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I'm Kizaru in Konoha

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作者: Revelature

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In the bustling village of Konoha, the Chunin Exams, an event eagerly anticipated by all, is about to commence. Amidst the crowd gathered in the arena, a mysterious figure stands out. Clad in distinctive attire, adorned with a striking Justice Marine Cloak draped over his shoulder, this enigmatic individual observes the proceedings with keen interest.

However, the peace and excitement quickly give way to unexpected chaos. The tranquility of the village is shattered as turmoil ensues. Unfazed by the unfolding events, the figure known as Kizaru, donning a lazy expression, mutters disdainfully, "It came after all... The Chunin Exam Arc has finally unfolded."

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Just pure dumb forced plot fic. A man who has hidden himself from ninja world just got to meet team 7 before wave mission just outside the gate of konoha. And naruto and sasuke attacked him for no reason what so ever and sasuke even gave a killing blow and kakashi let them be then MC showed speed which kakashi(best jonin of konoha) can't detect and MC wanna fight naruto and sasuke to see how much better is he from them Why? It was stated in chapter 1 that MC is elite jonin so why would he fight 2 canon fodder level naruto and sasuke? I just wanna bang my head after reading 3-4 chapters

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Ryan_42
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Really unnatural, the plot points are very forced and feel completely unrealistic. Plot points and character interactions are just shoe-horned in without care. For example when MC meets team 7 outside of the village. The author could have had the interaction happen after the encounter with the ninjas, with them being on edge due to it giving them a much better incentive for them attacking the MC.

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TruthHurtsX1000

Garbage..forced plot. Mc is not original..no brain cells written ff that just copy and paste..................nothing interesting happens and there is 0 creativity

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Yardigan

So far this is a 5 star novel, but before I get further infested into this, I would like to know if this has romance, if yes, is it a single love interest or is the character going to be picking up multiple girls for no logical reason. It's not that I'm against harem novels, I'm just tired of seeing every single novel about an mc with 2 or more girls.

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Endo_Cero

5 star review, you will find the reasons by reading the novel😏 PS: I like the mc and the power he has.... powerful but not broken❤️❤️❤️😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

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SwordGod007

Although there are only 6 chapters, the story is good, with very few grammatical errors and fairly long chapters. I hope you will continue to write such quality chapters and finish the story. I also want to know the origin of his powers, I mean, do we get to know why the MC has Kizaru's powers?

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ThinDeer

Is this an original or a translation?

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MonkeyOfAle

I couldn't bring myself to read more than a few chapters, this is genuinely horrible, just don't read this.I am legitimately unsure as to whether or not there is any sort of thought process that guides the plot's development.

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Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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