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RaeJenBib

This is a very engaging story. the characters are interesting and the story is gripping. the only issue is there are a lot of typos but they do not detract from the story or the reading much and typos are very common on this app. It is a really good read and I recommend giving a try

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Ayoni02

I'm at chapter 400 and I've decided to just stop reading now. I like his other story with the game thing and even though it feels similar, this MC is just hollow The progression feels inconsistent and the world is just weird. I say author is good at writing but whatever this is, it's just not good. This would be my first time dropping a completed book before it's completed and my OCD will hate me for it. But I'm tired of sleeping off in the middle of reading everytime

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FhailBhais

Aoki never disappoints. I've read three novels by him so far and keeping up with a fourth as he publishes it here, and every time I find myself captivated by the characters and the world they inhabit. Highly recommend checking out any works by this author.

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icehellfire

it could have been a great book if only the author kept up with what he did as the snow demon and had some action or serious moments.

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Sfw_Mage

I enjoyed the book, didn't think I would but I did.... My only issue is whenever I come to this app this is the only "limited" free book. It doesn't really see limited when it's the only available one. Any clue as to why?

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rimuru_sama

bro. do you eat books to have this kind of writing style? it's literally so flawless. it's the kind of style i don't see often on here. the descriptions, world building and character designs are cool upto we're ive read ngl

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Kergonan

Inheritor of Magic: The Magi King I really enjoyed Aoki Akus previous novel, Humanity’s Greatest Mecha Warrior System, so I came to to tale hoping it would be to fantasy what its predecessor had been to SF/space-opera. The basic setting is a post-apocalyptic one with contemporary level technology with a bit of low level magic in some places, including the protagonists hometown, but it progressively evolves into a high- magic or high magictech (depending on the locations) thanks to the intervention of the main character and his friend (at first) and the nation they build (later). It is well-made, especially since the story first involves a small region, but moves by increments to larger regions, continent, the world and others planes inhabited by faes, demons or other entities. The cast is quite mostly nicely done. The protagonist, Wolfe Noxus is an intelligent, resourceful, witty, practical, kind and horny magic users who knows how to make the best of the circumstances he comes upon and the increasingly greater powers he wields (in fact, he tends to be too good sometimes). His circle of friends, most of them females are also quite well-written, particularly if you consider this is a harem novel. The ones closest to him, like Cassie, Ella, Stephanie or Rail, are really well-written with their merits and flaws, definitely no daft bimbos (although not at the level of Nico in the previous story, as the quality of the character writing is spread among the love interests). Other characters tend to be well-made, although some antagonists (there is no real big bad enemy) feel a bit one dimensional. The power system is built relatively well. It is rated in scale from 1 to 9 (with two important levels being 7- Saint and 9- King), with different kind of being (magi, witch, fae, demon, mage, etc …) having different access or proficiencies in wielding various kind of magic (like witches being better at healing). The peculiar perk of the MC being that he is the only Magi in the world after a near-extermination of the bloodline, which is quite advantageous as magi are the best and most varied elemental magic users and have the highest power mana reserves among all. The only problem at this level being that progression can seem a bit rough at times. The biggest flaw of the novel is the story itself. No, let me rephrase that, the last third of the story is the biggest flaw of the novel. The first two thirds are amazing, a great mix of exploration, adventure, action, slice of life, romance (with a dash of R18 content) civilization-building and magic based macgyverism. Sadly, toward the last third of the novel, two things happen. First Wolfe becomes too strong for the setting, pretty much no one represents a danger to him and his close circle, the antagonists are no challenge to him and the few who could be actually be dangerous are either friendly or reasonable enough to solve conflicts without threats or violence. And second, as a consequence, the story turns almost entirely to slice of life, civilization and family building complete with doses of pointless technical details the reader to power through has to power through, only alighted by the ancient history details or humour. At that point, the story is a walk in the park for the protagonist. The writing is what allowed me to finish the novel, for it has energy, humour (lots of innuendos and puns) and shows Aoki Aku still has what it takes when it comes to style. The only issue here is the typo, as a few persist even in the latter chapter. So, Inheritor of Magic: The Magi King is still a fair novel, with fine characters, interesting setting, good power system and great writing, but it is let down by a poor last third of the story. My final verdict is a low 7 out of 10. I still consider Aoki Aku as a very good author and I will read his other novels in due time, but here this novel made me want to look at other novelists in the meantime. Kergonan out.

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Barnyard

Amazing. Start to finish. Couldn't put it down.

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Ret_Tri

In my Top 3 ever read books. MC is smart, doesn't get shocked at everything he didn't know yet. FLs have good written out characters. No need for face-slapping stuff etc. Would have had potential for more story, which is why I'm deducting 1 star there, but the ending is fine as well.

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bjhouse
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one of my favorite reads on here. i started when there were less than 200 published chapters and couldn't wait for the update each day. keep up the good work author!!

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EldestLord53

the story, the interactions, the characters were outstanding. however, it became quite annoying how they kept exposing things or saying things that aren't meant to be said. Despite being imaginative illustrations a few actuality should have been added. I had to go through so many accounts in webnovel just to finish this book. and I'm glad i was about to finish it with my main account. I totally love your work

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ash_star

I solutes you author you should keep writing

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Tyrel_Unsell

Great story that is very immersing. Good job, Author!

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Laistrygon_77

I thoroughly enjoyed this book and hope to read more from the author like it ☺️

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Xander_Castillo

I can’t believe the roller coaster of a ride this was. Can’t wait to see what is next!!!

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Ryujen75

A well developed and written story. It was ver enjoyable to read and follow

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Marlon_N_West

It’s a good read I would’ve liked if they would’ve touched on the other families or mentioned if they started coming back. But a satisfying ending nonetheless .

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OmegaYellow

I’ve enjoyed this book. Great story and character development. Keep up the good work.

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Titanspade_807

Absolutely great book. I definitely recommend to anyone who will give this book a try. This is the second book that I have reread, with the other one also being from this author. Great story, great characters, great author. It has been a pleasure to be here. :)

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Madcat1267

This was a trully captivating and entertaining story that was hard to put down.

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Beittin
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What a wild ride. The pacing was great, the characters were memorable, the twists were unexpected enough that it never felt boring. And best of all, the ending felt neither forced nor rushed.

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WhitestShadows

This had me hooked from start to finish. I can't wait to read it again.

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Crwnprince

¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Riebee
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Overall a good read. Wish the story was a bit longer, but it was a decent ending. Thank you for the effort to bring to us readers!

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Joe_Rogers_8641

Can only wait for the hard cover to be published.

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Aiman_Ismail

It was written well with an interesting world setting and mc. however, the story becomes a harem and the writer seems lost in what they want to do around the 300 chp mark. I stopped reading.

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Crwnprince

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Lorcan_Sidhe

Brilliant work as always from this author. I always enjoy reading these books because they're fairly low stakes but also engaging, which is a hard balance to strike. Excellent English and grammar too.

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Marion_Greer

why does it say completed there's still so much to read I need more what happens

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bjhouse
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great story, i thoroughly enjoyed the entire book. maybe a sequel that follows Ivan, Maria, and Calypso would be interesting.

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RaeJenBib

This is a very engaging story. the characters are interesting and the story is gripping. the only issue is there are a lot of typos but they do not detract from the story or the reading much and typos are very common on this app. It is a really good read and I recommend giving a try

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Ayoni02

I'm at chapter 400 and I've decided to just stop reading now. I like his other story with the game thing and even though it feels similar, this MC is just hollow The progression feels inconsistent and the world is just weird. I say author is good at writing but whatever this is, it's just not good. This would be my first time dropping a completed book before it's completed and my OCD will hate me for it. But I'm tired of sleeping off in the middle of reading everytime

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FhailBhais

Aoki never disappoints. I've read three novels by him so far and keeping up with a fourth as he publishes it here, and every time I find myself captivated by the characters and the world they inhabit. Highly recommend checking out any works by this author.

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icehellfire

it could have been a great book if only the author kept up with what he did as the snow demon and had some action or serious moments.

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Sfw_Mage

I enjoyed the book, didn't think I would but I did.... My only issue is whenever I come to this app this is the only "limited" free book. It doesn't really see limited when it's the only available one. Any clue as to why?

24d
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rimuru_sama

bro. do you eat books to have this kind of writing style? it's literally so flawless. it's the kind of style i don't see often on here. the descriptions, world building and character designs are cool upto we're ive read ngl

25d
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Kergonan

Inheritor of Magic: The Magi King I really enjoyed Aoki Akus previous novel, Humanity’s Greatest Mecha Warrior System, so I came to to tale hoping it would be to fantasy what its predecessor had been to SF/space-opera. The basic setting is a post-apocalyptic one with contemporary level technology with a bit of low level magic in some places, including the protagonists hometown, but it progressively evolves into a high- magic or high magictech (depending on the locations) thanks to the intervention of the main character and his friend (at first) and the nation they build (later). It is well-made, especially since the story first involves a small region, but moves by increments to larger regions, continent, the world and others planes inhabited by faes, demons or other entities. The cast is quite mostly nicely done. The protagonist, Wolfe Noxus is an intelligent, resourceful, witty, practical, kind and horny magic users who knows how to make the best of the circumstances he comes upon and the increasingly greater powers he wields (in fact, he tends to be too good sometimes). His circle of friends, most of them females are also quite well-written, particularly if you consider this is a harem novel. The ones closest to him, like Cassie, Ella, Stephanie or Rail, are really well-written with their merits and flaws, definitely no daft bimbos (although not at the level of Nico in the previous story, as the quality of the character writing is spread among the love interests). Other characters tend to be well-made, although some antagonists (there is no real big bad enemy) feel a bit one dimensional. The power system is built relatively well. It is rated in scale from 1 to 9 (with two important levels being 7- Saint and 9- King), with different kind of being (magi, witch, fae, demon, mage, etc …) having different access or proficiencies in wielding various kind of magic (like witches being better at healing). The peculiar perk of the MC being that he is the only Magi in the world after a near-extermination of the bloodline, which is quite advantageous as magi are the best and most varied elemental magic users and have the highest power mana reserves among all. The only problem at this level being that progression can seem a bit rough at times. The biggest flaw of the novel is the story itself. No, let me rephrase that, the last third of the story is the biggest flaw of the novel. The first two thirds are amazing, a great mix of exploration, adventure, action, slice of life, romance (with a dash of R18 content) civilization-building and magic based macgyverism. Sadly, toward the last third of the novel, two things happen. First Wolfe becomes too strong for the setting, pretty much no one represents a danger to him and his close circle, the antagonists are no challenge to him and the few who could be actually be dangerous are either friendly or reasonable enough to solve conflicts without threats or violence. And second, as a consequence, the story turns almost entirely to slice of life, civilization and family building complete with doses of pointless technical details the reader to power through has to power through, only alighted by the ancient history details or humour. At that point, the story is a walk in the park for the protagonist. The writing is what allowed me to finish the novel, for it has energy, humour (lots of innuendos and puns) and shows Aoki Aku still has what it takes when it comes to style. The only issue here is the typo, as a few persist even in the latter chapter. So, Inheritor of Magic: The Magi King is still a fair novel, with fine characters, interesting setting, good power system and great writing, but it is let down by a poor last third of the story. My final verdict is a low 7 out of 10. I still consider Aoki Aku as a very good author and I will read his other novels in due time, but here this novel made me want to look at other novelists in the meantime. Kergonan out.

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Barnyard

Amazing. Start to finish. Couldn't put it down.

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Ret_Tri

In my Top 3 ever read books. MC is smart, doesn't get shocked at everything he didn't know yet. FLs have good written out characters. No need for face-slapping stuff etc. Would have had potential for more story, which is why I'm deducting 1 star there, but the ending is fine as well.

2mth
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bjhouse
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one of my favorite reads on here. i started when there were less than 200 published chapters and couldn't wait for the update each day. keep up the good work author!!

2mth
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EldestLord53

the story, the interactions, the characters were outstanding. however, it became quite annoying how they kept exposing things or saying things that aren't meant to be said. Despite being imaginative illustrations a few actuality should have been added. I had to go through so many accounts in webnovel just to finish this book. and I'm glad i was about to finish it with my main account. I totally love your work

2mth
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ash_star

I solutes you author you should keep writing

3mth
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Tyrel_Unsell

Great story that is very immersing. Good job, Author!

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Laistrygon_77

I thoroughly enjoyed this book and hope to read more from the author like it ☺️

4mth
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Xander_Castillo

I can’t believe the roller coaster of a ride this was. Can’t wait to see what is next!!!

4mth
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Ryujen75

A well developed and written story. It was ver enjoyable to read and follow

4mth
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Marlon_N_West

It’s a good read I would’ve liked if they would’ve touched on the other families or mentioned if they started coming back. But a satisfying ending nonetheless .

4mth
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OmegaYellow

I’ve enjoyed this book. Great story and character development. Keep up the good work.

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Titanspade_807

Absolutely great book. I definitely recommend to anyone who will give this book a try. This is the second book that I have reread, with the other one also being from this author. Great story, great characters, great author. It has been a pleasure to be here. :)

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Madcat1267

This was a trully captivating and entertaining story that was hard to put down.

4mth
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Beittin
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What a wild ride. The pacing was great, the characters were memorable, the twists were unexpected enough that it never felt boring. And best of all, the ending felt neither forced nor rushed.

4mth
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WhitestShadows

This had me hooked from start to finish. I can't wait to read it again.

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Crwnprince

¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Riebee
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Overall a good read. Wish the story was a bit longer, but it was a decent ending. Thank you for the effort to bring to us readers!

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Joe_Rogers_8641

Can only wait for the hard cover to be published.

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Aiman_Ismail

It was written well with an interesting world setting and mc. however, the story becomes a harem and the writer seems lost in what they want to do around the 300 chp mark. I stopped reading.

4mth
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Crwnprince

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Lorcan_Sidhe

Brilliant work as always from this author. I always enjoy reading these books because they're fairly low stakes but also engaging, which is a hard balance to strike. Excellent English and grammar too.

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Marion_Greer

why does it say completed there's still so much to read I need more what happens

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bjhouse
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great story, i thoroughly enjoyed the entire book. maybe a sequel that follows Ivan, Maria, and Calypso would be interesting.

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