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Not bad for a first timer I'm not a writer myself but this i enjoyed this one keep up the good work man!!!!! I'll be waiting for a new update
This one looks interesting can't wait to see what will happen next I've been reading lots of extra mc or something so I'm looking forward to this one 🧐
was looking for some new action novels and came across dissss!!! so I gave 3.8 rating coz the writing is not that gud but it can improve like what you said ur a new writer so I'm waiting for that development and as for the story I actually enjoyed it a little yeah surprisingly this isn't one of those op mc he's actually doing some hard stuff not just getting lucky or anything lastly I like the MC's vibe mysterious not chatty have a twisted mind a villain like style I like it very much 🤔😊🍷 merry Christmas lol .
Not bad for a first timer I'm not a writer myself but this i enjoyed this one keep up the good work man!!!!! I'll be waiting for a new update
This one looks interesting can't wait to see what will happen next I've been reading lots of extra mc or something so I'm looking forward to this one 🧐
was looking for some new action novels and came across dissss!!! so I gave 3.8 rating coz the writing is not that gud but it can improve like what you said ur a new writer so I'm waiting for that development and as for the story I actually enjoyed it a little yeah surprisingly this isn't one of those op mc he's actually doing some hard stuff not just getting lucky or anything lastly I like the MC's vibe mysterious not chatty have a twisted mind a villain like style I like it very much 🤔😊🍷 merry Christmas lol .