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The story has one of the best power system . The story is good and have a good pace of things , but the updates are slow .
Reading Status: C147 Well written, with an original power for the MC (order), nice character development, and a well-designed background. It doesn't lack anything to compete against the top novels on Webnovel (well, maybe more chapters). For the negatives: The stability of updates is poor, and some may consider the story really slow at some points (though in my book, that's just a preference). All in all, I highly suggest reading this novel.
Beautiful and well thought out story. I hope that the author will increase the pace of publication of chapters.
The story has a beautiful depth and the power system in it is new, and the characters have depth. I recommend reading it. I am in chapter 10, and it attracted me strongly
Book is marvellous and has a lot of potential- that is my own opinion. I can't wait to see how author unfolds the story with the small tidbits he gives us every now and then. If he keeps at it I truly that believe this book can be a masterpiece.
Amazing book, loved it at the first chapter, amazing storyline that will get you seated for more, personally love the character personalization and the dialogues are nice.
The writing has a beautiful description style. It is also good at introducing plots and ending them. The mini cliche's are also fun. The character design although a bit old fashioned is fair enough. Also the story has quite a lot of content. The places are described good enough that a person can get the idea of the place.
Its a great novel, with a interesting forst chapter and thick intriguing plot, i think it easily deserves 5 Stars Well done author.
Well, am not a fan of this kind of story but I got hooked with yours. I really love it so do keep flowing and write what you think is best and cool for the story. Kudos!!
I've been told I'm very generous with my reviews but what do y'all know. All I can say is good grammar and interesting plot. To be honest I'm just waiting for the academy and romance part.
Okay I'm currently at chapter 5 so maybe this review will not do the book much justice. However, writing quality is good. The author uses simple and easy to understand vocabulary. So five stars. The story itself seems interesting enough but once again I'm at chapter 5 but so far so good. The characters are okay. At least they don't seem like fillers or extras yet. A chapter a day is good but for binge readers like me I feel author should increase number of chapters per day. I think novel will get much stronger following then. World background- I'm at chapter five so... Overall, thumbs up author. Keep up the good work.
Looking good so far, keep writing and don't stop you'll reach high views soon bro if I could give 6 stars then I would lol
I'd be crazy if I didn't give my first book 5 stars. Shamelessness? You bet! With the amount of work and time I've poured into it, 5 stars is the least I can do. I'm just trying to write the best novel I can at my level. Maybe it's good, maybe it's not. Just do check it out.✌
The story has one of the best power system . The story is good and have a good pace of things , but the updates are slow .
Reading Status: C147 Well written, with an original power for the MC (order), nice character development, and a well-designed background. It doesn't lack anything to compete against the top novels on Webnovel (well, maybe more chapters). For the negatives: The stability of updates is poor, and some may consider the story really slow at some points (though in my book, that's just a preference). All in all, I highly suggest reading this novel.
Beautiful and well thought out story. I hope that the author will increase the pace of publication of chapters.
The story has a beautiful depth and the power system in it is new, and the characters have depth. I recommend reading it. I am in chapter 10, and it attracted me strongly
Book is marvellous and has a lot of potential- that is my own opinion. I can't wait to see how author unfolds the story with the small tidbits he gives us every now and then. If he keeps at it I truly that believe this book can be a masterpiece.
Amazing book, loved it at the first chapter, amazing storyline that will get you seated for more, personally love the character personalization and the dialogues are nice.
The writing has a beautiful description style. It is also good at introducing plots and ending them. The mini cliche's are also fun. The character design although a bit old fashioned is fair enough. Also the story has quite a lot of content. The places are described good enough that a person can get the idea of the place.
Its a great novel, with a interesting forst chapter and thick intriguing plot, i think it easily deserves 5 Stars Well done author.
Well, am not a fan of this kind of story but I got hooked with yours. I really love it so do keep flowing and write what you think is best and cool for the story. Kudos!!
I've been told I'm very generous with my reviews but what do y'all know. All I can say is good grammar and interesting plot. To be honest I'm just waiting for the academy and romance part.
Okay I'm currently at chapter 5 so maybe this review will not do the book much justice. However, writing quality is good. The author uses simple and easy to understand vocabulary. So five stars. The story itself seems interesting enough but once again I'm at chapter 5 but so far so good. The characters are okay. At least they don't seem like fillers or extras yet. A chapter a day is good but for binge readers like me I feel author should increase number of chapters per day. I think novel will get much stronger following then. World background- I'm at chapter five so... Overall, thumbs up author. Keep up the good work.
Looking good so far, keep writing and don't stop you'll reach high views soon bro if I could give 6 stars then I would lol
I'd be crazy if I didn't give my first book 5 stars. Shamelessness? You bet! With the amount of work and time I've poured into it, 5 stars is the least I can do. I'm just trying to write the best novel I can at my level. Maybe it's good, maybe it's not. Just do check it out.✌