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'must have been the wind' well your other novels were god but this is not. I don't know how to express myself.
A good and entertaining story. I am very curious how the the characters and lore will develop. Hopefully there isn't another 7 month gap because i am really curious to see how the MC grows.
Author please pick this back up I really enjoy this book and was pretty disappointed that you dropped it
i really hope new chapters get released soon. i am very eager to read more of the story.
author, don't tell me you dropped this phenomenal piece of art if so please pick it back up
fantastic read I want to wait till it has more chapters but it's just to good
This novel is a pretty good one, prob the best i've read in a while, its a pity though it doesn't have many chs yet as i would smash them right away.Anyway this novel has pretty good potential. Hope it doesn't get dropped soon👍👍👍👍
I really like this I pray it's not dropped, I have been searching for a longer version of this but nothing reached the quality of this
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the backstory or "event" of the protagonist tends to take up too much focus all the time. I understand that the protagonist has a tragic past (which may come across as cliché), but I was hoping for a stronger focus on the protagonist's present actions and experiences. the author seems to be trying too hard with the dark elements, which don't feel natural
I love the story development but could you fix him please make him let the let the world now what happened to him and how he suffered the what drove him to suicide
I have read 24 chapters. Let's just say it started off well. We know a little about Mc and its surroundings. We still do not know the characteristics and limits of the newly awakened MC's powers. A story would be great if it wasn't for the sister thing I hate the most.
Only on the early chapters so far but I am really enjoying the story it has the perfect mix of dark moments and comedy
Ero..... if I remember right he's also called cupid. Btw good novel. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Very interested premise and promising. Curious when the villain tag will come into play though, I am excited for him to break and bring carnage
wow! I'm impressed! this book is really dark, but also quite funny. in the first 10 chaps it's already noticeable that the characteristics of the main character are by no means monotonous, which really surprised me, since it's really different from similar looking books! the sm*t is written really well and seems quite realistic and the power concept is innovative and also seems way more realistic and balanced than most common used systems. I think this novel has great potential and hope the author doesn't drop it. I'm looking forward to new chaps!!
Eu gostei, gostei da construção de mundo e dos personagens principalmente. Principalmente a construção de mundo, é uma coisa simples mas bem feito, nada daquelas coisas extremamente complicadas que nem mesmo entendemos direito o que está acontecendo.
'must have been the wind' well your other novels were god but this is not. I don't know how to express myself.
A good and entertaining story. I am very curious how the the characters and lore will develop. Hopefully there isn't another 7 month gap because i am really curious to see how the MC grows.
Author please pick this back up I really enjoy this book and was pretty disappointed that you dropped it
i really hope new chapters get released soon. i am very eager to read more of the story.
author, don't tell me you dropped this phenomenal piece of art if so please pick it back up
fantastic read I want to wait till it has more chapters but it's just to good
This novel is a pretty good one, prob the best i've read in a while, its a pity though it doesn't have many chs yet as i would smash them right away.Anyway this novel has pretty good potential. Hope it doesn't get dropped soon👍👍👍👍
I really like this I pray it's not dropped, I have been searching for a longer version of this but nothing reached the quality of this
Very nice................................................... Very nice................................................... Very nice................................................... Very nice................................................... Very nice................................................... Very nice................................................... Very nice................................................... Very nice...................................................
the backstory or "event" of the protagonist tends to take up too much focus all the time. I understand that the protagonist has a tragic past (which may come across as cliché), but I was hoping for a stronger focus on the protagonist's present actions and experiences. the author seems to be trying too hard with the dark elements, which don't feel natural
I love the story development but could you fix him please make him let the let the world now what happened to him and how he suffered the what drove him to suicide
I have read 24 chapters. Let's just say it started off well. We know a little about Mc and its surroundings. We still do not know the characteristics and limits of the newly awakened MC's powers. A story would be great if it wasn't for the sister thing I hate the most.
Only on the early chapters so far but I am really enjoying the story it has the perfect mix of dark moments and comedy
Ero..... if I remember right he's also called cupid. Btw good novel. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Very interested premise and promising. Curious when the villain tag will come into play though, I am excited for him to break and bring carnage
wow! I'm impressed! this book is really dark, but also quite funny. in the first 10 chaps it's already noticeable that the characteristics of the main character are by no means monotonous, which really surprised me, since it's really different from similar looking books! the sm*t is written really well and seems quite realistic and the power concept is innovative and also seems way more realistic and balanced than most common used systems. I think this novel has great potential and hope the author doesn't drop it. I'm looking forward to new chaps!!
Eu gostei, gostei da construção de mundo e dos personagens principalmente. Principalmente a construção de mundo, é uma coisa simples mas bem feito, nada daquelas coisas extremamente complicadas que nem mesmo entendemos direito o que está acontecendo.