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Really nice story about Douluo Dalu verse. Battle Soul not standard as all other fiction. Good Mc don't try to collect girls as pokemon, help his friend and family. Recommend to read this story.
Hello, Author-san) The story began like many others, but after just a couple of chapters it became very interesting, I read it in one gulp! First time I heard about Ultraman, but it turned out funny ;) But Dawn, ooo~, I really look forward to its development. It would be interesting to give her the ability to transform. Something like resizing or making her an Autobot with a human appearance, like a cute transformer girl. I hope you continue to write often and finish the story. All the best to you)
Very good one. At first, I thought it will turn into brainless cultivating, fighting, and repeat novel but this one is more like a kingdom-building (Well, mc try hard to improve people's lives idk what this genre called) So, MC born into douluo with his ultraman and boat? martial spirits and a system. No mission btw, mc getting points from cultivating and fighting so you won't see him as system slave (but i'd say that he's half-slave? because although he tried to improve his skills through practicing, there's no any visible progress and mc just using points to improve his skills instead) Well, currently I'm at ch.12 and so far so good.
This is one of the if not the best soul Land fanfiction I've ever read please keep it going.
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Really nice story about Douluo Dalu verse. Battle Soul not standard as all other fiction. Good Mc don't try to collect girls as pokemon, help his friend and family. Recommend to read this story.
Hello, Author-san) The story began like many others, but after just a couple of chapters it became very interesting, I read it in one gulp! First time I heard about Ultraman, but it turned out funny ;) But Dawn, ooo~, I really look forward to its development. It would be interesting to give her the ability to transform. Something like resizing or making her an Autobot with a human appearance, like a cute transformer girl. I hope you continue to write often and finish the story. All the best to you)
Very good one. At first, I thought it will turn into brainless cultivating, fighting, and repeat novel but this one is more like a kingdom-building (Well, mc try hard to improve people's lives idk what this genre called) So, MC born into douluo with his ultraman and boat? martial spirits and a system. No mission btw, mc getting points from cultivating and fighting so you won't see him as system slave (but i'd say that he's half-slave? because although he tried to improve his skills through practicing, there's no any visible progress and mc just using points to improve his skills instead) Well, currently I'm at ch.12 and so far so good.
This is one of the if not the best soul Land fanfiction I've ever read please keep it going.