The Rakshas Apocalypse

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Chase_Xavier_123

Like indian mythology this is the book for you. Writing Quality- Great I can't find faults with it. The chapters are long 1st pov is used very well. The author is also knowledgeable about the indian mythology. Story Development - It is slow not rushed at all in the first two chapter but you understand what's going on as we first get to know the Mc's normal life which is not quite normal since he is the popular guy. But All of sudden we get these Raksha and Indian mythology which we were there for. The mythology element is...I love it. I can't put in words how much I love it. Character Design - Mc is kinda "I know i am great catch type", but he is a teen quite normal for him to be that way. Would love to see you add other characters and gods. Adi is a great friend though football and chess at the same time. God knows if his surname is Sharma Updating stability - Quite great I am satisfied with the quality of chapter so I am ready to wait for future chapter. 🥺 World background - That's the best part of this novel it has the element of action, supernatural, mystery, indian mythology. I love the kali yuga references and other reference. There is really nothing I can put my finger to find fault on. I will be waiting for the upcoming action scene between the Students and the rakshasa. As it will be the writers challenge. Good luck 👍

LV 11

BongoHead

Who doesn't enjoy diving into the realm of mythological stories? I've come across countless manhua/manwha with cultivation themes and manga featuring Chinese or Egyptian references. However, the current chapters that explore Indian Mythology have been truly captivating. It's refreshing to witness such a great story unfold. I can't help but imagine how wonderful it would be if the author had some sort of real-life system to release daily chapters. That way, we could savor this amazing narrative on a regular basis."

LV 2

Jokerbud

Awesome! I gotta say that this novel has a lot of potential! I would suggest the author to phrase his sentences and improve his grammar a bit. The Hindhu Mythology is a wide and interesting topic, I'm happy that someone is writing an entire novel based on that as even Omniscient Readers viewpoint only had a small part of Hindhu mythology. The one thing I would suggest the author is to translate the Sanskrit dialogues completely into English since most of the western readers can't understand it.

LV 3

LordShivaStories

I will just give the photo of the three rakshas, so yeah just going to write random things which can allow me to give the review so yep yeah I know. First rakshasa photo

LV 3

Sweet_xiyue

As a new author the story is quite interesting as i told i love zombies. I can see a potential in you. Although there can be improvement in both the grammar and spelling. other than that it's quite good.keep it up.

LV 3

sleepingpeacefully

A well written book with good ideas and I really like it based on the hindu myths and hoping to read more .

LV 3

Nuno_Sineiro

too early to day much.. but promising 1st chap.. looking forward for the rest

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mahe_ale_aba

the indian mythology description had me hooked its beautifully written as i am from east asian side i know this well keep it up cant wait for more chapters[img=recommend]

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theword_witch

A good read for any mythology reader. Simply put its hindu mythology meets anime, it has something for all the readers to relate to. It has potential to be great if the writing is a little dramatic and intense for certain parts. Since, this combination isn't common the readers will have high expectations... Keep updating

LV 1

MidsummerDaybreak

Well then. To tell the truth, this story was surprisingly good. It has a potential from its premise. The pace is not too fast either. Now the lacking part is the execution of the idea. If I can say, the narrative is lacking in description and too casual. You need to put a difference between the narratives and dialogues to make the story more beautiful. As for the characters, well, honestly, I can't find anything to make them stand out and they also seem to lack emotions. Perhaps you can develop the characters more to make them more charming and interesting. Wishing you a pleasant journey :)

LV 11

Mi_22

This will be a short review. So far from reading the first chapter, all I can say is, it holds a huge potential. It has solid characters, good pace and ends with a good cliffhanger. And the mythological elements also blended well within the chapter. Will be keeping tabs on it and post a detailed review once I get to read other chapters.

LV 3

Perfect_praize

The book has a great start. I will definitely stick around.

LV 3

chaoswalker_7

I may not be a fan of Indian fantasy but I admit that this novel is amazing. The attention to detail in description of Indian tradition is gorgeous. It deserves the five stars.

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mahe_ale_aba

very beautiful story. the description is amazing as well as the narrations I r enjoy aditays character and chapter 5 has to be my fav chapter in the whole book good job

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OldNispy

This is a very very cool and new take on the apocalypse theme. The writing is OK and the characters have personalities. Good job author

LV 2

Idyllic_Scribe

For a new author and book, it has a pretty safe start. I think that there is definitely potential. I think that the grammar is very good. Very good so far!

LV 5

ShadexRay

Alright, this novel has a lot of untapped potential. Incorporating the Indian Mythological figures gives a refreshing view and taste. I'm sure the readers will find it interesting and unique. My only slight qualm is that the writing quality could be improved, albeit slightly and almost negligible. Also, it would be great if you could translate the Hindi/Sanskrit dialogues into English to well-accommodate the readers. The pace is neither too fast nor too slow. The characters could be better described in terms of emotions, appearances and action. But, keep up the good work, author!

LV 13

Avidfan

This story has positive energy. It is about a hero and his best friend that are selected as heroes. While it is still early to say how the world story develop, but this has promises of being a great story.

LV 4

Valentine_24

I have always been a fantasy fan but I gotta say this book has a lot of potential. The setting is great and the illustrations too.

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MeowMeowGourmet

This is the first time I've come across a story with a premise as this one and I'm liking it. Syntax and grammar can be improved but other than that, the story is great. So far, it has just the right amount of action and anticipation going on that makes one read on. I kinda want to see it darker tho, with more action and gore😭