Chapter 30

Sydney sat down beside Tai taking a cool wash cloth across Tai's forehead smiling at her softly then kissed her forehead, Tai's pupils were fully dilated with her thoughts going a thousand miles a minute.

" Sydney...kill me " Tai whispered holding Sydney's hand who shook her head without making Tai laugh, she leaned down kissing Tai's lips while cupping her cheeks.

" you're going to be fine, you'll be even better than we are " Sydney said against Tais lips while undoing the restraints straddling Tai who raised up hugging Sydney tightly as she grinded against her as they passionately kiss, Tai pulled Sydney's shirt off while accidentally ripping her pants off as Sydney takes her nails down Tais back moaning when Tai kisses her neck and sucks on her pulse point.

" still want me to kill you " Sydney asked as they strip off her last bit of clothing guiding Tai into her entrance slamming down making them both moan as Sydney rotates her hips while slowly moving up and down turning up the IV while Tai takes her hardened nipple in her mouth making Sydney moan louder.

Rory walked up to the door with some food for them also with their food then stopped putting her ear to the door, she sighed then still walked in as both women kept going at it.

" don't mind me I'll be over here listening to my headset" Rory said quickly walking into a small office closing the door then the blinds, Sydney chuckled then her mouth takes an "o" shape when Tai rammed hard inside her.

" AHHHH HAAH OHHH " Sydney moans out while clenching her walls tightly around Tais member making her moan out along with her while she releases inside of Sydney who does the same as they ride out their orgasm making Tai fall back in the bed where Sydney quickly strapped her back down to the bed hopping off of her looking at her ripped pants with her panties then sighs looking over at the office door pulling her shirt on then knocking on the door.

" come on in Sydney " Rory said sighing while kicking her feet up in the desk watching Sydney walk in with only a t-shirt on making her snicker at the ripped clothes she's carrying.

" what makes you think I have extra clothes in this room" Rory said biting into her sandwich, Sydney smiled then grabbed the other sandwich and ate it while opening the blinds to watch Tai who was sleeping again.

" you know I'm just as wishful as you are that she pulls through, I've never had someone get my attention like she does and soon we will have to leave here to follow her crazy plan to go back to the cabin so she won't leave behind her people than keep heading to the top looking for a cure that only exists if a person can grasp the virus adapt to it if you will...I'm getting closer plus with your sister now with me I'm sure we are a step closer, the only thing that worries me is your father plus how many infected he's throwing out filling this mountain while the infected is going rampant outside " Rory said, they get the notification that everything is packed up and everyone is accounted for as they say goodbyes then making sure they had directions to the cabin. Sydney had made love to Tai more often to where they was able to finish the I.V. that had a virus inside that would help Tai from turning into one of the undead ones that will splice bodies to their own growing in size, power and Numbers.

Watching Tai have a seizure and runs out of her office with Sydney behind her running over to help hold Tai down while Rory gives her a injection.

" there she's fine " Rory said when she leaned down to look at Tais pupils she gasps when Tai grabs her hand breaking the restraints pulling Rory closer to her face then gently kisses her lips.

" Tai " Rory gasps out then kisses her back making Sydney clear her throat then straddles Tai's lap making Rory chuckle.

" go get some joggers from the desk drawer " Rory said taking the straps off as Tai stretches, Rory checked the wounds that have completely healed and Sydney brought in the clothes they had prepared for Tai earlier.

" have you all packed everything up and ready to leave " Tai said pulling up the pants then the sports bra with both girls watching her every move.

" everything and everyone were made to head back to the cabin with Sai watching over them, your pets are with Olivia also Rio has taking a liking to Hina so you lost your pet...you've also been down here for 36 hours, we were getting ready to pack you in the vehicle that left ready for us " Sydney said typing away on the tablet as she fries all of the mainframes in the place.

" let's go before we have Visitors" Rory said while blushing making Sydney scoff then walk away while making the other see her frying the mainframes. Tai double checked all the floors finding different creatures inside the cells who seem calm around her but would get worked up around Rory.

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Some humble learnings from my personal writing experience

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May 05,2023

Some humble learnings from my personal writing experience

My dear friends who may chance upon this note, I hope that life and times is treating you well.

My name is Xiang Yan.

I've come to hear that some of the chapters of my novel, "Mages Are Too OP", have been translated to English. They have been uploaded to the international site for sampling by our international friends, and have even attained recommended status. While I'm pleasantly surprised by this, I'm also terrified.

Because my Editor tells me that he hopes I can share an essay on my writing experience.

This worries me.

Because I'm not by any means outstanding in my capabilities as a web novel author, I just barely meet the mark. Am I really qualified to write web novel tutorials?

After having thought about this for half a day, I finally made the decision to take the plunge: I'll write it!

However, I don't wish to write just a plain tutorial. Rather, I wish to share some of my personal experience from having written for the internet audience for well over ten years.　　

Through writing this, my hope is to help my friends out there who have a love for internet writing, and who love to write.

Among the internet writers whom I know, there are a variety of ways and habits when it comes to pre-writing preparation.

Before they commence a piece of writing, many web novelists will lay a foundation through writing a story flow outline of a few hundred words - cause, process, outcome! They will only commence writing the story proper after they have decided on the simple story flow. In the process of writing, they will develop and add details to the main outline - adding on the frills, so to speak. At the same time they gradually mould this world they are creating - the design of its geographical conditions and its races etc, to perfection.

On the other hand, another profile of web novelists, for example myself, have the habit of first designing a high level perspective of the world we're creating. We will set up roughly its geographical environments, the races, as well as the customs of this world, or even, the capability of each race, power relationships etc.

Once the environment of the world has been created, the creation of the protagonist follows. This involves the set up of information on the protagonist's identity, background, personality, capability etc. In combining the protagonist's personality and background to come up with an aspiration or end goal for the character, this also creates the story's ending.

Then you place the protagonist in the world that you've set up, along with his identity and personality. You will have to consider how this character will interact with the other forces, organizations and individuals in this world.

Continue to develop the plot one step at a time.　　

Each of these two methods has its own advantages.

The first method of setting up the outline followed by the details gives you better control over the whole story and therefore a better flow of the plot may be achieved. However if the story is not skilfully written, it can easily become process-driven and the story will read like a routine.

On the other hand, the second method is more "random" as it lacks details. The plot development is almost driven by the personality of the protagonist. Many a time, even the author himself may start to lose sight of what's going to happen next.

However, the disadvantages are obvious. It's easy to lose inspiration and get stuck in a rut. Because the story is driven by the protagonist's personality, the story may end up looking like it doesn't have a storyline. It can appear aimless and leaves one wondering what the protagonist is going to do next. It's easy for the reader to feel lost.

Although I use the latter method, it's not something that I would recommend, because if you get stuck in the process of writing, it can be very agonizing. The first method is always better, whether you're writing for the first time, or you're an experienced author.

After all, a web novel may go on for an extended period of time. As you write, you may unconsciously "evolve" the protagonist's personality. 　

This puts you at an even greater risk of getting stuck and makes writing all the more difficult.　　

Since we're talking about the personality of the protagonist, I should mention that in our nation's current web novel scene, the most popular protagonist personality type is the cool and calm type - the sort of character that remains unfazed even when the world is crumbling all around them. In addition, the character may be coquettish deep down inside, but outwardly, they have to display their "cool" and "steady" characteristics.

This is the current market trend.

It's best to avoid creating protagonists who are the sort that go hysterical when they run themselves into a situation, but turn smooth-talkers the moment they run into a beautiful girl.

Of course, if you are able to make these characters very interesting ones, then that's a different story altogether.

In fact, I personally think that the most important thing for a web novel is that it's interesting.

The method is not all that important.

Interesting incidents, an interesting world, interesting systems etc.

So even if there may be some contradictions in your plot, or discrepancies in your set up at times, as long as you've made the story interesting, the readers will likely be generous in forgiving you, and continue to read your story.

Hence for the novice web novelist, you may find that an interesting idea or concept can give your novel a popularity boost and draw more readers. Even if your story falls apart later on, because an overabundance of ideas or imagination has caused it to be disjointed, you will still have the confidence to continue writing, and to chalk up more experience so that your next novel will be better.

After all, many authors often lose the confidence to continue writing after they step into the world of web novels, because they don't get enough readers.

After you've built your imaginary world and introduced your cool and steady protagonist, provide a simple introduction to depict the character's current situation and environment. On top of this, add an element of suspense to create a sense of anticipation for the reader. This way, you would have created the beginnings of a successful novel.

However, this is just a pass.

Following this, you need to consider how you might want to manage the protagonist's relationships with the "non-player characters" (NPC) as well as the other forces. Everyone will differ in their ideas and writing styles, hence the output will differ greatly.

Even when writing about the same situation, authors who excel in emotional descriptions and authors who excel in a more narrative approach will deliver outputs that are vastly different, in terms of writing styles and story atmospheres.

How do you write in a way that attracts more readers?

Where this is concerned, I guess no one can hand-hold you to teach you. Like what I've mentioned above, individual authors differ greatly in their thought processes and writing styles. It's difficult to replicate someone else's successful experience.

The only way is to write more.

As you write more, you will shape and establish your own characteristic style, and this problem will resolve by itself.

An unique writing style is also one of the magic keys to attract readers.

I consider myself to have only barely made it, in this journey of web novel authoring, and the above is merely my personal shallow experience. I stand humbly to be corrected by you, my friends.

Thank you!

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