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Love it! I like the premise of the story, along with how the characters were introduced. The pacing was also lovely, and I just adore how the first chapter was written. Though there are grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes, it wasn’t detrimental to the overall quality of the book. However, I feel as if certain lines and scenes could be further elaborated as some parts felt rather blank and empty. Other than that though, this was a fun read. Keep it up, author!
Undoubtedly, this piece of work boasts a remarkable atmosphere that makes you feel the room and the overall tone of the place thanks to the author's excellent descriptions. The writer skilfully creates tension when needed and a sense of calmness when the plot thickens, making the pacing spot-on. The story of Kai and Sia is intriguing, and I am eagerly anticipating where it will lead. Honestly, I cannot find any criticism to give as the story is well-written as well as engaging, and is still at it's early phases with less chapters. I won't reveal too much about the story's elements to preserve the readers' experience, but I am personally impressed by the quality of this work and am looking forward to reading more chapters.
Love it! I like the premise of the story, along with how the characters were introduced. The pacing was also lovely, and I just adore how the first chapter was written. Though there are grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes, it wasn’t detrimental to the overall quality of the book. However, I feel as if certain lines and scenes could be further elaborated as some parts felt rather blank and empty. Other than that though, this was a fun read. Keep it up, author!
Undoubtedly, this piece of work boasts a remarkable atmosphere that makes you feel the room and the overall tone of the place thanks to the author's excellent descriptions. The writer skilfully creates tension when needed and a sense of calmness when the plot thickens, making the pacing spot-on. The story of Kai and Sia is intriguing, and I am eagerly anticipating where it will lead. Honestly, I cannot find any criticism to give as the story is well-written as well as engaging, and is still at it's early phases with less chapters. I won't reveal too much about the story's elements to preserve the readers' experience, but I am personally impressed by the quality of this work and am looking forward to reading more chapters.
quiet good for a new novel, hope it will continue on