章 8: Next chapter tomorrow!
The next chapter is ready on the site, I just need to post it and I decided to post it tomorrow...
I was reading the previous chapters and one thing bothered me, which was the following part: When Mc goes to the crypts to retrieve the objects that his parents left for him that were hidden there.
I reread that part and found it...strange...because the crypts of the Winter Kings are huge and are said to extend all over Winterfell and into the divine woods, with several lower floors, so him digging in lyanna's crypt was...strange to me, at the time I wrote it made sense, but now I don't know if it made sense.
so I thought I would rewrite that part to something like this: behind Lyanna's statue there is a missing wall, where her bones were placed with the coffin, and the chest is locked there too.
Does it make more sense this way? give me your opinion.
and maybe I will post two chapters, maybe I am in the mood to advance the story a little more and post the other one soon, since it is already done... it was decided tomorrow after I get home.
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