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Please don't stop translating the book I enjoy reading this , and the story is nice I read it to pass time as I only get some time to enjoy myself
Hello thare, im very Happy you returning to writing this story, but are you planing to come back for only few chapters, or you will realy planing to finish this story fully?
original I was planning to give 3 stars but I want to balance out the actual rating cause a guy named dark_person jj inflated the rating by giving multiply 5 stars
Just found this and I am already impressed at the diligence of the author when it comes to repairing the usual raging dumpster fire all other mtl stories leave behind.
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... the translator is good but the novel itself is trash. The mc says he is a good person who dosnt kills innocent people, he gets the system... what he does? Kill people without care and laugh about it. Then force himself on girls. Whats worse is that the author make the girls submit to him cause he is so strong and handsome
This story is just rewrite of China Novel, from the another author, so give the guy the break will ya?
I think I might need to reboot my brain after reading this……. Complete garbage 🤦🏻♂️
Mr editor you are doing a fine work, but unfortunately the author of this story is too lazy to come up with a better plot
basically just a crack fic with no redeemable qualities. the mc goes full on power hungry psycho mode as soon as he gets powers. kills random innocent people, kidnaps girls for his harem. basically the mc is a sexual predator that got superpowers for no reason
Very good story, im glad Nami is a bit diffrent then her og self , btw great pics, and i will also post pics for everyone.
The MC is someone who is OP but “tries” to lay low to avoid getting killed. I say tries like that because the MC chooses to go to every spot in the east blue where Luffy is going to be. These two things clash and make it difficult to reconcile the character author is trying to portray with his choices. If he was trying to avoid trouble as much as he says he wants to, he would avoid every area that he knows luffy is going be like the plague. I mean, the characters whole schitck is that he wants to live a safe life and avoid too much trouble. And yet he follows Luffy around, who he knows causes trouble wherever he goes. Even if author had to contrive ridiculous situations to force MC to enter the main plot line it would be better than the character chosing to do it himself because it goes against everything he desires. Feels forced and stiff because of this.
Ron need to increase the strenght of his crew made of only girls asap, because at this moment they are only his Eye candy, ok Tashigi is the only on who has any Fighting skills.
Will thare be Lemons in this story? because harem without Lemons make no sense
editor is working hard... but the OG author might be living proof that not all humans have functioning brains... OP mc builds a harem/crew by force
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Keep going,2 chapter everyday ,.........................................................................................................................................................................................
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great story, and i like how you trying to change it,so it will be easier to read it, to get rid off China stuff.
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Cool story, i will give it a chance and support it,oh and Nami pic for you as my thanks.
I like mc with cheat and op skills so keep going... Also translation is so hard...and you're work is getting appreciation from readers so best of luck and don't drop it...
I am liking this very much. Just finish the whole book and jeep the chapters rolling. Dont stop in the middle of translating the book. 🤘👍🙂🙂
Just overall nothing but the same lazy story with an op charactet. Reading the summary alone showcases just how bad of a system this story has. The MC practically has no need to have actual form of training or character growth with how strong he already was at the start.These Translated Chinese stories rarely are good. Some of them are just lazy or have ridiculously dumb plotline.
As the editor of this fanfic I must give it a 5 star review cause it's a very interesting fanfic, just expect the MC to be real Overpowered.
Please don't stop translating the book I enjoy reading this , and the story is nice I read it to pass time as I only get some time to enjoy myself
Hello thare, im very Happy you returning to writing this story, but are you planing to come back for only few chapters, or you will realy planing to finish this story fully?
original I was planning to give 3 stars but I want to balance out the actual rating cause a guy named dark_person jj inflated the rating by giving multiply 5 stars
Just found this and I am already impressed at the diligence of the author when it comes to repairing the usual raging dumpster fire all other mtl stories leave behind.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
... the translator is good but the novel itself is trash. The mc says he is a good person who dosnt kills innocent people, he gets the system... what he does? Kill people without care and laugh about it. Then force himself on girls. Whats worse is that the author make the girls submit to him cause he is so strong and handsome
This story is just rewrite of China Novel, from the another author, so give the guy the break will ya?
I think I might need to reboot my brain after reading this……. Complete garbage 🤦🏻♂️
Mr editor you are doing a fine work, but unfortunately the author of this story is too lazy to come up with a better plot
basically just a crack fic with no redeemable qualities. the mc goes full on power hungry psycho mode as soon as he gets powers. kills random innocent people, kidnaps girls for his harem. basically the mc is a sexual predator that got superpowers for no reason
Very good story, im glad Nami is a bit diffrent then her og self , btw great pics, and i will also post pics for everyone.
The MC is someone who is OP but “tries” to lay low to avoid getting killed. I say tries like that because the MC chooses to go to every spot in the east blue where Luffy is going to be. These two things clash and make it difficult to reconcile the character author is trying to portray with his choices. If he was trying to avoid trouble as much as he says he wants to, he would avoid every area that he knows luffy is going be like the plague. I mean, the characters whole schitck is that he wants to live a safe life and avoid too much trouble. And yet he follows Luffy around, who he knows causes trouble wherever he goes. Even if author had to contrive ridiculous situations to force MC to enter the main plot line it would be better than the character chosing to do it himself because it goes against everything he desires. Feels forced and stiff because of this.
Ron need to increase the strenght of his crew made of only girls asap, because at this moment they are only his Eye candy, ok Tashigi is the only on who has any Fighting skills.
Will thare be Lemons in this story? because harem without Lemons make no sense
editor is working hard... but the OG author might be living proof that not all humans have functioning brains... OP mc builds a harem/crew by force
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Keep going,2 chapter everyday ,.........................................................................................................................................................................................
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great story, and i like how you trying to change it,so it will be easier to read it, to get rid off China stuff.
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Cool story, i will give it a chance and support it,oh and Nami pic for you as my thanks.
I like mc with cheat and op skills so keep going... Also translation is so hard...and you're work is getting appreciation from readers so best of luck and don't drop it...
I am liking this very much. Just finish the whole book and jeep the chapters rolling. Dont stop in the middle of translating the book. 🤘👍🙂🙂
Just overall nothing but the same lazy story with an op charactet. Reading the summary alone showcases just how bad of a system this story has. The MC practically has no need to have actual form of training or character growth with how strong he already was at the start.These Translated Chinese stories rarely are good. Some of them are just lazy or have ridiculously dumb plotline.
As the editor of this fanfic I must give it a 5 star review cause it's a very interesting fanfic, just expect the MC to be real Overpowered.