10レビュー
4.4
- テキストの品質
- アップデートの安定性
- ストーリー展開
- キャラクターデザイン
- 世界の背景
あなたの考えを他の人と共有してください
レビューを書く
I love the story's world background and the storyline. The author should however try to work on the sentence structure and writing quality in general. Otherwise, you guys should give the book a try.
This book is on a different level, am enjoying every available chapters, and expecting more from the author
First.. since my mother tongue not english ...so you will find some grammatical errors ... But you can skip that ... The story will gradually start to improve after you get to know the world ...and then we'll get into the original plot ... I have a fanart About the characters .. I don't know if anyone needs them? I can post them in the comments Or can I make an Instagram account or something like that?
All I can say is good job on you start as a new writer. My only critique was to improve and learn sentence structure and as well as edit typos. But all in all, a very good read and amazing work. Keep it up! The novel has potential and write more as the readers awaits more chaps [img=recommend]
Nice one. This book has a beautiful world background and is filled with thrilling chapters, judging from the few I've read. However, a little bit of editing needs to be done to give the book a good writing quality.
I liked the mystery in the story, and the background of the world as well..The annoying thing here is that you mixed the point of view of the first character with the point of view of the second character..that brings some confusion while reading, but I liked the rest of the aspects, By speeding up the pace of publishing, that would be great
good story I liked some of that mystery that appears in each chapter [img=proud][img=proud]
webnovel is a story plate form filled with nothing by petty romance novels but come on we need action novel and I'll like to recommend this master piece out just started reading today and I got to say it sparked my interest. this is indeed a master piece. keep up the good work author. I hope to see this in a manga or comic [img=update][img=More pls]
For the first time i read. I feel like this story is awesome. I can feel what MC feel. keep your hard work
I love the story's world background and the storyline. The author should however try to work on the sentence structure and writing quality in general. Otherwise, you guys should give the book a try.
This book is on a different level, am enjoying every available chapters, and expecting more from the author
First.. since my mother tongue not english ...so you will find some grammatical errors ... But you can skip that ... The story will gradually start to improve after you get to know the world ...and then we'll get into the original plot ... I have a fanart About the characters .. I don't know if anyone needs them? I can post them in the comments Or can I make an Instagram account or something like that?
All I can say is good job on you start as a new writer. My only critique was to improve and learn sentence structure and as well as edit typos. But all in all, a very good read and amazing work. Keep it up! The novel has potential and write more as the readers awaits more chaps [img=recommend]
Nice one. This book has a beautiful world background and is filled with thrilling chapters, judging from the few I've read. However, a little bit of editing needs to be done to give the book a good writing quality.
I liked the mystery in the story, and the background of the world as well..The annoying thing here is that you mixed the point of view of the first character with the point of view of the second character..that brings some confusion while reading, but I liked the rest of the aspects, By speeding up the pace of publishing, that would be great
good story I liked some of that mystery that appears in each chapter [img=proud][img=proud]
webnovel is a story plate form filled with nothing by petty romance novels but come on we need action novel and I'll like to recommend this master piece out just started reading today and I got to say it sparked my interest. this is indeed a master piece. keep up the good work author. I hope to see this in a manga or comic [img=update][img=More pls]
For the first time i read. I feel like this story is awesome. I can feel what MC feel. keep your hard work