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he should learn other elements to increase his dark magic abilities like he can learn earth make magic to be able to make dark constructs stronger and better , learn fire magic to create black fire which will properties of fire in his dark magic and maybe learn water magic to create something like heavy water with the gravity aspect of his dark magic
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It was really great. The character development was great.The description is very rich and wonderful💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
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la recomiendo al 100 está bien escrita y la historia hasta el momento es consistente con el planteamiento principal estoy interesado en como incorpora todo lo que pasa en la historia principal con las habilidades del nuevo personaje y mantenga la consistencia que lleva
muy buena historia me gusto bastante todo es muy acorde y consecuente con lo que se planteó desde un principio, interesante arco y el personaje principal está bien establecido
Everything about this story so far is the peak of perfection, whether it's the storytelling, grammar quality, or development. And most importantly updates are regular.[img=update]
Perfect writing, good story, excellent choice of power, I really liked. Looking forward to more chapters ^_^ top,top,top,top,top,top,top,top...
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Mandatory author shameless review. Y'all know how it works. Make sure to give this a try if you like my other novels, cheers. A few notes for the novel: - Pairing is Mirajane Strauss and non-harem. - MC will be OP, but it'll take a while to get there. - MC is a year younger than Laxus
good read so far. the Mc is properly integrated into the family of fairy tail. hes not to overpowered or above others. just think of it like if he was canon he would make a great part of fairy tail family.
he should learn other elements to increase his dark magic abilities like he can learn earth make magic to be able to make dark constructs stronger and better , learn fire magic to create black fire which will properties of fire in his dark magic and maybe learn water magic to create something like heavy water with the gravity aspect of his dark magic
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It was really great. The character development was great.The description is very rich and wonderful💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
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la recomiendo al 100 está bien escrita y la historia hasta el momento es consistente con el planteamiento principal estoy interesado en como incorpora todo lo que pasa en la historia principal con las habilidades del nuevo personaje y mantenga la consistencia que lleva
muy buena historia me gusto bastante todo es muy acorde y consecuente con lo que se planteó desde un principio, interesante arco y el personaje principal está bien establecido
Everything about this story so far is the peak of perfection, whether it's the storytelling, grammar quality, or development. And most importantly updates are regular.[img=update]
Perfect writing, good story, excellent choice of power, I really liked. Looking forward to more chapters ^_^ top,top,top,top,top,top,top,top...
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Mandatory author shameless review. Y'all know how it works. Make sure to give this a try if you like my other novels, cheers. A few notes for the novel: - Pairing is Mirajane Strauss and non-harem. - MC will be OP, but it'll take a while to get there. - MC is a year younger than Laxus
good read so far. the Mc is properly integrated into the family of fairy tail. hes not to overpowered or above others. just think of it like if he was canon he would make a great part of fairy tail family.