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Nadia_Deb

The translation is not good. à lot of mistakes like "your" instead of "her".

LV 15

JenniferG

I like the plot. ML being a bad boy is novel to me. the painful part is the writing. there's no editing at all.

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Thavthav

bad translation. hard to understand because of the translation, story jumps around.

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cindoii

i actually like the plot and how the story developed. it's like one step at a time. But deym i dont have any free pass lol

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Charlie14_

does anyone know the raw of this story ? I really liked the story but there are a lot of error.

LV 15

m1zzsandra

Bad translation. Can’t really follow the story at all

LV 4

Mwandidah

To be honest the book is good BUT if you can edit it, it's going to be GREAT

LV 4

books_n_coffee

Dear Heaven but this is hard work - the story is fascinating but the writing is A W F U L . This is obviously an MTL with very little editing. if anyone has the good will to edit this they'll have all my fps!!

LV 15

EMmA101

The translation is terrible. It is not just the he's and she's mixed up. It must be an auto translation.

LV 15

Quipz

My head hurts from reading bad translation. it’s like a caveman was talking in my head.

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Munchkin123

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vervainiasi

The ok: The plot is interesting but standard. It's regression scapegoat, golden child sibling, and neglectful parents. Scapegoat FL is supposed to be the golden child's blood bank and after regression FL wants to escape. ML is the bad boy type who gets in an accident. The problem is the translation. The author lacks a grasp of the English language and it shows. Pronouns are wildly inaccurate, turns of phrase are wrong, and grammar is non-existent. I skipped entire paragraphs of word salad. So if you don't mind Godzilla had a stroke level of writing occasionally it's a decent story to waste fast passes on. Don't spend your coins though.

LV 4

Akanksha_Deshlahre

such an amazing story and extra chapters are very beautifully written......I am tearing up after reading the last chapter.....but they thought it was their father and daughter secret but they don't know Xiaobao the first one who has gone back there to change their destiny and life...such a funny thing....but I am now because now both parallel worlds are living happily....but all this related to our protagonist both mother and daughter love him so much like I do three person World involved each other😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍 thankyou author for writing such a wonderful story....i hope i will read more your wonderful stories❤️❤️❤️

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DaoistYzKB0r

Give it a try, you won't regret it! If you look past the wording and sentence construction, you will realize the potential of this novel. First time giving a review but this is worth it!

LV 15

Litenoveldicted

The story sounds good but the editing is non existent which makes it hard to read

LV 3

apple3553

translation worst then mlt 😭😭😭😭 so I drop .. I lost interest cz of bad translation, dam what a good read seading but waste in translation

LV 13

muni1301

the writing is messy i hope u can fix it i can't really understand some part of the story line

LV 15

JesReadin

I have read this up to the unlock stage. It’s actually a very interesting plot and I like the characters especially the uniqueness of the ML not being some rich CEO or powerful mogul, but rather a bad boy from a tough upbringing who intimidates and fights, but who had been so gentle and loving of the FL. But I won’t pay to unlock a story that appears to gave been fed through Google translate and dumped here. It does no justice to the authors work and creativity to have it expressed so poorly. It wasn’t just consistent pronoun swapping, but odd misnaming of objects, like calling a bike a car, having a faucet on the (car) bike (I still haven’t figured that out), transparent skin, etc.. 🤯 It would be nice to find out that it gets an editor at some stage, but for now it’s dropped.

LV 14

JessKjana

i was eager to read this. but the writing is toooo bad. I dont know if it's mtl or the author wrote it. I hope this gets some good editing and proofreading done 💔