/ Anime & Comics / Lookism: The Foreigner [HIATUS]
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Park Mazino
Street Name: The Foreigner
He was supposed to die, but fate seems to have different plans.
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As I'm writing this review, the story only has 6 chapters. The story is good, overall. There are some minor punctuation mistakes (such as the use of your and you're, etc.) but they don't affect your reading experience at all, so it's fine. Some of the characters act "out of character" but that's to be expected since this is an AU of Lookism. Finally, the fight scenes are great, no problems there. Currently a [4.8/5]~ I recommend you all to read it. I might update this review once this story has more chaps
good! please keep writing and don't stop, waiting for updates in the chapters, great book, the plot and grammar are on top, if only the update in the chapters would be faster
Story development is good, but I hope they have slow story plot. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Did you drop it? 🥲 I realy you didn't cuz its a really fire fanfic no cap tbh 🙂 ill be waiting gor the next chapter I really hope you didn't tho 🫠🫠
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- 1 The Foreigner! 2 years ago
- 2 Familiar People! Date!? 2 years ago
- 3 Teens vs Mazino! 2 years ago
- 4 Teens Shocked!! Chairman Choi!! 2 years ago
- 5 Unforeseen Encounter! 2 years ago
- 6 Secret Cave!? 2 years ago
- 7 DG!? New Duo!? 2 years ago
- 8 Caretaker!? 1 years ago
- 9 Studio! Surrounded!? 1 years ago
- 10 Hiatus! 1 years ago
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