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for me it is diamond if story goes as it is being developed with the way things are unfortunately the update are slow for me still hope that it would go on
anyone who dont know this novel is the copy of "journey of the fate destroying emperor" and i dont think it is better than that in any way so please read the original if possible.
I won't put a rating below 4 stars because I haven't read more than a few chapters, but after seeing a being of origin die randomly and it looks like the next arc will be in the lower dimension we can already imagine that it will be the most cliche of all
author have you dropped all your novel, I want to know before I start reading it after all I don't want to read some incomplete story
Overall Everything is Good for now that is at least for me I do hope author read this comment as I want to say is that please do make mc use all his abilities in a useful way because currently he is too OP literally like final boss so rather then going around like some protagonists for finding opportunities to grow in power he should sit in high place and do the manipulating the final boss or villain does . There are lot of ways he can message with protagonists that appears like creating systems for specially that hates those protagonists like 2nd or 3rd rate villain give them opportunities so that they fight protagonists something like that and upgrade his family background to top level and they only listen to him as he keeps his eyes around his maids so that they get opportunity and get stronger and of some hidden people try to something to his plans he would kill them from behind and he can even create clone or something overall I want to say is if he is always in spotlight and people will keep coming to him for messing with him because they don't know his powers at that point it will literally become "slice of life" type story like where mc keep on face slapping while people keep on coming to him as we all know face slapping where mc literally gets into fight with anyone even beggar what I want to say is As mc here is op and like final boss so he should behave like one not go around the world and look for secret realms like protagonists does in typical storyline so they can get stronger.....Well this is just from my prospective hope author you do some think on wether my suggestion is right or wrong it's completely up to you to take it after if in later the novel transform into face slapping novel then I would have no choice but to drop it because I am too tired of slice of life or face slapping novels lately
Hey Author, what did you decide for the mother? 😉 I have a GREAT SUGGESTION, 😊 Just make the mc's mother virgin, now there is a question of how she gave birth. Just say the mc's father has a physique which can't get close to women, which was solved after the mc birth after the father improved his cultivation(or not solved if you want). So the mc's mother took three fruits to give birth to the three children(or smth like that)🙏 I'm sure everyone will be satisfied with it.🤤 If you have have already added the mother to the harem, Then PLEASE change the mother character setting when she was introduced. And, if you have not, then please change the character setting and add her to the harem. EVERYONE WILL LOVE THIS SETTING (I think)👍👍 Lastly, I LOVE this work of yours. Hope you consider my suggestion.
I've just read 18 chapters but I can already the cycle of MC showing off, the Sons of Heaven being humiliated, and the Women being infatuated with him. worst is that I thought he will be a normal being in terms of personality but no, he became a person that just do whatever he wants without any reason just to satiate his boredom, no character development, one moment he's just an average man that has an average life the next he becomes something like an inferior version of Dr. Manhattan who will dabble on some useless matters. I'll keep reading to see if the mc has some wake up call and finally become a decent human being again but it most likely won't happen
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Uma história muito boa, no entanto, por se tratar de um protagonista extremamente poderoso desde o início, muitas pessoas podem não curtir a história. Entretanto, eu amo esses tipos de protagonista!
Perfect for my taste,and those who think like he should be hung up on one woman you are stupid. He is mc and there is no mention of FL cuz they are all just his women not female leds and He is omnipotent and he can get as many women as he wants author is man of culture
por dios, es todo lo que odio de los mc creidos, me gusta los mc chetados pero mas como li qiye que no andan presumiendo a distra y siniestra los guapo que son, que tiene los ojos del color del origen del mundo, y lo repite a cada rato, es tan guapo que los hombres le quieren dar como a cajon que no cierra, bueno es lo que obtienes de darle a un niño de 18 años el poder absoluto, dice que esta perdiendo sus sentimientos pero se enoja con cualquier cosa. dios que horror. me gustaria que sea sin sentimientos como saitama, que rara vez muesta emociones fuertes.
novel ini bagus, saya juga punya rekomendasi novel fantasi sihir bahasa Indonesia "Kehidupan Bebas dari Yang Mahakuasa (Indonesia Version)"
Brother, can you free all chapters so I can read them all I don't have money to buy coin and unlock it🥺🥺🥲
a great novel but not everyone's cup of tea, here you are not going to see the pov of the main character and that he always do things, when he himself enters, everything ends with des*truc*tion and de*at*h.The upload schedule has been regular for three months and I did not encounter grammatical problems
I love ultimate OP main characters and this novel fits perfectly! I recommend to all
storyline is good and some different from similar storyline nowadays, mc temperament is good . this review is from reading first released chapters may my changes in further chapters but the way this novel is progressing i think further chapters will be very good. waiting for more chapters.
Completely unrelated to the story and a completely random thought: Whenever a mc falls in love or is interested in a women and he makes it verbal he is termed as SIMP , this just kills good romance . All these ppl complain uselessly for everything and that make him seem pathetic . Becoz these ppl are ok with mc sleeping with every curvy woman with a good face and let the mc call it as a one time thing and act all emotionless and edgy . But has anyone ever thought how it would be - A romance between a edgy and cold mc who only shows his feelings to a single woman and she responds similarly . (U stupid's will call it as mc being simp and kill the romance anyways , Coz all u guys need is " mc treats woman like tools for pleasure release and woman go crazy due to it " . But that is the true definition of simp - a man who drools and lusts for every single woman , even if he gives grand excuses and his attitude is cool and edgy .) All authors write harem coz they want to keep u guys reeled in and invested in the PLOT ( Mc making different types of woman his property and not a single one has a fully flushed personality . All woman will have a single label and will follow it down to a T. Like a tsundere always keep rejecting his advances even though mc already done the deed . A cold beauty always becomes loose both in the head and below when mc is in the vicinity . Almost all of them will be overprotective and obsessive of him , and after mc is introduced they will lose their own life , fate and story. The woman are just a part of mc , i.e. , they are tailored into his story and are always available for him no matter how important of a position they can be in ) BTW GOOD NOVEL AUTHOR IS A 3.5 STARS FOR ME , BECAUSE I AM STRINGENT WITH THE RATINGS , DONT MIND ME . I WANTED TO VENT MY FRUSTRATIONS WITH THE READERS .
Bro I love his OP starting.But still please give him worthy opponents.If he can see through and destroy everything there won't be much fun..... Add some: (just suggestions)✓ mysteriosus girls/goddess charecters✓ Another hidden identity (clone?) with low power.(else can't see others true face)✓ great lovely harem. yandre is good but can't cross line.✓ plot twists✓ Yet adventure another multiverse. Great job anyway.keep up.
Love the book, but I have a potentially suggestion for the ending (don’t worry about it if you have plans). Maybe he grows on power, and the book ends off with him entering the main reality, but immediately cuts off the moment he enters as the author (people like you) can’t actually affect the humans of Earth. Idk, thought it would be cool. (And if he does, making him bring the girls too). Either way, thanks for your time
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I love everything about it and the top thing is there is a yandere or multiple obsessive girls😍
Novel is very good. Mc is overpowered and domineering and the harem has good women in it. World building is well thought out and the power system is easy to understand. Writing is decent and updates are consistent.
This novel is BS ngl I expected more not the same thing we see on webnovel everytime MC is op but doesn’t have any sense at all Instead of him to travel around multiverse Create worlds or new races,do something new he first decided to take revenge I’m really disappointed
Well, after 120 chapters I finally decided to write a review, I don't have anything special to say except that the first ten chapters are really garbage and if I had a chance, I would re-write them again, but unfortunately I can't, apart from that, I think the novel is not bad and can be considered at average level and acceptable, cough cough, anyway if you have any questions please ask
for me it is diamond if story goes as it is being developed with the way things are unfortunately the update are slow for me still hope that it would go on
anyone who dont know this novel is the copy of "journey of the fate destroying emperor" and i dont think it is better than that in any way so please read the original if possible.
I won't put a rating below 4 stars because I haven't read more than a few chapters, but after seeing a being of origin die randomly and it looks like the next arc will be in the lower dimension we can already imagine that it will be the most cliche of all
author have you dropped all your novel, I want to know before I start reading it after all I don't want to read some incomplete story
Overall Everything is Good for now that is at least for me I do hope author read this comment as I want to say is that please do make mc use all his abilities in a useful way because currently he is too OP literally like final boss so rather then going around like some protagonists for finding opportunities to grow in power he should sit in high place and do the manipulating the final boss or villain does . There are lot of ways he can message with protagonists that appears like creating systems for specially that hates those protagonists like 2nd or 3rd rate villain give them opportunities so that they fight protagonists something like that and upgrade his family background to top level and they only listen to him as he keeps his eyes around his maids so that they get opportunity and get stronger and of some hidden people try to something to his plans he would kill them from behind and he can even create clone or something overall I want to say is if he is always in spotlight and people will keep coming to him for messing with him because they don't know his powers at that point it will literally become "slice of life" type story like where mc keep on face slapping while people keep on coming to him as we all know face slapping where mc literally gets into fight with anyone even beggar what I want to say is As mc here is op and like final boss so he should behave like one not go around the world and look for secret realms like protagonists does in typical storyline so they can get stronger.....Well this is just from my prospective hope author you do some think on wether my suggestion is right or wrong it's completely up to you to take it after if in later the novel transform into face slapping novel then I would have no choice but to drop it because I am too tired of slice of life or face slapping novels lately
Hey Author, what did you decide for the mother? 😉 I have a GREAT SUGGESTION, 😊 Just make the mc's mother virgin, now there is a question of how she gave birth. Just say the mc's father has a physique which can't get close to women, which was solved after the mc birth after the father improved his cultivation(or not solved if you want). So the mc's mother took three fruits to give birth to the three children(or smth like that)🙏 I'm sure everyone will be satisfied with it.🤤 If you have have already added the mother to the harem, Then PLEASE change the mother character setting when she was introduced. And, if you have not, then please change the character setting and add her to the harem. EVERYONE WILL LOVE THIS SETTING (I think)👍👍 Lastly, I LOVE this work of yours. Hope you consider my suggestion.
I've just read 18 chapters but I can already the cycle of MC showing off, the Sons of Heaven being humiliated, and the Women being infatuated with him. worst is that I thought he will be a normal being in terms of personality but no, he became a person that just do whatever he wants without any reason just to satiate his boredom, no character development, one moment he's just an average man that has an average life the next he becomes something like an inferior version of Dr. Manhattan who will dabble on some useless matters. I'll keep reading to see if the mc has some wake up call and finally become a decent human being again but it most likely won't happen
ネタバレを明かす Uma história muito boa, no entanto, por se tratar de um protagonista extremamente poderoso desde o início, muitas pessoas podem não curtir a história. Entretanto, eu amo esses tipos de protagonista!
Perfect for my taste,and those who think like he should be hung up on one woman you are stupid. He is mc and there is no mention of FL cuz they are all just his women not female leds and He is omnipotent and he can get as many women as he wants author is man of culture
por dios, es todo lo que odio de los mc creidos, me gusta los mc chetados pero mas como li qiye que no andan presumiendo a distra y siniestra los guapo que son, que tiene los ojos del color del origen del mundo, y lo repite a cada rato, es tan guapo que los hombres le quieren dar como a cajon que no cierra, bueno es lo que obtienes de darle a un niño de 18 años el poder absoluto, dice que esta perdiendo sus sentimientos pero se enoja con cualquier cosa. dios que horror. me gustaria que sea sin sentimientos como saitama, que rara vez muesta emociones fuertes.
novel ini bagus, saya juga punya rekomendasi novel fantasi sihir bahasa Indonesia "Kehidupan Bebas dari Yang Mahakuasa (Indonesia Version)"
Brother, can you free all chapters so I can read them all I don't have money to buy coin and unlock it🥺🥺🥲
a great novel but not everyone's cup of tea, here you are not going to see the pov of the main character and that he always do things, when he himself enters, everything ends with des*truc*tion and de*at*h.The upload schedule has been regular for three months and I did not encounter grammatical problems
I love ultimate OP main characters and this novel fits perfectly! I recommend to all
storyline is good and some different from similar storyline nowadays, mc temperament is good . this review is from reading first released chapters may my changes in further chapters but the way this novel is progressing i think further chapters will be very good. waiting for more chapters.
Completely unrelated to the story and a completely random thought: Whenever a mc falls in love or is interested in a women and he makes it verbal he is termed as SIMP , this just kills good romance . All these ppl complain uselessly for everything and that make him seem pathetic . Becoz these ppl are ok with mc sleeping with every curvy woman with a good face and let the mc call it as a one time thing and act all emotionless and edgy . But has anyone ever thought how it would be - A romance between a edgy and cold mc who only shows his feelings to a single woman and she responds similarly . (U stupid's will call it as mc being simp and kill the romance anyways , Coz all u guys need is " mc treats woman like tools for pleasure release and woman go crazy due to it " . But that is the true definition of simp - a man who drools and lusts for every single woman , even if he gives grand excuses and his attitude is cool and edgy .) All authors write harem coz they want to keep u guys reeled in and invested in the PLOT ( Mc making different types of woman his property and not a single one has a fully flushed personality . All woman will have a single label and will follow it down to a T. Like a tsundere always keep rejecting his advances even though mc already done the deed . A cold beauty always becomes loose both in the head and below when mc is in the vicinity . Almost all of them will be overprotective and obsessive of him , and after mc is introduced they will lose their own life , fate and story. The woman are just a part of mc , i.e. , they are tailored into his story and are always available for him no matter how important of a position they can be in ) BTW GOOD NOVEL AUTHOR IS A 3.5 STARS FOR ME , BECAUSE I AM STRINGENT WITH THE RATINGS , DONT MIND ME . I WANTED TO VENT MY FRUSTRATIONS WITH THE READERS .
Bro I love his OP starting.But still please give him worthy opponents.If he can see through and destroy everything there won't be much fun..... Add some: (just suggestions)✓ mysteriosus girls/goddess charecters✓ Another hidden identity (clone?) with low power.(else can't see others true face)✓ great lovely harem. yandre is good but can't cross line.✓ plot twists✓ Yet adventure another multiverse. Great job anyway.keep up.
Love the book, but I have a potentially suggestion for the ending (don’t worry about it if you have plans). Maybe he grows on power, and the book ends off with him entering the main reality, but immediately cuts off the moment he enters as the author (people like you) can’t actually affect the humans of Earth. Idk, thought it would be cool. (And if he does, making him bring the girls too). Either way, thanks for your time
ネタバレを明かす I love everything about it and the top thing is there is a yandere or multiple obsessive girls😍
Novel is very good. Mc is overpowered and domineering and the harem has good women in it. World building is well thought out and the power system is easy to understand. Writing is decent and updates are consistent.
This novel is BS ngl I expected more not the same thing we see on webnovel everytime MC is op but doesn’t have any sense at all Instead of him to travel around multiverse Create worlds or new races,do something new he first decided to take revenge I’m really disappointed
Well, after 120 chapters I finally decided to write a review, I don't have anything special to say except that the first ten chapters are really garbage and if I had a chance, I would re-write them again, but unfortunately I can't, apart from that, I think the novel is not bad and can be considered at average level and acceptable, cough cough, anyway if you have any questions please ask