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- ストーリー展開
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- 世界の背景
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I've only just read one chapter of the eight currently available, but I can already tell this was heavily inspired by the h doujin Job Friends, which is one of my favourites. It definitely works with the characters. Looking forward to reading more.
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It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
I am grateful to the author for creating this story/fanfic, reading this led me to reflect on what is the meaning of life, if we are free or not, as can be seen in this book, where the mc/protagonist cannot contain himself with his cute teammate that leads me to think that we are not free and that we will always be imprisoned for our carnal desires/sins. Big congratulations on a good story and I'm leaving giving my appreciations to your good writing.
I've only just read one chapter of the eight currently available, but I can already tell this was heavily inspired by the h doujin Job Friends, which is one of my favourites. It definitely works with the characters. Looking forward to reading more.
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It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
I am grateful to the author for creating this story/fanfic, reading this led me to reflect on what is the meaning of life, if we are free or not, as can be seen in this book, where the mc/protagonist cannot contain himself with his cute teammate that leads me to think that we are not free and that we will always be imprisoned for our carnal desires/sins. Big congratulations on a good story and I'm leaving giving my appreciations to your good writing.
amazing I've never nutted so hard . ..