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Haven’t read it, but just had to comment, how do you see 7 chains on your soul, and a devil and not immediately thing of the 7 cardinal sins????
Please, Add tag villain MC , to make it more exciting ..This novel has potential .. good work author 👏👏👏
Grammar is mucho malo. The premise of the story is pretty nice it’s giving me a arifureta vibes. The story is pretty nice but it has a single issue the writing quality and that is a deal breaker.
so far so good, i think it has a lot of potential and im looking forward to seeing how it ends..... note to the author - keep working hard and dont stress so much
Finished vol 1. Had a good start, Don't know why the story is not receiving many reviews yet, But I like the story. Just wanted to ask, Is there a Discord server or anything like that (for illustrations for reference if any of them existed)
Haven’t read it, but just had to comment, how do you see 7 chains on your soul, and a devil and not immediately thing of the 7 cardinal sins????
Please, Add tag villain MC , to make it more exciting ..This novel has potential .. good work author 👏👏👏
Grammar is mucho malo. The premise of the story is pretty nice it’s giving me a arifureta vibes. The story is pretty nice but it has a single issue the writing quality and that is a deal breaker.
so far so good, i think it has a lot of potential and im looking forward to seeing how it ends..... note to the author - keep working hard and dont stress so much
Finished vol 1. Had a good start, Don't know why the story is not receiving many reviews yet, But I like the story. Just wanted to ask, Is there a Discord server or anything like that (for illustrations for reference if any of them existed)