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i dont normally leave reviews but this is epic...great story...if u like Harry Potter this is similar but different and for adults...if ur looking for a bunch of kids doing mischievous things and getting into trouble...this isn't the story for u...If ur looking for excitement epic fights adult themes and great story this is for u
I have I question does he ever get back his magic circuits back I need to know to continue reading this
initially it was very nice story it has very adventurous story line but then later chapters writers romantic scenes are boring and they are repeated the same unwantedly could have reduced that or wrote with more romantic elements insteady just telling his character....worth reading just skip the romantic repeated writings
I’ll change this as it goes, as I update and understand how I feel about the story. Currently I am heavily disappointed with encouraging the concept of “concubines”. “Men” who have concubines are cowardly trash and it’s a term meant to only benefit other men. I can only hope Ethan doesn’t keep her as a concubine instead of a wife as she deserves. No woman deserves to only be desired for her body, gotta do better Elyon, in my opinion.
Great novel, I’ve read all of Elyon’s other novels, though I still need to finish RWTSS, this one is definitely one of my favorites.
I hate , I mean I hate when children are flirted around to be a love interest. This is fiction! U can literally make them the same age. No, it’s “can’t wait till your older”. Like why pander to pedophiles! And stop with the ridiculous repetitive nonsense “blue haired boy” and such.
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Love this novel. Characters and world building are top knock. Elyon has come up with another banger!
Could someone tell me if Ethan will continue to have two personalities forever, please? ...............................................................................................
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I really like this novel. An adult fantasy novel set in a Harry Potter-like universe was something I didn't know I needed in my life. With a slow burn harem romance, likable support characters, cool magic duels, lovely slice of life scenes, and 800+ chapters, this novel will keep me busy for some time. The only thing I'm not a fan of so far is the double personality thing going on around 140 chapters in. Not really comfortable with an adult romance novel where there's an alternative version of the MC inside of him. That alternative version kissing Luna and seeing Emma naked (and Emma knowing it and being disappointed he told her to get dressed), is kind of bothering me. Hopefully this isn't the way it seems to be or gets resolved in later chapters, because I'll be honest, it is putting a damper on an otherwise very enjoyable novel.
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This one is great! Highly recommend. 10/10 It is aimed at about 13-16YOA audience.
I gotta write a second review since the first one is like a year ago and i was at chapter 150 or smth then. Now we are over 800 and man it is still amazing to read every day. We got really good charakter development, world building (+fun connections to some more novels, which you should also read) and some more than enjoyable plots and twists (some still need to be resolved and more will follow for sure). Its so good it has become part of my daily life to read 2 chapters after work (update stability is still insane). You can even get it as a Book from amazon. If you still havent started this Book and you read this just start it already. I personally like it even more than Harry Potter by now. <3 Keep up the amazing work Author. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
I’m going to rate this book now cause so far it’s a good book amazing word is created. This book is amazing so far a lot of funny references to tv shows, video games an real work keep up the brilliant writing please 🙏🏾
Esta buena es atrapante te va llevando lentamente y es una lectura atrapante interesante emocionantes me gusto
this story is not Elyon at his best but Elyon at his most. decent read to pass time
beautiful and nicely written should make for non stop reading and the character is well represented
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This is a good novel which seems to have taken drawn lot of inspirations from" Yamada kun an the seven witches" anime and Harry Potter... I do became curious how the development would go considering how some parts became close to be called "plagiarism", but then also I continued , gonna be honest, it was good, very good...i can say my time was well spent[img=recommend]
Dude are you always ill?!?!? Every two chapters you come down with something 😅😅
This review probably wont be able to give this amazing story justice but I will try my best. While every novel from Elyon is outstanding I think this is his best work yet. The story features wizards and with the school system you will get reminded of harry potter but the novel is unique and has its own charme. As every novel from Elyon the mc has a sad past and doesnt start as the strongest. Dont make the mistake to be impatient and give it some time, the story progression is very well written and the mc slowly develops into a powerhouse. Writing quality is superb as always, all of the characters, not just mc and heroines but also the side characters have interesting personalities and get proper development. Elyon knows like no other author how to play with his readers emotions but the ending is always a happy one. The different arcs have great pacing and are always exciting. I want to highlight the Nexus arc which is the best one I have ever read in any novel. The magic battles are a joy to read and the story never gets boring. Some fan favourite characters from other Elyon novels make small appearances in a way where they blend perfectly into the story. I highly recommend anyone who likes fantasy + romance and doesnt mind harem to read this masterpiece. I cant praise it enough and im very sad that the novel is about to end. Heres hoping for Wizard World Irregular-Forgotten Shores in 2026 or 2027 🙏
i dont normally leave reviews but this is epic...great story...if u like Harry Potter this is similar but different and for adults...if ur looking for a bunch of kids doing mischievous things and getting into trouble...this isn't the story for u...If ur looking for excitement epic fights adult themes and great story this is for u
I have I question does he ever get back his magic circuits back I need to know to continue reading this
initially it was very nice story it has very adventurous story line but then later chapters writers romantic scenes are boring and they are repeated the same unwantedly could have reduced that or wrote with more romantic elements insteady just telling his character....worth reading just skip the romantic repeated writings
I’ll change this as it goes, as I update and understand how I feel about the story. Currently I am heavily disappointed with encouraging the concept of “concubines”. “Men” who have concubines are cowardly trash and it’s a term meant to only benefit other men. I can only hope Ethan doesn’t keep her as a concubine instead of a wife as she deserves. No woman deserves to only be desired for her body, gotta do better Elyon, in my opinion.
Great novel, I’ve read all of Elyon’s other novels, though I still need to finish RWTSS, this one is definitely one of my favorites.
I hate , I mean I hate when children are flirted around to be a love interest. This is fiction! U can literally make them the same age. No, it’s “can’t wait till your older”. Like why pander to pedophiles! And stop with the ridiculous repetitive nonsense “blue haired boy” and such.
ネタバレを明かす Love this novel. Characters and world building are top knock. Elyon has come up with another banger!
Could someone tell me if Ethan will continue to have two personalities forever, please? ...............................................................................................
ネタバレを明かす I really like this novel. An adult fantasy novel set in a Harry Potter-like universe was something I didn't know I needed in my life. With a slow burn harem romance, likable support characters, cool magic duels, lovely slice of life scenes, and 800+ chapters, this novel will keep me busy for some time. The only thing I'm not a fan of so far is the double personality thing going on around 140 chapters in. Not really comfortable with an adult romance novel where there's an alternative version of the MC inside of him. That alternative version kissing Luna and seeing Emma naked (and Emma knowing it and being disappointed he told her to get dressed), is kind of bothering me. Hopefully this isn't the way it seems to be or gets resolved in later chapters, because I'll be honest, it is putting a damper on an otherwise very enjoyable novel.
ネタバレを明かす This one is great! Highly recommend. 10/10 It is aimed at about 13-16YOA audience.
I gotta write a second review since the first one is like a year ago and i was at chapter 150 or smth then. Now we are over 800 and man it is still amazing to read every day. We got really good charakter development, world building (+fun connections to some more novels, which you should also read) and some more than enjoyable plots and twists (some still need to be resolved and more will follow for sure). Its so good it has become part of my daily life to read 2 chapters after work (update stability is still insane). You can even get it as a Book from amazon. If you still havent started this Book and you read this just start it already. I personally like it even more than Harry Potter by now. <3 Keep up the amazing work Author. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
I’m going to rate this book now cause so far it’s a good book amazing word is created. This book is amazing so far a lot of funny references to tv shows, video games an real work keep up the brilliant writing please 🙏🏾
Esta buena es atrapante te va llevando lentamente y es una lectura atrapante interesante emocionantes me gusto
this story is not Elyon at his best but Elyon at his most. decent read to pass time
beautiful and nicely written should make for non stop reading and the character is well represented
ネタバレを明かす This is a good novel which seems to have taken drawn lot of inspirations from" Yamada kun an the seven witches" anime and Harry Potter... I do became curious how the development would go considering how some parts became close to be called "plagiarism", but then also I continued , gonna be honest, it was good, very good...i can say my time was well spent[img=recommend]
Dude are you always ill?!?!? Every two chapters you come down with something 😅😅
This review probably wont be able to give this amazing story justice but I will try my best. While every novel from Elyon is outstanding I think this is his best work yet. The story features wizards and with the school system you will get reminded of harry potter but the novel is unique and has its own charme. As every novel from Elyon the mc has a sad past and doesnt start as the strongest. Dont make the mistake to be impatient and give it some time, the story progression is very well written and the mc slowly develops into a powerhouse. Writing quality is superb as always, all of the characters, not just mc and heroines but also the side characters have interesting personalities and get proper development. Elyon knows like no other author how to play with his readers emotions but the ending is always a happy one. The different arcs have great pacing and are always exciting. I want to highlight the Nexus arc which is the best one I have ever read in any novel. The magic battles are a joy to read and the story never gets boring. Some fan favourite characters from other Elyon novels make small appearances in a way where they blend perfectly into the story. I highly recommend anyone who likes fantasy + romance and doesnt mind harem to read this masterpiece. I cant praise it enough and im very sad that the novel is about to end. Heres hoping for Wizard World Irregular-Forgotten Shores in 2026 or 2027 🙏