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it was pretty good at first then plot went downhill and the story seems as if it was just skipping parts then cultivation came all of a sudden from nowhere without any explanation
It's alright.. The only thing I don't like about this fic is that the fights are in my opinion stupid.. Mc recives injures which should make them either unconscious our unable to move for a little while, but they are able to move and take even more beatings and get even more injured yet still come out on top or barley survive. i know it's a fic but come on thats too much...
the story seems interesting but the writing quality it's not up to par a lot of repetition and confusion. need polish and editing to reach a minimum standard of quality. I hope to re-read this story in the future when is fixed.
Fantastic one of the best novels I've read to date.Please keep up the good work.
I absolutely adore the cyberpunk world that this story is set in and I can’t wait to see what happens next!! I can tell the story is just getting started and hasn’t really had time to develop its main storyline and characters yet so I can’t judge it too well!! I’m really hoping that this will be the story that after waiting for so so long will finally have a character like Scara in it….plz (*^ω^*)
I realy love this story as far as it exists and I really hope the author hasn't dropped it it has a few issues here and there but this is such a good story with great settings I don't know why there are wrong chapters posted at/after chapter 62 but if the author started updating the story again. then the grammar isn't to bad there are many stories with worse grammar and the bit of skippines to the story isn't that bad it just feels like the author had trouble coming up with content for the story and I truly hope this story is continued.
it was pretty good at first then plot went downhill and the story seems as if it was just skipping parts then cultivation came all of a sudden from nowhere without any explanation
It's alright.. The only thing I don't like about this fic is that the fights are in my opinion stupid.. Mc recives injures which should make them either unconscious our unable to move for a little while, but they are able to move and take even more beatings and get even more injured yet still come out on top or barley survive. i know it's a fic but come on thats too much...
the story seems interesting but the writing quality it's not up to par a lot of repetition and confusion. need polish and editing to reach a minimum standard of quality. I hope to re-read this story in the future when is fixed.
Fantastic one of the best novels I've read to date.Please keep up the good work.
I absolutely adore the cyberpunk world that this story is set in and I can’t wait to see what happens next!! I can tell the story is just getting started and hasn’t really had time to develop its main storyline and characters yet so I can’t judge it too well!! I’m really hoping that this will be the story that after waiting for so so long will finally have a character like Scara in it….plz (*^ω^*)
I realy love this story as far as it exists and I really hope the author hasn't dropped it it has a few issues here and there but this is such a good story with great settings I don't know why there are wrong chapters posted at/after chapter 62 but if the author started updating the story again. then the grammar isn't to bad there are many stories with worse grammar and the bit of skippines to the story isn't that bad it just feels like the author had trouble coming up with content for the story and I truly hope this story is continued.