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look like i have a rival, my fanfic novel MC also Shirou emiya (Illya word) but just he not reincarnated. nice2 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great potencial i hope the prota reveal his identity soner rather then late also more content on the school and the home. Is a shame that not have a biger fans bace i hope that you dont dich this novel for that
I am enjoying this story quite a bit. It can definitly be considered a better rendition of the first version. The most apparent improvement is the clearer Story structure and the reduction of the inclusion of the not so random omnipotent beings, ROB, Truck-chan and co. I am of the opinion that they disturbed or rather interrupted the flow of the story and had a negativ effect on the immersion because of ther rather nonsensical behaviour. I also greatly appreciate the "misterious" backstory of the MC, its definetly a breath of fresh air when it comes to Reincarnation Stories. So, yeah, definetly 4 Stars at least. Cant wait for more Chapters and keep up the good work.
A very good story if I have to say maybe if it takes a long time to upload chapters but it is totally understandable. the MC is a bit bland but he is manageable and the story is on the right track (I think) and that would be all from me buenas noches autor
this story is great for fate fans and for those who feel sorry for shirou, the start might be generic with the mystery cliche where op before memory loss had connections with god, something like that but this is really good give it a try
While the story and writing is good, my own personal issue comes from shirou's personality. Its very generic and bland and is just similar to many OCs. I just find him boring and forgettable.
I hope Truck-chan and ROB don't show up if possible, if it's to show up, let it be little, I had given up on the previous story because they were too annoying, (google translate)
Up againt please [img=update] you are the best friend, continue friends until it's finished[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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look like i have a rival, my fanfic novel MC also Shirou emiya (Illya word) but just he not reincarnated. nice2 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great potencial i hope the prota reveal his identity soner rather then late also more content on the school and the home. Is a shame that not have a biger fans bace i hope that you dont dich this novel for that
I am enjoying this story quite a bit. It can definitly be considered a better rendition of the first version. The most apparent improvement is the clearer Story structure and the reduction of the inclusion of the not so random omnipotent beings, ROB, Truck-chan and co. I am of the opinion that they disturbed or rather interrupted the flow of the story and had a negativ effect on the immersion because of ther rather nonsensical behaviour. I also greatly appreciate the "misterious" backstory of the MC, its definetly a breath of fresh air when it comes to Reincarnation Stories. So, yeah, definetly 4 Stars at least. Cant wait for more Chapters and keep up the good work.
A very good story if I have to say maybe if it takes a long time to upload chapters but it is totally understandable. the MC is a bit bland but he is manageable and the story is on the right track (I think) and that would be all from me buenas noches autor
this story is great for fate fans and for those who feel sorry for shirou, the start might be generic with the mystery cliche where op before memory loss had connections with god, something like that but this is really good give it a try
While the story and writing is good, my own personal issue comes from shirou's personality. Its very generic and bland and is just similar to many OCs. I just find him boring and forgettable.
I hope Truck-chan and ROB don't show up if possible, if it's to show up, let it be little, I had given up on the previous story because they were too annoying, (google translate)
Up againt please [img=update] you are the best friend, continue friends until it's finished[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Estuvo bueno mientras duró ...................................................................,...............................................................
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