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It's a good work, it's not a marvel but it reads quite well. In fact the novel starts off quite well, it's an entertaining and fun story, neither too dense nor too rushed, but there's a clear drop in quality from the third quarter onwards and the ending is a disaster. However, if you want to have a good time, read it. I would give it a 6 out of 10 which would be an 8 if the level had been maintained and the ending wasn't a disaster.
Post chapter 115 or close, author did some time-travel stuff which went unwell in my humble opinion. Introduced Haki as Uzumaki ancient-heritage. Enough for me to drop it. It is good until then. You can try.
it's a harem and i don't like it its just me tough i would give it 3.8 cuz the harem shit but without it it would be 4 the story is good but mc is dumb he need someone to die infront of him to know he's not overpowered
Other than the very rushed ending everything else was pretty great 👍👍👍 If you're looking for a entertaining fic to pass time go for it...
Was a good run till the author just wanted made it harem without the audience knowing at the start it’s going to be harem. It’s like a bait.
read for Naruto world only, now it's one piece. there's not even an epilogue to close the Naruto world.
Finished this in one day it's very entertaining and interesting I loved this mc he actually has a brain 🐺‼️
it's unfortunate that he has 2 girls, but overall the fanfic is good, the characters are also well developed and the main character is not stupid like in other fanfictions МC-It is also developing gradually and this is very good overall 10/10 (it’s a pity that the romance is not only with Asuna)
You should definitely read this review. It started well he made him overpowered somewhere till mid but then when the time travel/alternate reality arc started author started to make him weak even though all of his enemies were far more weaker then himself BUT the thing that forced me to drop and told me this iwas a complete waste of time is when he TOLD Mianto after reviving him the truth about his origins and about how this world is just a MANGA so please do not waste your time this story and author are not worth your time
ネタバレを明かす
Its like the author is trynna be the reincarnation of light but completely disregarding the fact that the high ups of the village are highly trained and powerful shinobi
Just know that it is a multiverse story. I personally dont like those types of stories, and the author didnt disclose it at all. He says it in like chapter 185, and the naruto arc apparently ends in chapter 250
Truly amazing one of my favorite fanfictions if not the most favorite however I can't wait to see how it ends. Truly amazing one of my favorite fanfictions if not the most favorite however I can't wait to see how it ends
Well, I stopped watching when the writer made Haku a girl and created a plot that Haku is a slave and he wants to save her. The model for heroes in villain novels, where the hero thinks everything he does is right and is ridiculously confident in his intelligence.
HAREM! HAREM!HAREM! Idiot Author put that tag in before fooling people into reading this...
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will he recover his arm in coming chapters? still haven't read from where i left them to pile up
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It’s good until Konah Crush and the the story takes a nose dive. Couldn’t read it anymore, it might get better but it’s too late.
Before you start reading this fic I warn you that the MC is OP and the label (weak to strong) is false. The title of this fic is also fake, it doesn't have anything resembling a template, it's just a system that gives him a lot of powers that Minato Namikaze has and doesn't have. The author always makes the MC fight without using all of his abilities and powers and the battles last 3 or 5 chapters. Great possibilities of HAREM and if not INO and an OC that the author created in a journey that lasted from chapter 100 to 162 that apart from obtaining "conqueror haki" and Fūinjutsu from Mito Uzumaki himself added an OC UZUMAKI as a love interest, completely eliminating to Karin Uzumaki and the trip to the past does not affect her future at all. After returning and starting Naruto Shippuden, the author weakens the MC again and in the end takes away the system and everything he obtained. In short, this starts off bad and gets worse over time. There may also be trips to other worlds or a crossing of worlds. And these are important examples, then there are more details to continue mentioning how bad this FAN-FICS is.
Really wonderful, I think it is one of the top Naruto novels in every way, please continue...
So it just mc with minato template I mean it’s alright he really ain’t powerful
It's a good work, it's not a marvel but it reads quite well. In fact the novel starts off quite well, it's an entertaining and fun story, neither too dense nor too rushed, but there's a clear drop in quality from the third quarter onwards and the ending is a disaster. However, if you want to have a good time, read it. I would give it a 6 out of 10 which would be an 8 if the level had been maintained and the ending wasn't a disaster.
Post chapter 115 or close, author did some time-travel stuff which went unwell in my humble opinion. Introduced Haki as Uzumaki ancient-heritage. Enough for me to drop it. It is good until then. You can try.
it's a harem and i don't like it its just me tough i would give it 3.8 cuz the harem shit but without it it would be 4 the story is good but mc is dumb he need someone to die infront of him to know he's not overpowered
Other than the very rushed ending everything else was pretty great 👍👍👍 If you're looking for a entertaining fic to pass time go for it...
Was a good run till the author just wanted made it harem without the audience knowing at the start it’s going to be harem. It’s like a bait.
read for Naruto world only, now it's one piece. there's not even an epilogue to close the Naruto world.
Finished this in one day it's very entertaining and interesting I loved this mc he actually has a brain 🐺‼️
it's unfortunate that he has 2 girls, but overall the fanfic is good, the characters are also well developed and the main character is not stupid like in other fanfictions МC-It is also developing gradually and this is very good overall 10/10 (it’s a pity that the romance is not only with Asuna)
You should definitely read this review. It started well he made him overpowered somewhere till mid but then when the time travel/alternate reality arc started author started to make him weak even though all of his enemies were far more weaker then himself BUT the thing that forced me to drop and told me this iwas a complete waste of time is when he TOLD Mianto after reviving him the truth about his origins and about how this world is just a MANGA so please do not waste your time this story and author are not worth your time
ネタバレを明かす Its like the author is trynna be the reincarnation of light but completely disregarding the fact that the high ups of the village are highly trained and powerful shinobi
Just know that it is a multiverse story. I personally dont like those types of stories, and the author didnt disclose it at all. He says it in like chapter 185, and the naruto arc apparently ends in chapter 250
Truly amazing one of my favorite fanfictions if not the most favorite however I can't wait to see how it ends. Truly amazing one of my favorite fanfictions if not the most favorite however I can't wait to see how it ends
Well, I stopped watching when the writer made Haku a girl and created a plot that Haku is a slave and he wants to save her. The model for heroes in villain novels, where the hero thinks everything he does is right and is ridiculously confident in his intelligence.
HAREM! HAREM!HAREM! Idiot Author put that tag in before fooling people into reading this...
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will he recover his arm in coming chapters? still haven't read from where i left them to pile up
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It’s good until Konah Crush and the the story takes a nose dive. Couldn’t read it anymore, it might get better but it’s too late.
Before you start reading this fic I warn you that the MC is OP and the label (weak to strong) is false. The title of this fic is also fake, it doesn't have anything resembling a template, it's just a system that gives him a lot of powers that Minato Namikaze has and doesn't have. The author always makes the MC fight without using all of his abilities and powers and the battles last 3 or 5 chapters. Great possibilities of HAREM and if not INO and an OC that the author created in a journey that lasted from chapter 100 to 162 that apart from obtaining "conqueror haki" and Fūinjutsu from Mito Uzumaki himself added an OC UZUMAKI as a love interest, completely eliminating to Karin Uzumaki and the trip to the past does not affect her future at all. After returning and starting Naruto Shippuden, the author weakens the MC again and in the end takes away the system and everything he obtained. In short, this starts off bad and gets worse over time. There may also be trips to other worlds or a crossing of worlds. And these are important examples, then there are more details to continue mentioning how bad this FAN-FICS is.
Really wonderful, I think it is one of the top Naruto novels in every way, please continue...
So it just mc with minato template I mean it’s alright he really ain’t powerful