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Dying in a truck accident Levi wakes up to find himself in a completely new world, so different from his own and yet so familiar, the world of "Avatar The last airbender"
Will he survive and thrive in this new world and climb the leader of power or will he fall down and be forgotten like countless people before him
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If you like my story and you're interested in reading more you can read 28 advanced chapters on patreon
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Note: I will also be uploading this fanfiction on royalroad
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I really love Atla fics however, I hate when people make fics and add unreasonable elements (pun-intended) to them. Time and space bending... NO. with that aside, you need to go through your chapters and fix the spelling mistakes. I understand English might not be your primary language, but you can use grammerly or even AI (not for all sentences tho). Hold yourself to some standards my man.
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Am the author so my review will certainly be biased but I really think this book deserves a 5 stars review, my opinion at least, I put a lot of time and effort into it and made sure to smooth Any rough edges, plus I learned from my previous 2 books and applied my experience here. So I hope you enjoy it.
summoning system .... in Avatar ... it is all right, but in chapter 22 onwards ... soo many bad changes in sistem i cant read it more. add system store - soooooo bad man, but fine But the summoning system is really unfair, and the author still says, "Don't worry, if I summon Madara, he will be limited by the world's constraints." Sorry, did you actually read Avatar to understand what the supreme power of an Avatar is? Man, it's at least Kage level, and I'm being generous. After all, leveling mountains with hand gestures (I'm not even talking about the spirits' powers, which aren't limited by human Avatars) is no joke. The only reason we don't see such monsters in the story is because bending requires time for enlightenment, and humans die quickly. Now, imagine a Kage-level being roaming the Avatar world. That guy is practically a god.
Great story… but takes too long for updates otherwise the rating would be higher
I just like the book so I decided to write a review, just wish updates weren't so slow.
Boring writing style with constant melodramatic monologues that go absolutely nowhere. Borderline AI like in how over-dramatic it is.
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If I'm honest, the dialogues and narrative of this story have a lot of room for improvement. It is quite noticeable that this novel was written by a novice writer. Another VERY critical point is the rate of updates. It would be great if it were updated at least twice a week, otherwise with the random chapter updates I highly doubt that a new reader will stay to read this novel no matter how much they like it. My recommendation for the author is to read books on how to create a good character, a good narrative, and dialogue that you find useful.
excellente histoire qui mériterais un 5 étoile , elle les rate car les mise a jours ne sont pas stable mais chère auteur ne vous y trompé pas, j AIME votre histoire ( adore= i love it) . j ai vraiment rien a redire sur cette histoire a part les mise a jours qui sont vraiment base ( je suppose que l auteur est occupé IRL ce qui explique les 3 étoile sur la stabilité des mise a jour au lieu d un 1 étoile) j ai mis toutes les autre étoile sur 5 étoile. continué votre bon travail =) ( FRENCH)
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Es una muy buena novela con una buena utilización de los personajes y coherencia . Un gusto poder leerla.👍
5 stars cause I didn't see the "harem" tag, and I'm in a good mood.