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I suggest the author to go pass a tenth grade English class. The grammer is clunky and doesn’t feel at all right. Its robotic and lacks the soul of most other storys. Fix the grammer and everything else is pretty good for webnovels standards.
The book is amazing....I found it interesting and I love his use of words. The book is very easy to understand since I couldn't detect any lack of punctuations or wrong grammars. Well done author 👍
Good job author!!! The story is intriguing and well equipped with details.The plots are so well written! Good job author!!! The story is intriguing and well equipped with details.The plots are so well written!
i think the way the writer wrote the book is really wonderful, I love the descriptions the writer gave of the characters that makes your imagination to run wild, Starting from the first chapter 😅... The plot is really good too and I think the writer did a good job and should keep up with it👍👍
This is just pure gold if you don't mind a few grammar mistakes which no one minds if the story is great. Amazing concept and execution. The plot is just amazing, no words. Just keep updating author.
After tons of garbage finally found a decend novel! I thought it would be a typical novel, but this is not your usual medieval fantasy novel! It is an intricately woven tale that skillfully merges action and suspense with world building. The author has real world building skill. I thought I was in the world reading the novel. The character development is exceptional, the narrative gripping, and the world-building is out of this world!
I can call you a descriptive pro. the description of the novel are in point and it give the real a visual understand. Well done Author. I am not really in System genre but this story is engrossing and interesting. And I love the characters name.
From the very first page, it was clear that the author had a firm grip on the English language. The grammar was impeccable, which made for a smooth and easy reading experience. The updates were timely, and it was obvious that the author took great care in ensuring that the story flowed seamlessly.
i really enjoyed reading the first 5 chapters and i think im gonna read all of the chapters today. great story and great main character. this author knows how to write about adventure/fantasy series i highly recommend to read this amazing book.
I really enjoyed chapters for now and can't wait for new ones. It has Great Mc and great power system so you'll never get bored and thats not all. I suggest reading this asap.
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Did the author stop with this work? I arrived recently and I really liked it... I hope you play this work again, as there is a lot of room for growth. As for criticism, don't take it too much to heart, as dealing with the public is very difficult.
I suggest the author to go pass a tenth grade English class. The grammer is clunky and doesn’t feel at all right. Its robotic and lacks the soul of most other storys. Fix the grammer and everything else is pretty good for webnovels standards.
The book is amazing....I found it interesting and I love his use of words. The book is very easy to understand since I couldn't detect any lack of punctuations or wrong grammars. Well done author 👍
Good job author!!! The story is intriguing and well equipped with details.The plots are so well written! Good job author!!! The story is intriguing and well equipped with details.The plots are so well written!
i think the way the writer wrote the book is really wonderful, I love the descriptions the writer gave of the characters that makes your imagination to run wild, Starting from the first chapter 😅... The plot is really good too and I think the writer did a good job and should keep up with it👍👍
This is just pure gold if you don't mind a few grammar mistakes which no one minds if the story is great. Amazing concept and execution. The plot is just amazing, no words. Just keep updating author.
After tons of garbage finally found a decend novel! I thought it would be a typical novel, but this is not your usual medieval fantasy novel! It is an intricately woven tale that skillfully merges action and suspense with world building. The author has real world building skill. I thought I was in the world reading the novel. The character development is exceptional, the narrative gripping, and the world-building is out of this world!
I can call you a descriptive pro. the description of the novel are in point and it give the real a visual understand. Well done Author. I am not really in System genre but this story is engrossing and interesting. And I love the characters name.
From the very first page, it was clear that the author had a firm grip on the English language. The grammar was impeccable, which made for a smooth and easy reading experience. The updates were timely, and it was obvious that the author took great care in ensuring that the story flowed seamlessly.
i really enjoyed reading the first 5 chapters and i think im gonna read all of the chapters today. great story and great main character. this author knows how to write about adventure/fantasy series i highly recommend to read this amazing book.
I really enjoyed chapters for now and can't wait for new ones. It has Great Mc and great power system so you'll never get bored and thats not all. I suggest reading this asap.
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Did the author stop with this work? I arrived recently and I really liked it... I hope you play this work again, as there is a lot of room for growth. As for criticism, don't take it too much to heart, as dealing with the public is very difficult.