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mariano_caria

Estaba muy genial aunque el final fue muy flojo y podías alargarse con otra temática como por ejemplo un viaje por el multiverso o con un reclutamiento para una batalla de ese ser misterioso ya que dejaste muchas incógnitas como sus padres y porque fue enviado no hay comida gratis

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EqPartsBraveNFool

This was a welcomed ending to s fun tale. HP portions might have been trivialized after Nick left Hogwarts and untl his decade of being rumblestilskin-like. Nice that Nick settled down, reversed rhelm'd and met the Zeus and Hades bookends to the story. Seems all tied up. Seems like the author grew and enjoyed writing it until it got stretched out a bit. zworth every power stone!!!

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Acronn
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absolutely a gem, i started reading it about a year ago but had to stop for personal reasons. picked it back up 2 days ago and destroyed all 621 chapters and got incredibly sad it ended for me. author is a learning god and if that doesnt say a lot then IDK WHAT WILL. ily author

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pratikp1

The story is trying to do too much. While I enjoyed the beginning, the author forgot that there were characters in the story. Instead of using those characters, the system took over at some point and the story got abandoned.

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Frozen_Wolf68

One of the best HP stories I've had the pleasure of reading thank you for writing this story

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DaoistXd0ETs

one of the best fanfictions about HP that i have read

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David5amuel

I read every single chapter. Quite the interesting twist as far as a Harry Potter fanfic is concerned. Without spoiling the story too much, it was a rather gripping story with its lows and highs. The ending was rather... mundane, to say the least. However I don't regret reading it one bit.

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NeptuneMerce

Honestly worth the read. Overall a quite enjoyable ride!

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DaoistxUHgot

The author Notes say everything.mmmmmmmmmmmmm

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Bertinho_Gamer

total garbage. dont know why so many people read this. your neurons must be burnt. bro's the admin son trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash

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Jisus_Praint_9100

Es una de las mejores historias de que e leído

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Ashton_Denton

I really enjoyed it I started reading it along time ago but stoped dew to it being incomplete but I decided to re listen to it from the start The tags of this story that I would add #op mc #strong to stronger #gray mc #system

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Sandwich08

It's a pretty good story that is fun to read, spoiler but after a point the ring making portion of the story gets written out. Still a good story to read and pass the time 👍

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Oceanbrezze

This book is the perfect combination of system talent date and blood line Yet without his hard work he would have nothing Live suffer learn ascend -ave vale vateque velvette

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Shadow_GOD_21

just an old fan that found the origin for this story.

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aziz_ba
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I really liked reading this fanfic and the author is really good to the point I was reading all his other fanfics without even realizing it lol

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Heitor_Santos_5475

Muito bom adorei o personagem principal

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Ivykitsune

I loved it it. it took. Me like 38 hours to read.

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TylerTheFish

An enjoyable read that left me satisfied. While it has its share of grammatical errors, they werent't as detrimental as some fan fics I've read. If I could have asked for anything, it would have been less magical theory and more interpersonal interactions. The Author states that the end is rushed, but despite that the ending didnt't leave a bitter aftertaste in my mouth like so many others.

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viktor_seger

It was a very good story and that flowed very smoothly and the characters are very nice and almost complete.

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Emu_Lator

Pretty decent read, also completed already so no wait time. But im honestly not a fan of the writing style. I found myself skipping several paragraphs, if not entire chapters at a time as i found a lot of the narration boring. For me the real interesting bits are usually the conversations and dialogues, and author skipping a lot of those felt rather disappointing. Regarding the plot, i felt near the end, it lost its essence by having all sorts of stuff like zanpaktou and nen. While i understood the idea, infelt the author could have maybe NOT go into too much detail about them and rather add them to the story as either a side plot or main focus. Lets just say the execution was rather lacking. Finally it kind of felt weird having chapters so short but at least the work was complete and ended

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James_Lozano

This was an amazing book and an amazing read. I hope more readers will read this book and enjoy it like I did.

5mth
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Holy_Hunter

What is L + ratio? L + ratio is used as a mocking insult on social media, often in reply to a post or opinion considered particularly bad. The letter L is used as a slang term for loss (as in the opposite of win). The word ratio is used in its social media sense referring to a situation in which a post has a high proportion of replies compared to likes or reposts, which usually indicates a barrage of negative replies criticizing and often mocking the post.

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TTsurvival

Bit slow and a slog to get trough but a great story that is almost completely worth it if you pace yourself instead of reading the entire thing in one go like myself, other than that a bit complicated to understand and a bit rushed ending compared to the rest, but again good. All in all I’d give it a 9.4/10.

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Orion_Handy

Love the story and I hope you post audio book versions of all of your stories

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Gyro_Zepplie

Greta, wonderful just amazing. have dedicated my summer to reading this multiple times

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the_SCP_Foundation

One of the 2 best books I’ve read out of the THOUSANDS, I’ve read, that is not an exaggerated number and those are just the ones I could count, read it, seriously, don’t let this author leave. 11/5

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DaoistWsow5U

125 chapters and it’s not even done with the 1st year and the story keeps getting derailed . I hope it get better but over 100 chapters and year one is not done? Horrible pacing

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mariano_caria

Estaba muy genial aunque el final fue muy flojo y podías alargarse con otra temática como por ejemplo un viaje por el multiverso o con un reclutamiento para una batalla de ese ser misterioso ya que dejaste muchas incógnitas como sus padres y porque fue enviado no hay comida gratis

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EqPartsBraveNFool

This was a welcomed ending to s fun tale. HP portions might have been trivialized after Nick left Hogwarts and untl his decade of being rumblestilskin-like. Nice that Nick settled down, reversed rhelm'd and met the Zeus and Hades bookends to the story. Seems all tied up. Seems like the author grew and enjoyed writing it until it got stretched out a bit. zworth every power stone!!!

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Acronn
LV 14 Badge

absolutely a gem, i started reading it about a year ago but had to stop for personal reasons. picked it back up 2 days ago and destroyed all 621 chapters and got incredibly sad it ended for me. author is a learning god and if that doesnt say a lot then IDK WHAT WILL. ily author

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pratikp1

The story is trying to do too much. While I enjoyed the beginning, the author forgot that there were characters in the story. Instead of using those characters, the system took over at some point and the story got abandoned.

1mth
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Frozen_Wolf68

One of the best HP stories I've had the pleasure of reading thank you for writing this story

1mth
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DaoistXd0ETs

one of the best fanfictions about HP that i have read

1mth
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David5amuel

I read every single chapter. Quite the interesting twist as far as a Harry Potter fanfic is concerned. Without spoiling the story too much, it was a rather gripping story with its lows and highs. The ending was rather... mundane, to say the least. However I don't regret reading it one bit.

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1mth
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NeptuneMerce

Honestly worth the read. Overall a quite enjoyable ride!

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DaoistxUHgot

The author Notes say everything.mmmmmmmmmmmmm

2mth
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Bertinho_Gamer

total garbage. dont know why so many people read this. your neurons must be burnt. bro's the admin son trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash

2mth
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Jisus_Praint_9100

Es una de las mejores historias de que e leído

3mth
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Ashton_Denton

I really enjoyed it I started reading it along time ago but stoped dew to it being incomplete but I decided to re listen to it from the start The tags of this story that I would add #op mc #strong to stronger #gray mc #system

3mth
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Sandwich08

It's a pretty good story that is fun to read, spoiler but after a point the ring making portion of the story gets written out. Still a good story to read and pass the time 👍

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3mth
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Oceanbrezze

This book is the perfect combination of system talent date and blood line Yet without his hard work he would have nothing Live suffer learn ascend -ave vale vateque velvette

3mth
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Shadow_GOD_21

just an old fan that found the origin for this story.

3mth
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aziz_ba
LV 14 Badge

I really liked reading this fanfic and the author is really good to the point I was reading all his other fanfics without even realizing it lol

3mth
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Heitor_Santos_5475

Muito bom adorei o personagem principal

4mth
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Ivykitsune

I loved it it. it took. Me like 38 hours to read.

4mth
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TylerTheFish

An enjoyable read that left me satisfied. While it has its share of grammatical errors, they werent't as detrimental as some fan fics I've read. If I could have asked for anything, it would have been less magical theory and more interpersonal interactions. The Author states that the end is rushed, but despite that the ending didnt't leave a bitter aftertaste in my mouth like so many others.

4mth
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viktor_seger

It was a very good story and that flowed very smoothly and the characters are very nice and almost complete.

4mth
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Emu_Lator

Pretty decent read, also completed already so no wait time. But im honestly not a fan of the writing style. I found myself skipping several paragraphs, if not entire chapters at a time as i found a lot of the narration boring. For me the real interesting bits are usually the conversations and dialogues, and author skipping a lot of those felt rather disappointing. Regarding the plot, i felt near the end, it lost its essence by having all sorts of stuff like zanpaktou and nen. While i understood the idea, infelt the author could have maybe NOT go into too much detail about them and rather add them to the story as either a side plot or main focus. Lets just say the execution was rather lacking. Finally it kind of felt weird having chapters so short but at least the work was complete and ended

4mth
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James_Lozano

This was an amazing book and an amazing read. I hope more readers will read this book and enjoy it like I did.

5mth
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Holy_Hunter

What is L + ratio? L + ratio is used as a mocking insult on social media, often in reply to a post or opinion considered particularly bad. The letter L is used as a slang term for loss (as in the opposite of win). The word ratio is used in its social media sense referring to a situation in which a post has a high proportion of replies compared to likes or reposts, which usually indicates a barrage of negative replies criticizing and often mocking the post.

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TTsurvival

Bit slow and a slog to get trough but a great story that is almost completely worth it if you pace yourself instead of reading the entire thing in one go like myself, other than that a bit complicated to understand and a bit rushed ending compared to the rest, but again good. All in all I’d give it a 9.4/10.

5mth
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Orion_Handy

Love the story and I hope you post audio book versions of all of your stories

5mth
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Gyro_Zepplie

Greta, wonderful just amazing. have dedicated my summer to reading this multiple times

5mth
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the_SCP_Foundation

One of the 2 best books I’ve read out of the THOUSANDS, I’ve read, that is not an exaggerated number and those are just the ones I could count, read it, seriously, don’t let this author leave. 11/5

5mth
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DaoistWsow5U

125 chapters and it’s not even done with the 1st year and the story keeps getting derailed . I hope it get better but over 100 chapters and year one is not done? Horrible pacing

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