/ Anime & Comics / What do you mean Kaguya is inside Me?!
概要
“Child”
“Who?”
I turned around and was in a a white plane, I had just reincarnated and was an orphan.
I was four years old when it happened.
“I’m here.”
I looked behind me, I knew this was Naruto when I first became conscious and aware.
I was ecstatic when I heard a voice, was I a Jinchuriki?!
But when I stared at her.
“AH!”
“It is good that you’re finally awake.”
“Ka-Mother!”
‘I don’t wanna die, I don’t wanna die, I don’t wanna die.’
タグ
-- 推薦
ランキング 
-- 推薦
チケット あなたも好きかも
27レビュー
3.94
- テキストの品質
- アップデートの安定性
- ストーリー展開
- キャラクターデザイン
- 世界の背景
あなたの考えを他の人と共有してください
レビューを書く
Mandatory Shameless 5* Review! This is my first Novel I hope you all can enjoy it and tell me what I need to improve! thank you! I also hope that I can make this last and fun!
Zero originality. The author is a movie/fanfic addict who has a general idea what story he wants to write, but in the execution he is just randomly copying stuff from different stores and movies and in a very cringe way.
This story is just all over the place bro I don't even know what is happening it you copied some stuff in in some chapters bro come on it had good potential but this is just bad to me
Mehhh. A little copy from here and there plus your knowledge from movies. Not a good read at all. Take some time and read your own fic from the beginning. You will get what's wrong with this fic.
meh, author made MC super op and then completely made him stick to original time line. he could stop Sasuke running away in less then a minute but he "let's him go" purely because the author doesn't have any creativity to change stuff. literally its just Naruto but everyone has the intelligence of Naruto including MC
I saw a some reviews claiming that this is a copy of another FF But the thing is, none of them actually answer when asked what FF it copied from 🤦🤦🤦
I am liking this fic, It's about a very OP MC, OP like he can fight a Jonin at age of 7 and every year he gain new powers from "his mom". If I were to criticize something in this fic would be the dialogs, they almost always seems kinda rush, like the author knows where he want the interaction to end so the characters just lead each other to that ending, don't kwon if I am making sense. I am no writer, but I think it would be a lot better if the author took a little more time with the dialogs.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
┌∩┐(ಠ_ಠ)┌∩┐ ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\З= ( ▀ ͜͞ʖ▀) =Ε/̵͇̿̿/’̿’̿ ̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ▄︻̷̿┻̿═━一 ( ͡°( ͡° ͜ʖ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ʖ ͡°) ͡°) ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ (▀̿Ĺ̯▀̿ ̿) (ง ͠° ͟ل͜ ͡°)ง ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ ಠ_ಠ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\З=( ͠° ͟ʖ ͡°)=Ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) [̲̅$̲̅(̲̅5̲̅)̲̅$̲̅] ┬┴┬┴┤ ͜ʖ ͡°) ├┬┴┬┴ ( ͡°╭͜ʖ╮͡° ) (͡ ͡° ͜ つ ͡͡°) (• Ε •) (ง'̀-'́)ง (ಥ﹏ಥ) ﴾͡๏̯͡๏﴿ O'RLY? (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻ [̲̅$̲̅(̲̅ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°̲̅)̲̅$̲̅] (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ (☞ﾟ∀ﾟ)☞ | (• ◡•)| (❍ᴥ❍Ʋ) (◕‿◕✿) (ᵔᴥᵔ) (╯°□°)╯︵ ꞰOOQƎƆⱯɟ (¬‿¬) (☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞ ☜(ﾟヮﾟ☜) (づ￣ ³￣)づ Ლ(ಠ益ಠᲚ) ಠ╭╮ಠ ̿ ̿ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\З=(•_•)=Ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿'̿ ̿ /╲/\╭( ͡° ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ͡°)╮/\╱\ (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`) ♪~ ᕕ(ᐛ)ᕗ ♥‿♥ ༼ つ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ༽つ ༼ つ ಥ_ಥ ༽つ (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻ ( ͡ᵔ ͜ʖ ͡ᵔ ) ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ♪ ~(˘▾˘~) ◉_◉ \ (•◡•) / (~˘▾˘)~ (._.) ( L: ) ( .-. ) ( :L ) (._.) ༼ʘ̚ل͜ʘ̚༽ ༼ ºل͟º ༼ ºل͟º ༼ ºل͟º ༽ ºل͟º ༽ ºل͟º ༽ ┬┴┬┴┤(･_├┬┴┬┴ ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ ᕦ(Ò_Óˇ)ᕤ ┻━┻ ︵ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ︵ ┻━┻ ⚆ _ ⚆ (•_•) ( •_•)>⌐■-■ (⌐■_■) (｡◕‿‿◕｡) ♪～(´ε｀ )(＾3＾♪┌(・。・)┘♪♪ヽ(･ˇ∀ˇ･ゞ)₍₍ ◝( ﾟ∀ ﾟ )◟ ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾₍₍◞( •௰• )◟₎₎⁽⁽◝( •௰• )◜⁾⁾\(ϋ)/♩♪┌|∵|┘♪ └|∵|┐♪♪ \(^ω^\ )\(๑╹◡╹๑)ﾉ♬ヾ( ͝° ͜ʖ͡°)ノ♪(＾∇＾)ﾉ♪( /^ω^)/♪♪(*ﾉ・ω・)ﾉ♫┌|o^▽^o|┘♪┏(＾0＾)┛┌(★ｏ☆)┘ヘ(￣ω￣ヘ)♪(┌・。・)┌(｢`･ω･)｢└( ＾ω＾)」 •́ ‿ ,•̀ಥ‿ಥʕ´• ᴥ•̥`ʔ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ(｡ŏ﹏ŏ)( ･ั﹏･ั)(´；ω；｀)( ；∀；)Ó╭╮Ò(っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ(｡•́︿•̀｡)(｡ﾉω＼｡).·´¯`(>▂<)´¯`·.(｡•́︿•̀｡)(´ . .̫ . `)(๑´•.̫ • `๑)ಥ╭╮ಥ(ᗒᗩᗕ)( ≧Д≦).·´¯`(>▂<)´¯`·.
The author has a lot of passion for this story and a good understanding of the source material. One thing they struggle with is understanding the minds of adults. The author portrays the MC doing something shady and giving some weak excuse/ explanation, and doesn’ realize how extremely suspicious it would look to a trained Shinobi… In short, this is wish fulfillment without much concern for realism in making the characters competent.
As any story/fanfic strives for, this has been entertaining to read and quite enjoyable. Just having kaguya be in him should have given away what kind of story this would lead to. Overpowered tag is overpowered.
This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good This is good
ネタバレを明かす
Good story so far, honestly I have never seen this plot in another fic, those who say that this is a copy from somewhere, seriously I would like them to tell me where it is from Author, you should delete the reviews that only say that it has been copied from somewhere else, if they do not have any proof to prove their argument, they are just meaningless complaints
卷 1
- 1 Mother! 1 years ago
- 2 Power 1 years ago
- 3 Training 1 years ago
- 4 Time 1 years ago
- 5 Grad 1 years ago
- 6 Board 1 years ago
- 7 Finally! 1 years ago
- 8 Borrowed Knife 1 years ago
- 9 Move 1 years ago
- 10 Meeting 1 years ago
- 11 Leaving 1 years ago
- 12 Practice, we talking bout practice. 1 years ago
- 13 Tag 1 years ago
- 14 Yes 1 years ago
- 15 What 1 years ago
- 16 Back 1 years ago
- 17 Prep Time 1 years ago
- 18 Exams 1 years ago
- 19 2nd Part 1 years ago
- 20 2nd Part Part 2? 1 years ago
- 21 Buffer 1 years ago
- 22 Begin 1 years ago
- 23 Danzdead 1 years ago
- 24 Acting 1 years ago
- 25 Black 1 years ago
- 26 Day 1 years ago
- 27 Cool 1 years ago
- 28 Tech 1 years ago
- 29 What 1 years ago
- 30 Moving Forward 1 years ago
- 31 What 1 years ago
- 32 Snow 1 years ago
- 33 2nd Snow 1 years ago
- 34 Blizzard 1 years ago
- 35 Bait 1 years ago
- 36 Dream 1 years ago
- 37 Spring 1 years ago
- 38 Night 1 years ago
- 39 Fight 1 years ago
- 40 Chase 1 years ago
- 41 Show 1 years ago
- 42 After 1 years ago
- 43 You Wouldn't 1 years ago
- 44 Spied 1 years ago
- 45 Surprise 1 years ago
- 46 Extraction 1 years ago
- 47 Time? 1 years ago
People are saying that this isnt original but nah I love it even this early on. Great MC, heroic but not self sacrificing, cares about his life and loved one over strangers. Good side character exposition, all of them act as you would believe. Interesting concept with Kaguya! Never seen that before. All in all, I really like it, this is one of the first naruto fics I’ve read but even then I am sure this is of an above average quality at the very least. Also it ignores Sakura as a love interest so that is always a plus!