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The best, I love this book! Author, tell me, what, besides honkai, were you inspired by when writing this fan fiction? Other fan fiction? Ent? One hundred percent manga by honkai…
Great fan fiction, well-thought-out story, great presages, plus, there's my favorite Tuna here! Everything is on top! The idea and the concept are wonderful, a very exciting plot!
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I like this story too much. Such an interesting background, just makes me want to read the story more. I really REALLY hope you won't drop the story any time soon. I'm looking forward to more updates.....
I love fix fics. Although Their development was a bit fast and grammar is arguably equal to Google translate, the plot and progression is great. I like that MC's genre savvyness is used to full effect, and the decision of not helping the mass murdering Sirin is a great change of pace from most other fix fics where they deus ex machina save Sirin.
Thank you Kayo! Although angst may arrive, happiness is nothing without it. Happy tuna is best tuna. :D May you be blessed for this beauty of a fic
👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌.................. ...... .... ... .... . . . .....
This is one of the best Honkai Fic not following the Canon and grammar and structure are on point. and Most of All I love Kiana The Tuna...
This is surprisingly well though out fan fiction. The characters actions and emotion is also on point when compared to the game. Although the mc is childish I think she's being affected by kiana's body age. Definitely deserve high score in all categories. I recommend watching animated shorts in YouTube to have at least an idea on how good the honkai impact 3rd story. Title i recommend in animated shorts is final lesson, everlasting flame, because of you and thus spoke apocalypse.
Me alegra saber que siga la historia honkai impacto ya que la mayoría no hace historia de este gran juego ajala no lo abandones a mitad de camino ya que la mayoría la deja dónde está me gusta tu historia sigue asi
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Too much of the past for one to memorize Too many words remained for one to read through the lines The ebb and flow of the crowd floods the world and paradise Along the path of time Every night brings a dream but the day, relentlessly, keeps me awake All the rest will be torn up whenever a choice is made Every living soul in the fray striving for their own safe place Life is too long to end at a grave Just a drop of water sufficеs Encompassed and swallowed through space by thе universe Back to the source Gone are those years living for a reason Here it comes the moment of the scene of lost and found
Besides some minor mistakes with grammer, it's honestly a very good read. I offer you a 5/5.
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It's now extremely rare for authors to write Honkai Impact fanfiction, much more a good grammar, story outline, and etc. So here's the five star⭐✨. And please I'm begging you don't ever think about dropping this Jem
while i love elysia, kiana will always be my favorite character in honkai, and seeing a story like this makes me happy. ps: i, who was an f2p in the end up, buying a whole lot of gems to get the whole set for kiana herrscher of finality
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a really amazing concept!!!!!, and this has really big potential, the grammar and sentence structures are on point, and this story is about helping our favorite tuna, even tho only 4 chs aer released, this story is really good so all in all, if u truly love honkai and its story and not the waifus alone then this story is one of the best and u defo need to try it, i will post another review after 10 ch and 20 ch author please dont drop this diamond
It's a good story, even tho it just 2 chapter but, i can see it. the potential is soo good
Need more salt,.....................................................................................................................................................o.o
The best, I love this book! Author, tell me, what, besides honkai, were you inspired by when writing this fan fiction? Other fan fiction? Ent? One hundred percent manga by honkai…
Great fan fiction, well-thought-out story, great presages, plus, there's my favorite Tuna here! Everything is on top! The idea and the concept are wonderful, a very exciting plot!
Kiana vamos[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like this story too much. Such an interesting background, just makes me want to read the story more. I really REALLY hope you won't drop the story any time soon. I'm looking forward to more updates.....
I love fix fics. Although Their development was a bit fast and grammar is arguably equal to Google translate, the plot and progression is great. I like that MC's genre savvyness is used to full effect, and the decision of not helping the mass murdering Sirin is a great change of pace from most other fix fics where they deus ex machina save Sirin.
Thank you Kayo! Although angst may arrive, happiness is nothing without it. Happy tuna is best tuna. :D May you be blessed for this beauty of a fic
👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌.................. ...... .... ... .... . . . .....
This is one of the best Honkai Fic not following the Canon and grammar and structure are on point. and Most of All I love Kiana The Tuna...
This is surprisingly well though out fan fiction. The characters actions and emotion is also on point when compared to the game. Although the mc is childish I think she's being affected by kiana's body age. Definitely deserve high score in all categories. I recommend watching animated shorts in YouTube to have at least an idea on how good the honkai impact 3rd story. Title i recommend in animated shorts is final lesson, everlasting flame, because of you and thus spoke apocalypse.
Me alegra saber que siga la historia honkai impacto ya que la mayoría no hace historia de este gran juego ajala no lo abandones a mitad de camino ya que la mayoría la deja dónde está me gusta tu historia sigue asi
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Too much of the past for one to memorize Too many words remained for one to read through the lines The ebb and flow of the crowd floods the world and paradise Along the path of time Every night brings a dream but the day, relentlessly, keeps me awake All the rest will be torn up whenever a choice is made Every living soul in the fray striving for their own safe place Life is too long to end at a grave Just a drop of water sufficеs Encompassed and swallowed through space by thе universe Back to the source Gone are those years living for a reason Here it comes the moment of the scene of lost and found
Besides some minor mistakes with grammer, it's honestly a very good read. I offer you a 5/5.
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It's now extremely rare for authors to write Honkai Impact fanfiction, much more a good grammar, story outline, and etc. So here's the five star⭐✨. And please I'm begging you don't ever think about dropping this Jem
while i love elysia, kiana will always be my favorite character in honkai, and seeing a story like this makes me happy. ps: i, who was an f2p in the end up, buying a whole lot of gems to get the whole set for kiana herrscher of finality
Yuri.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.......................................................................................................................................
a really amazing concept!!!!!, and this has really big potential, the grammar and sentence structures are on point, and this story is about helping our favorite tuna, even tho only 4 chs aer released, this story is really good so all in all, if u truly love honkai and its story and not the waifus alone then this story is one of the best and u defo need to try it, i will post another review after 10 ch and 20 ch author please dont drop this diamond
It's a good story, even tho it just 2 chapter but, i can see it. the potential is soo good
Need more salt,.....................................................................................................................................................o.o