Clearing The World That's Inside A Novel

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kxixrxixtxo

Okay, I will be honest maybe around 3.5. That would be how I had rate my novel. Book 1 is complete, so I think it's time I write a review. I will be honest I suck at updating. So now rather than focusing on how many chapters to update I will try to deliver words instead. Around 11-12k words every week. You might find it generic, cliched, I can't gurantee it will fit your tastes but I think I did a good job at writing a story for my first time, more so when I just started it on a whim. I am sure it's enjoyable read, just decent not a masterpiece but not a trash either. If you call it trash I might cry TwT Give it a try if you can and don't ask me why I rated my book five but gave it different rating while the? review. Thanks for the read! As long as it's not a spoiler you want I will answer your question!

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Kelvar10_

Bruh, change your cover to smth more nice looking, I'd probably ignore it if I saw it on a feature

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ulp_6294

good novel . the story is goog and the character also

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Nasty_Bich

Authershii the novel was good why u not updating ಠ⁠,⁠_⁠｣⁠ಠ(⁠ノ⁠ಠ⁠益⁠ಠ⁠)⁠ノ

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deadmandreaming

I like this novel. The grammar is bad but the author makes up for it with a lot of heart and a very relatable mc. Very good worldbuilding. The protagonist is an unreliable narrator with flawed memory and the way the story unfolds is unpredictable but in a good way. Warning, IT WILL hit you in the feels at random points, author possibly an emotional sadist. Definitely worth a read.

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Juniorxz10

Really good book.I wish author updates a bit more frequently.

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Sami_Alfoheday

this is one the best novels I read it's not just some guy beating everyone it have a story a world filled with characters that have Depth love it continue with the great work

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Liam_Johnsen

So goooodddddddddddd only problem is that there aren’t more chapters 😢😢😢

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Alesha_Byles_9726

I'm at chapter 71 (most recent chapter released) and am really loving it I think some small things could be improved but other than that I think it's going great so far. Can't comment on updates.

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Balls_Amon

Currently on ch 30 and it's going great for me .

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V_ADAPT

update author where are you..............

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King_Of_Heros

It's not perfect, nothing is perfect. it has much potential and much to be improved. this novel has all i could ask for.This novel is one of the best web novels I've ever read on this platform or any. I'm really looking forward to the future chapters. just one request to the author can you please update regularly. take your time staking chapters.I'm gonna do a proper review in the future as the novel is still in its initial stage and this whole review is my opinion

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Royalmv

Hope you update Daily 🙏................o

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Lag_Overloaded

Yo dude update the book more frequently 🙂

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BS_Entertainment

I love the snarky humour that the main character possesses, the main character reminds me of the MC from "trapped in a dating SIM" - anime. The world building is dome extremely well and I'm excited for more!

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shreya_7253

is this dropped? I have been waiting for updates for 2 weeks bro

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DryImagination

The only reason I am writing this review is because I wanted to let you know that the protagonist of your story and mine has the exactly the same name!And same age!And same rank!And same idea..But I swear I never read your novel when I was writing my own. As a new author your writing is pretty good.