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ok i don't like the story write from 3rd pov like 80% of the time I like the story going just not this type story telling its hard for me to really going in to the book when it tell from that pov just to much monologue all the time this make me thing just like a children book my parents read it to me but I'm still Reading it just have to force my self with it??
Hi, I'm loving your book - it's a true gem! Are you planning to release an updated edition or explore new ways to share your work with even more readers
You keep repeating the same story over again Please, I do like the story setting but you keep repeating the same story in a roundabouts way
great novel overall, really excellent at developing the various characters. If I have a gripe it's that it is to slow which is inherently a bad thing but I'm skirting the line between interested and bored. With the constant slow pace I can't bring myself to use anymore points on unlocking chapters. I don't mind it being slow for a few chapters but a lot of the stuff covered in the slow chapters has been covered repeatedly. I'm often paying to read the same content just in a new setting ie now instead of him thinking about it while sitting on a horse he is explaining it to someone.. which makes sense logically but for a reader it's redundant information. Not saying that it needs more action just needs more things than it's currently giving me.
this novel is very good, in my opinion butone this I don't like tho is it's too drawn out than necessary. the mc will be talking about the same thing for like 2-3 chapters it's kinda infuriating to me but overall it's very good give it a try guys
currently my favorite novel even with how with how little chapters there are I hope you continue with this novel because it looks promising
Was thinking of not reading since the book can easily be drop like the last son of terra and the others. he gets you excited and dump you
liked the novel very much and just want to say that please do not bring in soldiers from a portal by using the system to make an army like some novels with systems do for the mc and update regularly
would be good the author can write nice but over does ot by writing the same paragraph six times worded differently. I don't meed read a thesaurus. I've given up after 90 chapters got bored the story constantly repetive no real progress theese 90 chapters could of been done in 15. the system loosely talked about more quest for mc grow and develop is needed. the story concep t is great would live read more but got so repetive and slow I had give up .
ok i don't like the story write from 3rd pov like 80% of the time I like the story going just not this type story telling its hard for me to really going in to the book when it tell from that pov just to much monologue all the time this make me thing just like a children book my parents read it to me but I'm still Reading it just have to force my self with it??
Hi, I'm loving your book - it's a true gem! Are you planning to release an updated edition or explore new ways to share your work with even more readers
You keep repeating the same story over again Please, I do like the story setting but you keep repeating the same story in a roundabouts way
great novel overall, really excellent at developing the various characters. If I have a gripe it's that it is to slow which is inherently a bad thing but I'm skirting the line between interested and bored. With the constant slow pace I can't bring myself to use anymore points on unlocking chapters. I don't mind it being slow for a few chapters but a lot of the stuff covered in the slow chapters has been covered repeatedly. I'm often paying to read the same content just in a new setting ie now instead of him thinking about it while sitting on a horse he is explaining it to someone.. which makes sense logically but for a reader it's redundant information. Not saying that it needs more action just needs more things than it's currently giving me.
this novel is very good, in my opinion butone this I don't like tho is it's too drawn out than necessary. the mc will be talking about the same thing for like 2-3 chapters it's kinda infuriating to me but overall it's very good give it a try guys
currently my favorite novel even with how with how little chapters there are I hope you continue with this novel because it looks promising
Was thinking of not reading since the book can easily be drop like the last son of terra and the others. he gets you excited and dump you
liked the novel very much and just want to say that please do not bring in soldiers from a portal by using the system to make an army like some novels with systems do for the mc and update regularly
would be good the author can write nice but over does ot by writing the same paragraph six times worded differently. I don't meed read a thesaurus. I've given up after 90 chapters got bored the story constantly repetive no real progress theese 90 chapters could of been done in 15. the system loosely talked about more quest for mc grow and develop is needed. the story concep t is great would live read more but got so repetive and slow I had give up .