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I never read Eleceed, and I don't plan to, but as a One piece fan who stopped reading one piece fanfics, I'll read this.
Love the Mc having such a distinct personality and I don’t mind him not having canon knowledge, in fact I think that it makes the story more interesting due to mc not having canon knowledge.
oh you finally updated again after not updating for a long time, that's very good
I am thankful that there's another eleceed fanfic please continue to write this made my day. I think people will love you to continue bc there's nowhere near enough fanfics about eleceed.
First off, the first chapter just would throw you for a loop if you don't read some of the comments or read the next chapters I suppose, since you don't get no introduction to the world or know if the mc reincarnated or not you just get a scene from a high school drama where the mc punches someone who messed with his girl, secondly, the grammar while not the worst it still needs some fixes as for the rest well such as update stability and character design well they get 4 stars form me.Ps: it still feels more like an American drama then a manhwa to me.
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The writing quality is nice the update schedule is okay the story is okay the character design is okay the world background is okay overall I would read this
So far so good but there is one thing that bothers me and that is that I don't know his girlfriend's last name I don't know if she is a main character in the original novel That's why I wonder if he will be with her until the end or will he end her and date a woman from the original novel who is the protagonist?
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This could be better if the oc have knowledge of elecced, because the shure thing is are going to be like friend of all the group and that cool but if the oc have knowledge is no gonna look like forced
finally updated!!!! ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................
I never read Eleceed, and I don't plan to, but as a One piece fan who stopped reading one piece fanfics, I'll read this.
Love the Mc having such a distinct personality and I don’t mind him not having canon knowledge, in fact I think that it makes the story more interesting due to mc not having canon knowledge.
oh you finally updated again after not updating for a long time, that's very good
I am thankful that there's another eleceed fanfic please continue to write this made my day. I think people will love you to continue bc there's nowhere near enough fanfics about eleceed.
First off, the first chapter just would throw you for a loop if you don't read some of the comments or read the next chapters I suppose, since you don't get no introduction to the world or know if the mc reincarnated or not you just get a scene from a high school drama where the mc punches someone who messed with his girl, secondly, the grammar while not the worst it still needs some fixes as for the rest well such as update stability and character design well they get 4 stars form me.Ps: it still feels more like an American drama then a manhwa to me.
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The writing quality is nice the update schedule is okay the story is okay the character design is okay the world background is okay overall I would read this
So far so good but there is one thing that bothers me and that is that I don't know his girlfriend's last name I don't know if she is a main character in the original novel That's why I wonder if he will be with her until the end or will he end her and date a woman from the original novel who is the protagonist?
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This could be better if the oc have knowledge of elecced, because the shure thing is are going to be like friend of all the group and that cool but if the oc have knowledge is no gonna look like forced
finally updated!!!! ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................