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I normally dont go out of my way to review a story at its starting point, but im too hooked and author promised more motivation for reviews: I love it, good pacing, likable protagonist ans marvelous grammer and writing! plain and simple review! :)
The fic is great author san,Mobuseka fics are like very rare I think I only read one before this one but wasnt that good.Hopeto see more chapters in future,you have my support and stones.
Please make more I like this and I'm giving you 5 star so you won't drop it there are not many good fanfic these days so please continue and I hope you have a good future
The only otome story I've seen here. You do the original justice and I look forward to the future of your story. Please update a little more. Keep up the great work.
I remembered Otome Dori just from reading your synopsis. Ugh! Bad memories!! That's too much Otome in there.😂 New guys, don't search this content on your incognito. Kidding, just suffer.😂
I love this story I just wish it was Updated more frequently. Please update more.
An interesting and very unique story, the portrayal of the characters is somewhat strange but good, yes, this is a pretty good story, the writing style is not the best, but it is decent compared to beginners in general, it can be said that this can still be developed, and worth reading!
could you do one of hotd (highschool of the dead) oh something related to the franchise. ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Does he at least kill one of those from the protagonist's sister's harem? ..........................................................................................................
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Honestly the MC was a touch... cringe... in the beginning, but by the time I caught up to the most recent chapter I was silently screaming "Noooooo" cause i really wanted more. Fun, funny, and entertaining, I like that our MC is stuck in a world he didnt want and is still just making the best of it. Hoping for more updates, this deserves to continue
В начале было более-менее интересно,и то интерес был скорее из за самого мира который автор выбрал,но читая все дальше и дальше становилось скучно,во первых МС нытик,он не попал в DxD,почему бы не написать несколько глав о том как главный герой будет ныть об этом,во вторых Автор мало уделяеть внимание для описание окружающего мира,описываеться только то что видит гг,и из за этого резкие переходы от одной сцены в другую,что опять же делает все хуже,и в третьех МС хочет уйдти по скорее уйдти в DxD,но он даже не благодарен что ему дали шанс на нлвую жизнь,а лишь жалуеться что оказалься не в том мире,а тот факт что ему дали шанс на новую жизнь,а ещё в будущем выбор на мир в котором он может оказаться,и он ещё жалуеться,раздражаеть,из за чего читать станлвиться невозможно,и такие моменты пропускаешь,и читать окпзываеться нечего,так как Автор решил все по быстрому написать ,как будто хотел что бы от него по быстрее отвалили
Bruh... its been a month or something.. is the author doing something In real life that makes him/her busy..? .w. shame if this nice fanfic got dropped.
Well, the main problems of this story is that the protagonist keeps complaining without knowing anything about the background of what he is talking about, an attitude of everything makes me lazy, which is very irritating, his communication skills are very low and the plot is move. seek to please the system
Overall a really good fanfic ,well written a bit cringe /silly but not unbearable, that even add a good mood while reading. I think you should not hesitate to expand the harem (not disproportionate and not pokeharem). But with the pace of the story there is no problem. Please don't set yourself a limit especially if there will be another universe after it. (yeah I have a preference for big harem:) everything is in the pace also I love the pov chapter. The only default is the gap in the last updates. A bit scared that it will slowly be longer and longer. Thanks to the author, just don't forget that there will always be people who trash talk /dislike your choice but ultimately it's your stories. Good luck with the following.
The author has no idea about most of the things in the plot (I guess he didn't read any of the web novel or the light novel), then the worst thing is the mc whose personality is a combination of: a jerk who thinks he has all the answers when he really knows nothing, his entire existence is based on obeying the system, a playboy attempt (this is more embarrassing than unbearable) The plot is just copy and paste from the anime (but with a protagonist trying to be cool) so don't wait long. Anyway, if you read the novel or are a fan, don't read this.
To begin with, I want to say that it is my opinion based on the fact that if I follow both the web novel and the light novel, I did not only watch the anime, that being said, it is a terrible story, I do not recommend it to anyone. The problem with this story is that the author has not read anything about the conflict and the background of the world, added to the fact that his mc's attitude is horrible, it seems that he has identity problems and his only reason for existing is to do what he orders the system you have. There are things that the author does well but they are very small. I advise you to rewrite this story after getting better information, as well as defining a single personality for the protagonist.
Spending all my nights, all my money going out on the town Doing anything just to get you off of my mind But when the morning comes, I'm right back where I started again And tryin' to forget you is just a waste of time Baby come back, any kind of fool could see There was something in everything about you Baby come back, you can blame it all on me I was wrong and I just can't live without you
Great story. Nice change to the MC. I also can't wait until you start the lemons. Keep up the good work and story-telling. Also, loving he is getting all the girls without even trying. Even though he's acting like he doesn't care. The MC does, which makes it even better.
overall it's very good 👍👍👍👍. Especially in the part when MC becomes a champion for Angelica where the MC doesn't challenge directly like Leon in the original series but after Angelica declares a duel so that the MC won't be badly affected and has bad public images from directly challenging the crown prince and his minions.
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Todo lo que digo es que está bueno y que se suba más de esta joya , no hay muchos de estas , los voy a guardar,cuidar y apreciar , voy a estar atento a este fanfic para si o si leerlo
Buena escritura, es el primer fanfic que veo de este manga por lo que es muy entretenido. ......[img=recommend] ................ ................. .......
MC is boring especially chapters 13-14 and doesn't take his world seriously.............................................................................................................................................................................................. .....
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Whole thing is treated like he isnt part of the world. Ik he doesnt want to be there but he has parent and a new name there but mc is like nope. Use my ian as name even tho everyone calls him that worlds name. Mc is just treating it puke nothing real. This is main problem with world hoping ffs in general. No real character growth and barley anything really original going on. Author hates on negative comments when most may not be worded politely but alot speak the truth. Hope some like it but mc and world hoping and how he treats his predicament ruins it
I recently read the novel, and it was so delightful. It had me laughing and cheering on the edge of my seat from start to finish. This adorable novel is the perfect blend of comedy, adventure, school drama, sword, and magic, and so much more. From the first page, I was drawn in by the idea of the story being explained so clearly. The characters were so charming and relatable that I immediately found myself invested in their lives and struggles. But this novel is much more than a comedy - it's also an exciting adventure that made me enjoy reading. The action scenes are expertly choreographed, with every sword thrust and magic spell described in vivid detail. Overall, I cannot recommend this book highly enough.
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An amazing piece of work you’ve written, its an anime genre that not alot of people have explored and the characters keep their personalities intact. Main character is also reasonably sensible and the plot isnt wack.
havent read it but i already know its a banger because of the harem tag please make it a massive pokemon collection author!!!
Never thought I would write fan fiction. But here we are. As the author, it is an obligation that I rate it 5 stars, but that's not a claim that it's worth that much. But I have been having fun writing this, so it is a 5/5 for me. Thanks for giving this humble creation a try, if you did. That's more than what I can ask for. :)
I normally dont go out of my way to review a story at its starting point, but im too hooked and author promised more motivation for reviews: I love it, good pacing, likable protagonist ans marvelous grammer and writing! plain and simple review! :)
The fic is great author san,Mobuseka fics are like very rare I think I only read one before this one but wasnt that good.Hopeto see more chapters in future,you have my support and stones.
Please make more I like this and I'm giving you 5 star so you won't drop it there are not many good fanfic these days so please continue and I hope you have a good future
The only otome story I've seen here. You do the original justice and I look forward to the future of your story. Please update a little more. Keep up the great work.
I remembered Otome Dori just from reading your synopsis. Ugh! Bad memories!! That's too much Otome in there.😂 New guys, don't search this content on your incognito. Kidding, just suffer.😂
I love this story I just wish it was Updated more frequently. Please update more.
An interesting and very unique story, the portrayal of the characters is somewhat strange but good, yes, this is a pretty good story, the writing style is not the best, but it is decent compared to beginners in general, it can be said that this can still be developed, and worth reading!
could you do one of hotd (highschool of the dead) oh something related to the franchise. ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Does he at least kill one of those from the protagonist's sister's harem? ..........................................................................................................
ネタバレを明かす Honestly the MC was a touch... cringe... in the beginning, but by the time I caught up to the most recent chapter I was silently screaming "Noooooo" cause i really wanted more. Fun, funny, and entertaining, I like that our MC is stuck in a world he didnt want and is still just making the best of it. Hoping for more updates, this deserves to continue
В начале было более-менее интересно,и то интерес был скорее из за самого мира который автор выбрал,но читая все дальше и дальше становилось скучно,во первых МС нытик,он не попал в DxD,почему бы не написать несколько глав о том как главный герой будет ныть об этом,во вторых Автор мало уделяеть внимание для описание окружающего мира,описываеться только то что видит гг,и из за этого резкие переходы от одной сцены в другую,что опять же делает все хуже,и в третьех МС хочет уйдти по скорее уйдти в DxD,но он даже не благодарен что ему дали шанс на нлвую жизнь,а лишь жалуеться что оказалься не в том мире,а тот факт что ему дали шанс на новую жизнь,а ещё в будущем выбор на мир в котором он может оказаться,и он ещё жалуеться,раздражаеть,из за чего читать станлвиться невозможно,и такие моменты пропускаешь,и читать окпзываеться нечего,так как Автор решил все по быстрому написать ,как будто хотел что бы от него по быстрее отвалили
Bruh... its been a month or something.. is the author doing something In real life that makes him/her busy..? .w. shame if this nice fanfic got dropped.
Well, the main problems of this story is that the protagonist keeps complaining without knowing anything about the background of what he is talking about, an attitude of everything makes me lazy, which is very irritating, his communication skills are very low and the plot is move. seek to please the system
Overall a really good fanfic ,well written a bit cringe /silly but not unbearable, that even add a good mood while reading. I think you should not hesitate to expand the harem (not disproportionate and not pokeharem). But with the pace of the story there is no problem. Please don't set yourself a limit especially if there will be another universe after it. (yeah I have a preference for big harem:) everything is in the pace also I love the pov chapter. The only default is the gap in the last updates. A bit scared that it will slowly be longer and longer. Thanks to the author, just don't forget that there will always be people who trash talk /dislike your choice but ultimately it's your stories. Good luck with the following.
The author has no idea about most of the things in the plot (I guess he didn't read any of the web novel or the light novel), then the worst thing is the mc whose personality is a combination of: a jerk who thinks he has all the answers when he really knows nothing, his entire existence is based on obeying the system, a playboy attempt (this is more embarrassing than unbearable) The plot is just copy and paste from the anime (but with a protagonist trying to be cool) so don't wait long. Anyway, if you read the novel or are a fan, don't read this.
To begin with, I want to say that it is my opinion based on the fact that if I follow both the web novel and the light novel, I did not only watch the anime, that being said, it is a terrible story, I do not recommend it to anyone. The problem with this story is that the author has not read anything about the conflict and the background of the world, added to the fact that his mc's attitude is horrible, it seems that he has identity problems and his only reason for existing is to do what he orders the system you have. There are things that the author does well but they are very small. I advise you to rewrite this story after getting better information, as well as defining a single personality for the protagonist.
Spending all my nights, all my money going out on the town Doing anything just to get you off of my mind But when the morning comes, I'm right back where I started again And tryin' to forget you is just a waste of time Baby come back, any kind of fool could see There was something in everything about you Baby come back, you can blame it all on me I was wrong and I just can't live without you
Great story. Nice change to the MC. I also can't wait until you start the lemons. Keep up the good work and story-telling. Also, loving he is getting all the girls without even trying. Even though he's acting like he doesn't care. The MC does, which makes it even better.
overall it's very good 👍👍👍👍. Especially in the part when MC becomes a champion for Angelica where the MC doesn't challenge directly like Leon in the original series but after Angelica declares a duel so that the MC won't be badly affected and has bad public images from directly challenging the crown prince and his minions.
ネタバレを明かす Todo lo que digo es que está bueno y que se suba más de esta joya , no hay muchos de estas , los voy a guardar,cuidar y apreciar , voy a estar atento a este fanfic para si o si leerlo
Buena escritura, es el primer fanfic que veo de este manga por lo que es muy entretenido. ......[img=recommend] ................ ................. .......
MC is boring especially chapters 13-14 and doesn't take his world seriously.............................................................................................................................................................................................. .....
ネタバレを明かす Whole thing is treated like he isnt part of the world. Ik he doesnt want to be there but he has parent and a new name there but mc is like nope. Use my ian as name even tho everyone calls him that worlds name. Mc is just treating it puke nothing real. This is main problem with world hoping ffs in general. No real character growth and barley anything really original going on. Author hates on negative comments when most may not be worded politely but alot speak the truth. Hope some like it but mc and world hoping and how he treats his predicament ruins it
I recently read the novel, and it was so delightful. It had me laughing and cheering on the edge of my seat from start to finish. This adorable novel is the perfect blend of comedy, adventure, school drama, sword, and magic, and so much more. From the first page, I was drawn in by the idea of the story being explained so clearly. The characters were so charming and relatable that I immediately found myself invested in their lives and struggles. But this novel is much more than a comedy - it's also an exciting adventure that made me enjoy reading. The action scenes are expertly choreographed, with every sword thrust and magic spell described in vivid detail. Overall, I cannot recommend this book highly enough.
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An amazing piece of work you’ve written, its an anime genre that not alot of people have explored and the characters keep their personalities intact. Main character is also reasonably sensible and the plot isnt wack.
havent read it but i already know its a banger because of the harem tag please make it a massive pokemon collection author!!!
Never thought I would write fan fiction. But here we are. As the author, it is an obligation that I rate it 5 stars, but that's not a claim that it's worth that much. But I have been having fun writing this, so it is a 5/5 for me. Thanks for giving this humble creation a try, if you did. That's more than what I can ask for. :)