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I really liked this book from the first chapter and I hope the writing quality would continue to be consistent as the novel continues.Its pretty great from the get go and I have a feeling I won't be disappointed.Thank you to the author for writing this gem sincerely.
i love it so much🥺🥺🥺 its just a shame that the last update was 2 months ago.... i hope the author picks it up again!! Please🙏🏼
This novel has been very good so far, from character having dept to amazing world background and very good story development. The book has long suppress my expectations. A must read But for sometime now the author has not updated the novel and I am scared he has abandoned the novel. Please author don't give up on the novel, it hard to see quality novel like this on webnovel. At some point your novel was the only reason I opened this app
Good writing quality but way to much information is given without anything moving the plot forward at all. Give it a try I guess but don’t expect to understand or not be overwhelmed by information.
The writing could definitely use a copy editor, maybe a line editor if you want to splurge, but the Writer is laying golden eggs with this one.
Absolutely amazing writing. Has to be the best dark & mature Lovecraftian fantasy novel I've ever read. Imo better storytelling than Lord of the Mysteries. You might not agree but if you enjoyed LOTM you'll definitely love this. Updates are a bit slow but for this kind of quality its worth it. Hope author sees this and knows he has a gem on his hands
it's alright we don't even get to see the ritual the author world builds yeah it's good but honestly that should've happened later on after 70 chapters we don't even ge the ritual so you just have to pay for premium author also wanted to grow to many other characters while barely focusing on the mc as well for the beginning of the story a lot of stuff got way to much focus instead of the mc to much world building early on can leave it to feeling overwhelming which it felt really overwhelming the world building should've specifically happened after the ritual but it happened before explaining the power system before hand was a good thing it didn't get to complex or complicated but all in all to much world building early on kind of killed it for me the first big event for the mc yet it was all spent on world building and outside characters doing they part we got 25+ with nysa yet she was iust a tool we don’t even see the mc ritual you have to start paying coins to see it and the characters they introduced weren’t very good i gave it a 3 off the author ideas
Amazing read. If you like LOTM you will absolutely love this. Possibly the best Lovecraftian novel I've ever read
So good, I love how greatly detailed the world building is. Furthermore, the portrayal of multiple character perspectives throughout the storyline is so fun to read. It’s unique and I have not read many webnovels that do this and show different characters’ side of the story and not just the main character’s.
Great book, one my tiny brain can't really describe....Do just let my rating tell you everything!
I loved LORD OF THE MYSTERIES and never found a novel better or on par, BUT NOW I HAVE❤️❤️❤️❤️I LOVEEEEE ITTTT I’ only 100 chaps in rn but this has kept me on my heels all the way, goof job sir
Due to my previously bad experiences with Webnovel reviews, I was hesitant getting into this one where everyone was praising it, but wow, this novel deserves every bit of that praise. The worldbuilding is amazing, power system took a bit of reference from LOTM but still remains very original, and the plot hints at very interesting developments to come. Great job so far author and I hope you can keep it up till this becomes a big thing on Webnovel. Your work is too good to be less popular than some of the garbage on this app.
It's really good but the MC is just way too much of a narcissistic trash. In reality the only reason he isn't dead yet is because of plot armour like being so rude and disrespectful to beings way above your power level is a death sentence in any other book. And he also thinks he's some sort of god when he can be crushed at anytime like a bug. Other than the MC the story is good but if the MC continues like this I'm afraid that this book will become a waste.
It's a very good book the only thing that I would like is that it updates more often.
Simply an amaizing work of art.Reminds me of shadow slave and thats a hard thing to do.
A very well fleshed out novel, writing quality is excellent, zero to no misspellings, very good worldbuilding
I've read countless stories in this app but few kept me this hooked. It is amazing , the world building althought boring it makes everything make sense after reading ,and every paragraph made me imagine dreadful images, in my head that creeped me for a while. Nice work!
Top notch novel! Really well written. The world is well build and character are not unidimensional. There are for the moment just 120 chapters and I can’t wait for the next chapter! So this a dark fantasy novel with some inspiration in Lord of the mysteries but have his own style. It feel more like a weastern novel than a webnovel. I hope you ll enjoy as much as I enjoyed! Thanks you author!
I read 80 chapters in one go...really amazing..at first I was struggling with the naming of the characters and cities lol but soon I got hooked in the thrill of the story that keeps you on edge..the world seems very dark with alot of mysteries and you can't help but wonder how things work..the power system is not amazing and unpredictable but you can understand it as you keep reading..I thank the author for his creativity and for making the me experience the story as om part of it which is very rare to find here..So 5 stars deserved for this hidden gem..A highly recommended masterpiece..read and you won't regret
i’ve read up to about chapter 90 and it’s been a great read so far i highly recommend it.
I'm about 10 chapters in and i have to say i love this novel already. from the second chapter I loved the atmosphere that the author was creating in a similar vein to lotm by introducing an elder horror of some kind. no grammar or spelling mistakes either which is a godsend since that's what brings most of the new novels here down many points for me. can't wait to fully catch up cause i can feel this will be a future hit!
62 ch 5 stars~! First of all, stability of updates. 2ch per day. No comments. Second of all, writing quality. It`s fine. ˙ᵕ˙ Splendorous world background. I already like it. Seemingly inspired by LOTM but quite original. Good character design. Story development. Fine... but... maybe too long? For example, Nysa's parts show the story from a different perspective. It`s good but just too long. I am not really interested in her pov, so (in my opinion) the length needs to be reduced a bit. (づ ᴗ _ᴗ)づ♡ And... the pace of the story needs more speed. Also, we have more chapters about others characters than the protagonist, which is not very good. The protagonist seems kind of smart. But he is a bit too emotional/impulsive sometimes? Also, I'm not a weirdo who wants the main character to be a chaotic evil murder hobo, however I don't like irrational characters. If, let's say, there was a ritual requiring some innocent people to be tortured for secret knowledge. And the protagonist wouldn't use it because he "has standards". I will be a little... disappointed. (╥﹏╥) However, despite everything, this story deserves 5 stars. ♡⸜(˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝
All I can say is Peak!!!! the Lovecraftian elements pulled me in, the grammar and overall writing made me stay and now, the world building and lore keeps me begging for more chaps. only 7 chapters in and I'm glad I gave this work a chance. please author, don't drop this. this work has the potential for greatness. ✨
TLDR: Read the book! It’s Amazing! The quality of of this novel is top notch. The main character is smart and makes decisions based on reason and logic which make his wins feel earned and losses don’t seem to come from no where. The other characters actually feel fleshed out and have motivations that don’t only revolve around the MC. It is common to see novels especially on Webnovel have their author dumb down every character their MC interacts with in order to make them feel smarter. That is not the case with this novel. Any one of the many interesting side characters feel as though they could have been an MC in their own right. The world building is already amazing and the MC hasn’t even left his original starting county yet. The author has been clever with their use of different ideologies being more prevalent in different places which makes what country your from actually matter. Usually in these novels there’s just a bunch of random ones and a “Forbidden” mysterious country but here there is actual depth to the backgrounds. The fight scenes have all been well written and have shown qualities of different characters shining even in the fights and the author seems to understand the art of showing and not telling. Overall this is a hidden gem. I’m glad to have been one of this novels first readers and wish it the success it deserves for being such good quality.
Mandatory 5-star self-review. I'm confident in the quality of my writing and guarantee you its consistency throughout the book. If you like grim worlds with a dark fantasy feel, unfathomable Lovecraftian horrors, and the threat of madness at every corner, this is the story for you. As I have noted, the beginning will be slow but not uninteresting. The protagonist is highly intelligent, manipulative, and cunning but not overly ruthless nor a murder hobo. His first taste of power will come relatively late, but it will be sweet, and worth it after all the hurdles he will have faced. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. Also, don't forget to vote and leave a review. It greatly motivates me to continue writing!
I really liked this book from the first chapter and I hope the writing quality would continue to be consistent as the novel continues.Its pretty great from the get go and I have a feeling I won't be disappointed.Thank you to the author for writing this gem sincerely.
i love it so much🥺🥺🥺 its just a shame that the last update was 2 months ago.... i hope the author picks it up again!! Please🙏🏼
This novel has been very good so far, from character having dept to amazing world background and very good story development. The book has long suppress my expectations. A must read But for sometime now the author has not updated the novel and I am scared he has abandoned the novel. Please author don't give up on the novel, it hard to see quality novel like this on webnovel. At some point your novel was the only reason I opened this app
Good writing quality but way to much information is given without anything moving the plot forward at all. Give it a try I guess but don’t expect to understand or not be overwhelmed by information.
The writing could definitely use a copy editor, maybe a line editor if you want to splurge, but the Writer is laying golden eggs with this one.
Absolutely amazing writing. Has to be the best dark & mature Lovecraftian fantasy novel I've ever read. Imo better storytelling than Lord of the Mysteries. You might not agree but if you enjoyed LOTM you'll definitely love this. Updates are a bit slow but for this kind of quality its worth it. Hope author sees this and knows he has a gem on his hands
it's alright we don't even get to see the ritual the author world builds yeah it's good but honestly that should've happened later on after 70 chapters we don't even ge the ritual so you just have to pay for premium author also wanted to grow to many other characters while barely focusing on the mc as well for the beginning of the story a lot of stuff got way to much focus instead of the mc to much world building early on can leave it to feeling overwhelming which it felt really overwhelming the world building should've specifically happened after the ritual but it happened before explaining the power system before hand was a good thing it didn't get to complex or complicated but all in all to much world building early on kind of killed it for me the first big event for the mc yet it was all spent on world building and outside characters doing they part we got 25+ with nysa yet she was iust a tool we don’t even see the mc ritual you have to start paying coins to see it and the characters they introduced weren’t very good i gave it a 3 off the author ideas
Amazing read. If you like LOTM you will absolutely love this. Possibly the best Lovecraftian novel I've ever read
So good, I love how greatly detailed the world building is. Furthermore, the portrayal of multiple character perspectives throughout the storyline is so fun to read. It’s unique and I have not read many webnovels that do this and show different characters’ side of the story and not just the main character’s.
Great book, one my tiny brain can't really describe....Do just let my rating tell you everything!
I loved LORD OF THE MYSTERIES and never found a novel better or on par, BUT NOW I HAVE❤️❤️❤️❤️I LOVEEEEE ITTTT I’ only 100 chaps in rn but this has kept me on my heels all the way, goof job sir
Due to my previously bad experiences with Webnovel reviews, I was hesitant getting into this one where everyone was praising it, but wow, this novel deserves every bit of that praise. The worldbuilding is amazing, power system took a bit of reference from LOTM but still remains very original, and the plot hints at very interesting developments to come. Great job so far author and I hope you can keep it up till this becomes a big thing on Webnovel. Your work is too good to be less popular than some of the garbage on this app.
It's really good but the MC is just way too much of a narcissistic trash. In reality the only reason he isn't dead yet is because of plot armour like being so rude and disrespectful to beings way above your power level is a death sentence in any other book. And he also thinks he's some sort of god when he can be crushed at anytime like a bug. Other than the MC the story is good but if the MC continues like this I'm afraid that this book will become a waste.
It's a very good book the only thing that I would like is that it updates more often.
Simply an amaizing work of art.Reminds me of shadow slave and thats a hard thing to do.
A very well fleshed out novel, writing quality is excellent, zero to no misspellings, very good worldbuilding
I've read countless stories in this app but few kept me this hooked. It is amazing , the world building althought boring it makes everything make sense after reading ,and every paragraph made me imagine dreadful images, in my head that creeped me for a while. Nice work!
Top notch novel! Really well written. The world is well build and character are not unidimensional. There are for the moment just 120 chapters and I can’t wait for the next chapter! So this a dark fantasy novel with some inspiration in Lord of the mysteries but have his own style. It feel more like a weastern novel than a webnovel. I hope you ll enjoy as much as I enjoyed! Thanks you author!
I read 80 chapters in one go...really amazing..at first I was struggling with the naming of the characters and cities lol but soon I got hooked in the thrill of the story that keeps you on edge..the world seems very dark with alot of mysteries and you can't help but wonder how things work..the power system is not amazing and unpredictable but you can understand it as you keep reading..I thank the author for his creativity and for making the me experience the story as om part of it which is very rare to find here..So 5 stars deserved for this hidden gem..A highly recommended masterpiece..read and you won't regret
i’ve read up to about chapter 90 and it’s been a great read so far i highly recommend it.
I'm about 10 chapters in and i have to say i love this novel already. from the second chapter I loved the atmosphere that the author was creating in a similar vein to lotm by introducing an elder horror of some kind. no grammar or spelling mistakes either which is a godsend since that's what brings most of the new novels here down many points for me. can't wait to fully catch up cause i can feel this will be a future hit!
62 ch 5 stars~! First of all, stability of updates. 2ch per day. No comments. Second of all, writing quality. It`s fine. ˙ᵕ˙ Splendorous world background. I already like it. Seemingly inspired by LOTM but quite original. Good character design. Story development. Fine... but... maybe too long? For example, Nysa's parts show the story from a different perspective. It`s good but just too long. I am not really interested in her pov, so (in my opinion) the length needs to be reduced a bit. (づ ᴗ _ᴗ)づ♡ And... the pace of the story needs more speed. Also, we have more chapters about others characters than the protagonist, which is not very good. The protagonist seems kind of smart. But he is a bit too emotional/impulsive sometimes? Also, I'm not a weirdo who wants the main character to be a chaotic evil murder hobo, however I don't like irrational characters. If, let's say, there was a ritual requiring some innocent people to be tortured for secret knowledge. And the protagonist wouldn't use it because he "has standards". I will be a little... disappointed. (╥﹏╥) However, despite everything, this story deserves 5 stars. ♡⸜(˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝
All I can say is Peak!!!! the Lovecraftian elements pulled me in, the grammar and overall writing made me stay and now, the world building and lore keeps me begging for more chaps. only 7 chapters in and I'm glad I gave this work a chance. please author, don't drop this. this work has the potential for greatness. ✨
TLDR: Read the book! It’s Amazing! The quality of of this novel is top notch. The main character is smart and makes decisions based on reason and logic which make his wins feel earned and losses don’t seem to come from no where. The other characters actually feel fleshed out and have motivations that don’t only revolve around the MC. It is common to see novels especially on Webnovel have their author dumb down every character their MC interacts with in order to make them feel smarter. That is not the case with this novel. Any one of the many interesting side characters feel as though they could have been an MC in their own right. The world building is already amazing and the MC hasn’t even left his original starting county yet. The author has been clever with their use of different ideologies being more prevalent in different places which makes what country your from actually matter. Usually in these novels there’s just a bunch of random ones and a “Forbidden” mysterious country but here there is actual depth to the backgrounds. The fight scenes have all been well written and have shown qualities of different characters shining even in the fights and the author seems to understand the art of showing and not telling. Overall this is a hidden gem. I’m glad to have been one of this novels first readers and wish it the success it deserves for being such good quality.
Mandatory 5-star self-review. I'm confident in the quality of my writing and guarantee you its consistency throughout the book. If you like grim worlds with a dark fantasy feel, unfathomable Lovecraftian horrors, and the threat of madness at every corner, this is the story for you. As I have noted, the beginning will be slow but not uninteresting. The protagonist is highly intelligent, manipulative, and cunning but not overly ruthless nor a murder hobo. His first taste of power will come relatively late, but it will be sweet, and worth it after all the hurdles he will have faced. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. Also, don't forget to vote and leave a review. It greatly motivates me to continue writing!