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A man who is hit by a truck meets rob and is given 5 wishes. Choosing the appearance of Mael from the seven deadly sins as well as fire related powers, watch as he grows from starting in the fire nation and stopping the war with the help of the avatar and an odd extra.
Author here I’ll try do a chapter every Monday to Friday and then edit them on Saturday or Sunday
Also inform my dyslexic ass of spelling mistakes as I most likely won’t recognise some
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I would definitely suggest the use of a writing assistant tool such as Grammarly to improve the attention to grammar in this story
I would like to say this is a short but good novel because it's overpowered bugs in it in a good way but the artist stop updating
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1 : Avatar early days
- 1 A meeting through fate (edited) 1 years ago
- 2 Waking up (edited) 1 years ago
- 3 ‘Family’ discussion (edited) 1 years ago
- 4 Time with Azula & Zuko (edited) 1 years ago
- 5 Progress (edited) 1 years ago
- 6 Professional training (edited) 1 years ago
- 7 Azure flames (edited) 1 years ago
- 8 Duel with Iroh (edited) 1 years ago
- 9 “Eventful” birthday (edited) 1 years ago
- 10 Agni Kai (edited) 1 years ago
- 11 Two years, progress (edited) 1 years ago
- 12 Ba sing Sa (edited) 1 years ago
- 13 operation clipped wings 9 months ago
- 14 heart’s broken 9 months ago
I accidentally made Azula and Zuko twins. Just imagine it as a AU universe or something since in the original she’s two years younger