unique fanfic I've ever encountered in HP so far and I'm not that stingy to give a review, this deserves a good review for how potentially "best" this would be. Hoping this would have longer chapters. bless you Author-nim, wishing you good luck and good health to write more and to give us more surprises.
I love the Writing Quality and the story very much.It's just the fact that when the POV changes to Harry, it feels too slow as we don't get to see the MC much , specially in the last arc and this feels frustrating.
Honestly can’t stand looking at these horrible reviews one of the best fics I’ve read. The fact that he doesn’t have memory makes it 10x better
Its a good story however there are some parts that make me feel like i wasted my time reading them so i believe the author needs to practice more as the best way to describe it is those parts feel super sloppy/rushed and not well merged into the story giving it that feeling of pointlessness.
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honestly was great till the author started glazing up harry and forced the mc to start looking after harry and essentially adopting him. again, another author who fails to realize most readers are tired of fanfics that focus on harry or give harry so much screen time and importance, they like the wizarding world and lore more than Harry. why even bother to write if you're just gonna make it about harry again 🤦🏻♂️
One of the most put together and thought out books ive ever read. Well done author please continue to write.
💰💰💰✔✔✔💯💯💯🎖🎖🎖🔥🔥🔥💹💹💹♛♛♛I love this plot!!!! absolutely love it!!!! more more please!!
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buena historia, amplia bastante el lore de harry potter y no se centra en escenarios ya quemados y repetidos hasta el extremo, casi no se nota la influencia china asíque buen trabajo traduciendo y adaptando. ayuda mucho que no tenga ningun sistema, eso siempre arruina los ff. ¿Alguna recomendación para algo similar?
Well written fanfic.... atleast mc is still sane and not thinking with his ---- Overall it's nice background story mc is powerful but for some reason it seems to lack a goal....he is just surviving and making himself powerful.
This is probably one of the best harry potter novel i have read. The starting chapters are quite confusing and there are some grammar and spelling errors. it gets better with new chapters. Dumbledore is not shown as a saint or a complete evil guy, why he does somethings and other answers are also told in the story. MC has good relationship with snape and the plot twist at the last chapters was one of the smoothest and best i have ever read.The Mc's backstory is not fully explained but in the new chapters he's outside of hogwarts so maybe we will know about it. But the Mc's memory and his knowledge about harry potter world is in a mystery and gets confusing maybe the author is planning another twist or something like that.
This story is just great. There are some grammar mistakes. But nothing serious. I love this story! .. ... .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
dont get me wrong its been good but the story has been draging on and on and nithjng particularly interesting happened till now i shelved this for a month to binge and it feels like i read one or two chapters of a good fic
I'll be honest I love the story. Love the main character. However it feels like the story is being dragged a lot. With a person like the MC he should have already figured out what the monster is.
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Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 4/5 Story Development 5/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 5/5 A great novel to read. Una buena novela para leer.
great story with consistent updates and long chapter length. World building is pretty good with the mc learning magic from many countries and coming into contact with the upper echelons of some of the magical species. personally I love that the mc is in a teaching position and am curious what he'll do about the slytherin students immature and hostile attitudes.