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hello, you are going to continue with the novel, it is very good the story is coherent and the rhythm is good, the characters are well structured and the setting is good, do not abandon the novel [img=recommend][img=update]
Alright fic. My only criticism is that the dialogue sometimes doesn't feel human, but thats kind of a minor problem. A well rounded crack fic.
God. Definitely not my proudest read, but definitely one of the most enjoyable. Please continue this masterpiece
He is like a beta harem protagonist that does not know how to act around women.
great book, hope the uploading speed doesn't slow down.also are there any similar books?
so far from what I read he basically slave too his “mothers” and before anyone say it change later It really don, t he just have more of mine of his own but basically listen or do what they want in the end. Now to the athour this not meant tI discouragea but to help u see the promblem in story think something was somewhat ok
mi única sugerencia es que deberías planificar la dirección que tomará la historia, porque e leído muchas buenas historias pero sus autores escribían sin planificar el futuro de sus historias y las dejaban caer porque ya no sabían que escribir y la verdad me gusto la historia, ya han habido varias historias de un hombre nacido entre las amazonas pero todas las que conozco se han caído solo espero que tu historia continúe
the story,the character design is very good. keep updating author this story is one of a kind
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Shameless 5/5 post. It's different from the other SYSTEM FICS I see. Really want to see where this will lead to. So for now it gets a 5
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Se vuelve tedioso que el mc sea solo un juguete y con la habilidad que le diste d que no puede hacerles nada es terrible porque pueden hacer lo que quieran y el mc no podría decir o hacer nada 😐
hello, you are going to continue with the novel, it is very good the story is coherent and the rhythm is good, the characters are well structured and the setting is good, do not abandon the novel [img=recommend][img=update]
Alright fic. My only criticism is that the dialogue sometimes doesn't feel human, but thats kind of a minor problem. A well rounded crack fic.
God. Definitely not my proudest read, but definitely one of the most enjoyable. Please continue this masterpiece
He is like a beta harem protagonist that does not know how to act around women.
great book, hope the uploading speed doesn't slow down.also are there any similar books?
so far from what I read he basically slave too his “mothers” and before anyone say it change later It really don, t he just have more of mine of his own but basically listen or do what they want in the end. Now to the athour this not meant tI discouragea but to help u see the promblem in story think something was somewhat ok
mi única sugerencia es que deberías planificar la dirección que tomará la historia, porque e leído muchas buenas historias pero sus autores escribían sin planificar el futuro de sus historias y las dejaban caer porque ya no sabían que escribir y la verdad me gusto la historia, ya han habido varias historias de un hombre nacido entre las amazonas pero todas las que conozco se han caído solo espero que tu historia continúe
the story,the character design is very good. keep updating author this story is one of a kind
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Shameless 5/5 post. It's different from the other SYSTEM FICS I see. Really want to see where this will lead to. So for now it gets a 5
do you have ntr? I hope not[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Se vuelve tedioso que el mc sea solo un juguete y con la habilidad que le diste d que no puede hacerles nada es terrible porque pueden hacer lo que quieran y el mc no podría decir o hacer nada 😐
i just want to know if the author is going to update this story