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Read what was free: grammar needs a lot of work. Saying wrong tenses of words, changing perspectives without notice, and other minor errors like wrong words at times. The plot has a lot of holes for me. Can’t gain cultivation from lower cultivation monsters but yet one did at least. Soul coins currency is hard to appraise since something’s cost a lot while artifacts are super cheap. One major plot hole for me is what happens to equipment of those who died inside the dungeon? Also who would ever a place 2 whole armies were practically wiped out??? Are the people in this world dumber then the mc? The world building is almost zero. No since of directions where each kingdom is or how big they are. Wish you luck but seems like enough people read this for you
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Cons, in my opinion: 1. the idea is kinda fresh and unexplored, plus the first 20 chapters are a decent setup with a glimpse of the world. However, that's where I stop the praise for this, as the author or translator has a memory issue, forgetting the limitations, numbers, powers, and cultivation that they had mentioned previously. 2. the names and translation are all over the palace, meaning that one name can be used for several Chracthers, which can be headache inducing after a while. 3. after the first 30 chapters, I feel like stuff happens for no reasons at all, like there is no logical reading for some of the mc actions and plot lines.
The basics of this story is the stronger the adventurer that dies within the dungeon generate exclusive dungeon currency that can be used to empower the dungeon or mc, but adventurers that kill monsters gain cultivation. A smart man would train the masses and harvest those that reached their full potential or are close to, but the mc just kills blindly. It requires a lot of plot armor to still have people go to the dungeon, plus a few chapters in the author loses sight of the story. Mc is now a dragon and he is never wrong (Plot armor)... A good idea executed incorrectly.
I’m caught up on this novel, and enjoyed it for the most part. The MC being a villain is a nice change of pace compared to most novels. Additionally the concept is also very interesting. If you enjoy a system like power system with decent intricacy and a unique concept this is for you.
some writing mistakes but it's English which is a hard language even for native speakers
It's alright.The main issue for me is the change in writing style. In later chapters it's written in such a melodramatic way. For example a character will be fighting to save a city and it will say, "She must retain her boundless resolve to sacrifice herself for justice. The fate of the world depended on her and she must not falter." Then it will keep going like that for 2 or 3 paragraphs before doing any fighting. It also began to focus mostly on everyone except the main character. It's not unreasonable given the setup of the MC staying behind the scenes in his dungeon, but I liked how Top Tier Providence balanced that better.Except... the other characters are actually more interesting than the MC and his subordinates. Because the MC and his crew become cardboard cutouts who pretty much only say cringe and cliche villain lines.
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Writing quality is okay, not good but not as bad either, the only thing I hate about is the senseless massacre in the dungeons and the main character's stupid decisions, I mean come on you have a well established city lord and a evil cultivator, who will you choose to manage a city, and the MC chose the evil cultivator without even knowing if he could even manage the city or not.
Extremely short chapters. If you have read and cultivation or any dungeon novel you will know exactly what will happens. The author isn't implementing any original ideas.
I really liked this story but I feel like the author tries to draw out the story and plot as much as he can to the point I start to get bored and the grammar need a fix the author legit thows as many useless words as he can into the grammer that u end up reading 13 chapter “arc” on a auction because every word is split into 5 words because it sounds better when it really just draws it out
well it's good overall but it lacks the grammar if you could fix it,it would become more good and if you can update the 7ch a week or more it'll be awesome
yes this is a member of one of the newer plots. i don't know why all the reviews were nothing but intrigued and none shared how this is not for everyone. the path to this MCs power is to basically kill any and all humans/cultivators in his dungeon.In chapter 37, he explicitly states his intention to conquer his surroundings and leave nothing but bones.I've enjoyed this kind of plot in revenge stories until it got too cringe. but this time there's no other motivation than expanding the dungeon. the motive is not half as compelling.no I'm not a "oh the lack of morality! what an abomination!"i just look for something else in my reads. this doesn't interest me. I'm not particularly interested in following this MC and his contradictory behavior that gives him a harem.
author spent 13 chapters on an auction.... Seriously? entire auction "arc" felt super drawn out, and the mc at times just feels like a side character that uses his powers to strengthen the true mc Elara
Not a beginner friendly book I suppose. 1. Would recommend reading 2 or more wuxia/xianxia books before committing to this one. 2. MC's thought process and actions seem rather forceful not just as a result of the first point but also bcs general thought steps and open opinions are just skipped.
i have read up to chapter 50. overall, it's a novel you could read, but don't expect something with a lot of depth. here and there are some questionable aspects. if you overlook that it's good. but couldn't really interest me enough to continue to read it. just not my kind of novel, it seems.
It's nice, but there are a few things i don't like overall such as a certain vampire harem member, and the word "know" is used way too often. I also get a ChatGPT feeling from this novel. The novel is written like novels written with ChatGPT. Also there are a few basic writing and grammar issues.
Was decent for a villian protagonist until I started noticing things like a reluctance to kill peopl in general if they are good/innocent. also the story starts deviating from argon and becomes about the world inhabitants and how everybody is supposed to be United and loving and how evil will never prosper. First off the way author writes cultvators is off cultivators pursue benifits over anything else including over morals (for good cultivators the benefit must be astronomical to forgoe their morals). I don’t necessarily have an issue with any of the actions taking place I just have an issue for the reasoning on why. they are doing stupid for stupid reasons all because it’s what they ’re supposed to do. pls take the DARK tag out as nothing the protag has done is dark begrudgingly I’ll let you have the villain tag, but I will say that the dark moon clan is better candidate to be this supposed villain story’s protag
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Good idea of a dungeon in a cultivation,world ,i like it and decent execution, not many typos unlike my review but i dont like that the author makes stuff up that never happen, things are going super fast, the chapters are so short, i read 50 chapters in an hour, characters and background are ok decent read, but definitely not a top novel out there, ill probably finish using the free trial i like it but won't continue reading
I really enjoy this book I just got caught up but great story but a few issues I'm having with it how is he so broke and the side characters have so many soul coins when most of them have only had access to getting them for a month but they got more then the dungeon master he seemed to.be making more when he was in the 3 kingdoms but now that he's in a stronger place he can't even make 100k from his raids it's not adding up since he got 10000 from one peak qi gathering realm unless he's getting less cause he's stronger but that don't make sense either can someone explain pls
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Up to date with the released chapters. The story is good but there have been more flaws as we keep on moving forward. 1) Poor grammar, but readable. 2) Too much information overload in some parts, but makes sense. 3) Too much cringe lines. 4) MC thinking the subordinates can betray him and doesn't want to trust the system too much, when it is literally the system giving him everything. 5) MC gets soul coins from killing other beings, but in recent chaps(specially in the forbidden areas part), he gets no soul coins from killing so many powerful cultivators. 6) MC taking risks for no reason, like he accompanied Isadora to unknown regions when he was just at Golden Core, then goes on to fight Core Formation Tree God when there was risk of failure. Why the heck would the author make MC go out when he doesn't have information on those parts. He could just wait and upgrade his strength and slowly scout out the regions through his subordinates. It is readable, but there are many things that could be improved.
so overall a good story the grammar needs some work and the writing style isn't as smooth as it could be but still worth the read kind of wish this app would allow a proof reader or would give actual pointers because there's a lot of books out there as good as this one that fall behind because of the choppy flow
Author I love this novel of yours and please if possible try to get it to reach over 500 chapters or at least above 200 please I'd hate to see it end early and sincerely please do not drop it 😭🙏🏻
It’s a premise very similar to the webnovel The Dungeon Lord written by lupineKing or Dungeon Core/Realm Heart also written by him but with the premise being a cultivator becoming a dungeon core in a fantasy world. Not as well executed or written overall. But faster release rate then the novels I mentioned.
Now this is something new Well you picked my interest Consider me in You have my support
The premise was great, but then author decided to make the MC a villain who commit nedless cruel actions and make bad choices for the sake of looking evil. For example he choose an evil cultivator he had just seen as his subordinate to manage a city, when he could have saved the city lord, who looked like a trustworthy person and had more experience with managing people. Another thing I disliked is the total massacre. Read some others dungeon novels, it makes no sense for the death rate to be that high. Who would want to enter a dungeon where armies get decimated? Humans are greedy, but not that stupid. And sometimes the same rules you made for the tower don't works for the sake of plot. For example when the experience didn't get absorbed immediately by the city lord or when the evil cultivator absorbed the experience from the monsters someone else killed; among these monster there was also one with one layer lower, but you previously said that one could absorb experience only from monster with the same or higher cultivation. There are many other little things i disliked and i truly think it is a pity that this story took such a turn.
Great idea bad execution. MC is a one dimensional edge lord. So far there is no discernable motivation for the MC. The MC is needlessly vicious when there is no need for it. As I already said, the idea is great. If it was a better fleshed out story it could have been great, despite the lackluster writing quality.
Love the story, it's just that I saw that there's a harem tag now... is it really going to be a harem Author-san? 🥺
Hello, shameless author here, I'm not a Chinese so this will be a little different from you typical Xianxia novels. That's all, also give me a review if you happen to like it.
Read what was free: grammar needs a lot of work. Saying wrong tenses of words, changing perspectives without notice, and other minor errors like wrong words at times. The plot has a lot of holes for me. Can’t gain cultivation from lower cultivation monsters but yet one did at least. Soul coins currency is hard to appraise since something’s cost a lot while artifacts are super cheap. One major plot hole for me is what happens to equipment of those who died inside the dungeon? Also who would ever a place 2 whole armies were practically wiped out??? Are the people in this world dumber then the mc? The world building is almost zero. No since of directions where each kingdom is or how big they are. Wish you luck but seems like enough people read this for you
ネタバレを明かす Cons, in my opinion: 1. the idea is kinda fresh and unexplored, plus the first 20 chapters are a decent setup with a glimpse of the world. However, that's where I stop the praise for this, as the author or translator has a memory issue, forgetting the limitations, numbers, powers, and cultivation that they had mentioned previously. 2. the names and translation are all over the palace, meaning that one name can be used for several Chracthers, which can be headache inducing after a while. 3. after the first 30 chapters, I feel like stuff happens for no reasons at all, like there is no logical reading for some of the mc actions and plot lines.
The basics of this story is the stronger the adventurer that dies within the dungeon generate exclusive dungeon currency that can be used to empower the dungeon or mc, but adventurers that kill monsters gain cultivation. A smart man would train the masses and harvest those that reached their full potential or are close to, but the mc just kills blindly. It requires a lot of plot armor to still have people go to the dungeon, plus a few chapters in the author loses sight of the story. Mc is now a dragon and he is never wrong (Plot armor)... A good idea executed incorrectly.
I’m caught up on this novel, and enjoyed it for the most part. The MC being a villain is a nice change of pace compared to most novels. Additionally the concept is also very interesting. If you enjoy a system like power system with decent intricacy and a unique concept this is for you.
some writing mistakes but it's English which is a hard language even for native speakers
It's alright.The main issue for me is the change in writing style. In later chapters it's written in such a melodramatic way. For example a character will be fighting to save a city and it will say, "She must retain her boundless resolve to sacrifice herself for justice. The fate of the world depended on her and she must not falter." Then it will keep going like that for 2 or 3 paragraphs before doing any fighting. It also began to focus mostly on everyone except the main character. It's not unreasonable given the setup of the MC staying behind the scenes in his dungeon, but I liked how Top Tier Providence balanced that better.Except... the other characters are actually more interesting than the MC and his subordinates. Because the MC and his crew become cardboard cutouts who pretty much only say cringe and cliche villain lines.
Gmail has become the epicenter of our digital lives. It's where we store important documents, communicate with colleagues, and share memories with loved ones. So, when access to our Gmail accounts is compromised, panic sets in. Daniel Meuli Web Recovery understands the importance of Gmail and the need to regain control over it, offering its expert services to help you navigate the turbulent waters of Gmail hacking. Forgot your Gmail password? It happens to the best of us. But fear not! Daniel Meuli Web Recovery has the power to retrieve those hidden passwords and restore your access to your Gmail kingdom. They know all the tricks of the trade to ensure you can once again reign over your email empire. Within the extensive realm of cyber dangers, social engineering, and phishing have emerged as serious risks. However, Daniel Meuli Web Recovery is skilled in using fire to put out the fire since they have mastered these dark arts. Their vast understanding of social engineering and phishing strategies allows them to assist you in safeguarding your Gmail account and retrieving it in the event that it is compromised. Has your Gmail account been hacked? Don't despair! Daniel Meuli Web Recovery is your knight in shining armor, riding in to save the day. They have the expertise to identify the source of the breach, recover your hacked account, and fortify it against future attacks. With their magical skills, your Gmail account will be back in your control in no time. So, the next time you find yourself in need of phone or Gmail hacking services, remember to call upon the mystical powers of Daniel Meuli Web Recovery. They'll navigate the digital realm with finesse and a touch of magic, ensuring that you regain control over your digital kingdom in no time. For further information, call: Danielmeuliweberecovery (@) email . come hireus @ danielmeulirecovery . pro WhatsApp: +. 39.35.12.01.35.28 Thanks.
Writing quality is okay, not good but not as bad either, the only thing I hate about is the senseless massacre in the dungeons and the main character's stupid decisions, I mean come on you have a well established city lord and a evil cultivator, who will you choose to manage a city, and the MC chose the evil cultivator without even knowing if he could even manage the city or not.
Extremely short chapters. If you have read and cultivation or any dungeon novel you will know exactly what will happens. The author isn't implementing any original ideas.
I really liked this story but I feel like the author tries to draw out the story and plot as much as he can to the point I start to get bored and the grammar need a fix the author legit thows as many useless words as he can into the grammer that u end up reading 13 chapter “arc” on a auction because every word is split into 5 words because it sounds better when it really just draws it out
well it's good overall but it lacks the grammar if you could fix it,it would become more good and if you can update the 7ch a week or more it'll be awesome
yes this is a member of one of the newer plots. i don't know why all the reviews were nothing but intrigued and none shared how this is not for everyone. the path to this MCs power is to basically kill any and all humans/cultivators in his dungeon.In chapter 37, he explicitly states his intention to conquer his surroundings and leave nothing but bones.I've enjoyed this kind of plot in revenge stories until it got too cringe. but this time there's no other motivation than expanding the dungeon. the motive is not half as compelling.no I'm not a "oh the lack of morality! what an abomination!"i just look for something else in my reads. this doesn't interest me. I'm not particularly interested in following this MC and his contradictory behavior that gives him a harem.
author spent 13 chapters on an auction.... Seriously? entire auction "arc" felt super drawn out, and the mc at times just feels like a side character that uses his powers to strengthen the true mc Elara
Not a beginner friendly book I suppose. 1. Would recommend reading 2 or more wuxia/xianxia books before committing to this one. 2. MC's thought process and actions seem rather forceful not just as a result of the first point but also bcs general thought steps and open opinions are just skipped.
i have read up to chapter 50. overall, it's a novel you could read, but don't expect something with a lot of depth. here and there are some questionable aspects. if you overlook that it's good. but couldn't really interest me enough to continue to read it. just not my kind of novel, it seems.
It's nice, but there are a few things i don't like overall such as a certain vampire harem member, and the word "know" is used way too often. I also get a ChatGPT feeling from this novel. The novel is written like novels written with ChatGPT. Also there are a few basic writing and grammar issues.
Was decent for a villian protagonist until I started noticing things like a reluctance to kill peopl in general if they are good/innocent. also the story starts deviating from argon and becomes about the world inhabitants and how everybody is supposed to be United and loving and how evil will never prosper. First off the way author writes cultvators is off cultivators pursue benifits over anything else including over morals (for good cultivators the benefit must be astronomical to forgoe their morals). I don’t necessarily have an issue with any of the actions taking place I just have an issue for the reasoning on why. they are doing stupid for stupid reasons all because it’s what they ’re supposed to do. pls take the DARK tag out as nothing the protag has done is dark begrudgingly I’ll let you have the villain tag, but I will say that the dark moon clan is better candidate to be this supposed villain story’s protag
ネタバレを明かす Good idea of a dungeon in a cultivation,world ,i like it and decent execution, not many typos unlike my review but i dont like that the author makes stuff up that never happen, things are going super fast, the chapters are so short, i read 50 chapters in an hour, characters and background are ok decent read, but definitely not a top novel out there, ill probably finish using the free trial i like it but won't continue reading
I really enjoy this book I just got caught up but great story but a few issues I'm having with it how is he so broke and the side characters have so many soul coins when most of them have only had access to getting them for a month but they got more then the dungeon master he seemed to.be making more when he was in the 3 kingdoms but now that he's in a stronger place he can't even make 100k from his raids it's not adding up since he got 10000 from one peak qi gathering realm unless he's getting less cause he's stronger but that don't make sense either can someone explain pls
ネタバレを明かす Up to date with the released chapters. The story is good but there have been more flaws as we keep on moving forward. 1) Poor grammar, but readable. 2) Too much information overload in some parts, but makes sense. 3) Too much cringe lines. 4) MC thinking the subordinates can betray him and doesn't want to trust the system too much, when it is literally the system giving him everything. 5) MC gets soul coins from killing other beings, but in recent chaps(specially in the forbidden areas part), he gets no soul coins from killing so many powerful cultivators. 6) MC taking risks for no reason, like he accompanied Isadora to unknown regions when he was just at Golden Core, then goes on to fight Core Formation Tree God when there was risk of failure. Why the heck would the author make MC go out when he doesn't have information on those parts. He could just wait and upgrade his strength and slowly scout out the regions through his subordinates. It is readable, but there are many things that could be improved.
so overall a good story the grammar needs some work and the writing style isn't as smooth as it could be but still worth the read kind of wish this app would allow a proof reader or would give actual pointers because there's a lot of books out there as good as this one that fall behind because of the choppy flow
Author I love this novel of yours and please if possible try to get it to reach over 500 chapters or at least above 200 please I'd hate to see it end early and sincerely please do not drop it 😭🙏🏻
It’s a premise very similar to the webnovel The Dungeon Lord written by lupineKing or Dungeon Core/Realm Heart also written by him but with the premise being a cultivator becoming a dungeon core in a fantasy world. Not as well executed or written overall. But faster release rate then the novels I mentioned.
Now this is something new Well you picked my interest Consider me in You have my support
The premise was great, but then author decided to make the MC a villain who commit nedless cruel actions and make bad choices for the sake of looking evil. For example he choose an evil cultivator he had just seen as his subordinate to manage a city, when he could have saved the city lord, who looked like a trustworthy person and had more experience with managing people. Another thing I disliked is the total massacre. Read some others dungeon novels, it makes no sense for the death rate to be that high. Who would want to enter a dungeon where armies get decimated? Humans are greedy, but not that stupid. And sometimes the same rules you made for the tower don't works for the sake of plot. For example when the experience didn't get absorbed immediately by the city lord or when the evil cultivator absorbed the experience from the monsters someone else killed; among these monster there was also one with one layer lower, but you previously said that one could absorb experience only from monster with the same or higher cultivation. There are many other little things i disliked and i truly think it is a pity that this story took such a turn.
Great idea bad execution. MC is a one dimensional edge lord. So far there is no discernable motivation for the MC. The MC is needlessly vicious when there is no need for it. As I already said, the idea is great. If it was a better fleshed out story it could have been great, despite the lackluster writing quality.
Love the story, it's just that I saw that there's a harem tag now... is it really going to be a harem Author-san? 🥺
Hello, shameless author here, I'm not a Chinese so this will be a little different from you typical Xianxia novels. That's all, also give me a review if you happen to like it.