Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life

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mikedanger

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

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Professor_Light

its supposed to be an mc making a village but the mc is only recruiting individuals instead of groups, like the mc is only getting named characters instead he should also recruit war orphans, worker civilians and clans like chinoike clan or that clan who have weather manipulation ability was it yuta's clan(episode 313) also jugo's clan. a side from what I said the rest of thee story is good. also for the harem part, currently the mc has 1 girl but very flirty which is far from the harem tag which is very fine for me.

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gustavo_hhhhdsd

I thought the story would be him creating a village and then some homunculi like Fate's to help him keep everything going (I thought about it because of the knowledge he gains, so I thought he was going to go that way) and then him making non-aggression/trade pacts with other villages, meeting characters and getting stronger and etc. But instead, the work is him collecting characters like Pokémon for his village and that's it, it's basically a slice of life of a very strong guy (he's literally enel lol) picking up characters for his village, that's all, it had a lot of potential, but it went down a very boring path.

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MasherDon

I liked everything at the beginning. But before the hero had time to walk around in the new world, he thought about the harem. I didn't notice the harem tag, but this directly said something about it. Next... Haku? Seriously? I was hoping it would be at least a couple of decades before canon.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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R0B

Sounds promising, but the picture is misleading, I recommend to change it, because mc is a guy and he is not someone's experiment. A picture about enel, lighting or sky island would be better in my opinion.

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DetachedDreamer

The story is good and was great until recent chapters. The MC and origin are unique at least in this world and I enjoy kingdom building but as the story progressed it became more about leaf village hating and bashing than anything else. if your only villian is the third hokage and danzo then you don't have a compelling story. making the third a villian is so overused and cliche, used by disillusioned fanfic writers who corrupt the og story for likes from sad folks who hate heroes and love ambiguous and morally neutral protagonists and turning heroes into villians because they may be a hypocrite. Well everyone is, flaws, it makes them more real, yet villians are worse but are given a pass lol. While all that's not necessarily a bad thing, it lacks in the creativity needed to sustain an enjoyable story. overall the story is entertaining, but its trajectory at the moment is questionable.

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Santy_Melay

The novel, although interesting, is boring, the funniest parts are when the protagonist shows his power, but that is what he does the least, things could be made easier by showing his power but no, he chooses the cliché way of hiding his power. .

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covestar

At first, I didn’t want to read this book, just by looking at the cover and the description, one would think that it was a Chinese translated book, to my suprise, it was nothing like the mtl books I’ve read. I like the grammar and the sentences are very fluid. The plot is very good and it isn’t rushed, although a harem is showing signs of being formed, i like the fact that the author is taking the story slow in the harem development. I like the pacing of the relationships and the world building. Overall, the plot is really good and this might be the best story I have read in a while.. I hope this novel doesn’t end. Goodluck on your writing journey 👍 Review as of chapter 48

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Crazy_Bestie

It started off very well, very fun and interesting, but recently, Mc has been making some very strange and confusing decisions.

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Bomberman

fixed the dialogue which is a big W but update stability is killing the rating

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4thBlackGoblin

The story started out great and I really enjoyed it. the main characters personality was great while the items he had in his disposal were even greater. However when it came down to actually developing his village, the whole thing was lackluster. instead of finding large groups of clans with potential like the Yuki, Kazuya, and even Uchiha, he just went about picking a few people left over. which was disappointing. and it seems like at some point the MC is far too strong, to the point that even at chapter 90, he hasn't actually fought anybody. the story also lacked a major plot to keep it going foward. No major aim or conviction in which our MC will have trouble accomplishing. At some point, the sude character also stop being interesting. At some point, I felt like I was being told a log of events rather than experiencing them. things were brushed off so simply and quickly that I grew bored. The choice of harem members was also boring in my opinion. while the romance was not tha well fleshed out. when I was srating this out, I thought our MC would be head over heals over kaguya and be like, "Only she can handle me." then maybe spend the whole plot trying to unsealed her. Although I would recommend the story, I have seen a better written version much simillar to this. I'll drop if anyone wants to hear it.

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adeskenjin

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SirSmurf

I'm actually really enjoying this so far. the character interactions are keeping me engaged, and I feel like the story is moving at a reasonable pace. I feel like I can relate emotionally to the characters or scenarios. It's just overall a really well written story, especially for characters that we know little to nothing about from canon.

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Zay_heard_gaming

This fanfic is very interesting, I love the different outlook it provides. The fact of bringing both a One Piece character and devil fruit to Naruto is something that I love. I always felt that Konoah was bad, I only wish that he took Naruto in.

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Beyond_

I think a story is better when, instead of the author altering the world to suit the protagonist, the protagonist alters the world to suit their desires. But even though I have this opinion, your story is fun to read.

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Bofa99

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Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great storyline/plot and quite good english/translation.. But the grammar is quite bad (there's many wrong or swap in he/she or her/his).. I don't mind that MC reborn as other anime character (Enel) with his full power and without his weakness.. But what interesting is he build a new hidden village and how he will develop and recruit his villager.. I like that he take Haku, Kimimaro, Pakura, etc.. Their story is so sad, that I hope it will be different in this story.. I hope he recruit a few Uchiha whose innocent of coup (the kids), and maybe save Mikoto and Izumi Uchiha too.. I can't wait to see what happen next (with 3rd Hokage, his advisors, and Danzo.. I hope he kill Danzo, he can steal/sweep all root resource like he did in Kusagakure).. Keep up the great job author sama 😁👍👍😍😍😍

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DICKY_MAULANA

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