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I absolutely love a steam punk world setting. And if you add a bit of thievery, mystical and many other great aspects into to it you get the amazing mix of awesomeness and suspenseful moments, called The Deceitful One. The pacing is really good and there aren't any gigantic info-dumps that leaves you mentally exhausted, which makes for a really nice reading experience. The author is also really active in the comments and actually responds to feedback that is given. Sometimes you can also find some awesome images in the comments that the author publishes which depict the area or the person that the paragraph is describing. This allows us readers to better visualize the environment and the people of the book, which for me is huge plus! So go ahead and give this one a chance, you won't regret it
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dropped, will not reccomend author pretty much did the same with another novel
Have you dropped this book? no updates in 6 months. it's such a good book, I hope you didn't.
Generally a really fun read, but the flow of the story got dragged down somewhat because of the hiatus. I hope the chapters will be uploaded more frequently for now. It has some great potential
This novel, despite inspired by LotM, has the usual arrogant chinese cultivation taste. Not my taste.
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One of the best stories I ever read to anyone who thinks this is similar to Lotm it is not. It only is a little similar in the first couple chapters I am currently at chapter 240 and everytime I am nearing to catch up I get sadder and sadder because this is such and amazing story and what hurt me more was when I saw that this hasn’t been updated in over 20 days. Please author I am begging you to start writing more chapters♥️♥️♥️
So, this is just a fanfic of LOTM, I had high hopes for it as I always liked the Error pathway but the author didn't rlly deliver (cmon dude "The illuminatos"? You were better off just naming it the tarot club again) obs: world bg is with one star because you just cp pasted cuttlefish world in your novel
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good book better than the other highly rated garbage out there you've probably come across give it a try it won't kill you... probably.
Although only around 200 chapters have been released yet, it is definitely my favorite novel. The only request is that the author increase the chapter release frequency.
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It's quite a good story, I only read 20 chapters. But, I recommend you to read this novel immediately, if you love Mr. Fool's mysterious journey.
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This story is the best I have ever read. it doesn't have that mc reigns in almost everything at least.mc indestructible and invincible stuff; genius in all. The chap 193 was really touching
I really like this novel it is my nearest favourite. I have one request that it is that you increase the number of updates at least until the current Arc is over.
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This one heavily reminds me of The Lord of the mysteries. That is all y'all need to know that this one is good.
It's an interesting take in the LOTM "genre", does a good job o humanizing the M.C and making him less mysterious to the readers. It's a bit of a pity that the paths don't have cooler names tho (Path names are very representative of what they do, there's little mystery. Ex: Strenght path, Fire path, Water path, Blood path, Ilusion Path, Death path, etc...) and apparently transcedent ranks don't have their own monikers too, it was always fun to discover new trandescent path names in LOTM... For those with shorter attention spans, good novel, lacks cooler and more mysterious path names.
Wow, this is a good ln. The trascendent path are explained very well. The mc is not an idiot
As the author of this novel, I would give it 100 stars if I could. Unfortunately, I can't. Sigh, it's easy to be shameless but tough to be a writer. Anyways, let me tell you guys a few things about my novel. -What is this novel about? It is about an orphan named Bryan who embarks on the Path of a Transcendent. The story is set in a steampunk world with churches and secret organizations. -Can you describe Bryan? Growing up on the streets, he has mastered the art of theft to survive and fill his stomach. Bryan is a very mischievous person who loves to prank others. But he is also very crafty and quick-witted. -What is a Transcendent? They are a group of extraordinary people who wield enormous power and strange abilities. They embark on different Paths and gain different abilities. -Is Bryan overpowered? NO! Bryan is not a gigachad. He starts off weak but gradually becomes overpowered as he embarks on a unique Path. -Will there be NSFW scenes? Yes, there will be violence and gore. There will also be a few dirty scenes but not too many. -Will there be romance? Uhmmm, not sure. Not anytime soon at least. Perhaps somewhere down the line, Bryan will get married and start a family. We'll see what happens. NO HAREM. Finally, this is my heartfelt request to all the readers. The novel starts off slow and is very detailed. But things start getting super interesting from chapter 20 onwards. Therefore, I hope you can believe in me and continue to support me.
I absolutely love a steam punk world setting. And if you add a bit of thievery, mystical and many other great aspects into to it you get the amazing mix of awesomeness and suspenseful moments, called The Deceitful One. The pacing is really good and there aren't any gigantic info-dumps that leaves you mentally exhausted, which makes for a really nice reading experience. The author is also really active in the comments and actually responds to feedback that is given. Sometimes you can also find some awesome images in the comments that the author publishes which depict the area or the person that the paragraph is describing. This allows us readers to better visualize the environment and the people of the book, which for me is huge plus! So go ahead and give this one a chance, you won't regret it
Is there something similar like (Method Acting)? Cjuvb hvih oh i go ig lv i hcihcvkcjvuvuvhvyvhvvb😁ggfgggggcjcydhxhxhchcycychcgxhccbxhchxhxhxhxcychchchfhchcjvjcjfhvhvghvf
dropped, will not reccomend author pretty much did the same with another novel
Have you dropped this book? no updates in 6 months. it's such a good book, I hope you didn't.
Generally a really fun read, but the flow of the story got dragged down somewhat because of the hiatus. I hope the chapters will be uploaded more frequently for now. It has some great potential
This novel, despite inspired by LotM, has the usual arrogant chinese cultivation taste. Not my taste.
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One of the best stories I ever read to anyone who thinks this is similar to Lotm it is not. It only is a little similar in the first couple chapters I am currently at chapter 240 and everytime I am nearing to catch up I get sadder and sadder because this is such and amazing story and what hurt me more was when I saw that this hasn’t been updated in over 20 days. Please author I am begging you to start writing more chapters♥️♥️♥️
So, this is just a fanfic of LOTM, I had high hopes for it as I always liked the Error pathway but the author didn't rlly deliver (cmon dude "The illuminatos"? You were better off just naming it the tarot club again) obs: world bg is with one star because you just cp pasted cuttlefish world in your novel
ネタバレを明かす good book better than the other highly rated garbage out there you've probably come across give it a try it won't kill you... probably.
Although only around 200 chapters have been released yet, it is definitely my favorite novel. The only request is that the author increase the chapter release frequency.
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It's quite a good story, I only read 20 chapters. But, I recommend you to read this novel immediately, if you love Mr. Fool's mysterious journey.
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This story is the best I have ever read. it doesn't have that mc reigns in almost everything at least.mc indestructible and invincible stuff; genius in all. The chap 193 was really touching
I really like this novel it is my nearest favourite. I have one request that it is that you increase the number of updates at least until the current Arc is over.
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This one heavily reminds me of The Lord of the mysteries. That is all y'all need to know that this one is good.
It's an interesting take in the LOTM "genre", does a good job o humanizing the M.C and making him less mysterious to the readers. It's a bit of a pity that the paths don't have cooler names tho (Path names are very representative of what they do, there's little mystery. Ex: Strenght path, Fire path, Water path, Blood path, Ilusion Path, Death path, etc...) and apparently transcedent ranks don't have their own monikers too, it was always fun to discover new trandescent path names in LOTM... For those with shorter attention spans, good novel, lacks cooler and more mysterious path names.
Wow, this is a good ln. The trascendent path are explained very well. The mc is not an idiot
As the author of this novel, I would give it 100 stars if I could. Unfortunately, I can't. Sigh, it's easy to be shameless but tough to be a writer. Anyways, let me tell you guys a few things about my novel. -What is this novel about? It is about an orphan named Bryan who embarks on the Path of a Transcendent. The story is set in a steampunk world with churches and secret organizations. -Can you describe Bryan? Growing up on the streets, he has mastered the art of theft to survive and fill his stomach. Bryan is a very mischievous person who loves to prank others. But he is also very crafty and quick-witted. -What is a Transcendent? They are a group of extraordinary people who wield enormous power and strange abilities. They embark on different Paths and gain different abilities. -Is Bryan overpowered? NO! Bryan is not a gigachad. He starts off weak but gradually becomes overpowered as he embarks on a unique Path. -Will there be NSFW scenes? Yes, there will be violence and gore. There will also be a few dirty scenes but not too many. -Will there be romance? Uhmmm, not sure. Not anytime soon at least. Perhaps somewhere down the line, Bryan will get married and start a family. We'll see what happens. NO HAREM. Finally, this is my heartfelt request to all the readers. The novel starts off slow and is very detailed. But things start getting super interesting from chapter 20 onwards. Therefore, I hope you can believe in me and continue to support me.