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I love it so far (chapter 10). FL is strong bc she observed, learned and put it all in practice. Not bc she just magically is. World settings are interesting and captivating. Well done!
Great start, thanks for all your hard work! I generally don't read fan fiction because authors assume you have seen or read what their work is based on but this feels more like world building than the vaguely described works that are so common.
The concept of the novel seems new yet refreshing. The flow of the story is great and makes you want to know what happens next perfect use of words and plenty of cliffhangers. For anyone into fantasy and magic, this story is a treat........ [img=recommend]
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Author here! 👀 Shameless review and also an opportunity to share some info. Just to set the expectation, this story will read like a prologue—it’s on the short side, but I really think what’s there is worthwhile. Revenge, underground, crime, adventure, action, magic… Strong emotions, but no specific romance, no harem. It’s a fanfic based on the world and magic system from the Mistborn series, but the characters and plot are original. You don’t need to be very familiar with the books to understand this story, most can be gleaned through context. (And if there are any questions, I’m pretty good about responding to comments.) Thanks to everyone for the support! (Today I broke in to the top 100 power stone ranking—whaaa?!) Fans have been unexpected—a unique group! 😂—but so very appreciated, especially as I’ve gone out on a limb and done something out of my comfort zone. Thank you! Happy reading! 🧡
I love it so far (chapter 10). FL is strong bc she observed, learned and put it all in practice. Not bc she just magically is. World settings are interesting and captivating. Well done!
Great start, thanks for all your hard work! I generally don't read fan fiction because authors assume you have seen or read what their work is based on but this feels more like world building than the vaguely described works that are so common.
The concept of the novel seems new yet refreshing. The flow of the story is great and makes you want to know what happens next perfect use of words and plenty of cliffhangers. For anyone into fantasy and magic, this story is a treat........ [img=recommend]
Yes Daddy SlowCock. Yes Daddy SlowCock. Yes Daddy SlowCock. Yes Daddy SlowCock. Yes Daddy SlowCock. Yes Daddy SlowCock. Yes Daddy SlowCock. Yes Daddy SlowCock.
Author here! 👀 Shameless review and also an opportunity to share some info. Just to set the expectation, this story will read like a prologue—it’s on the short side, but I really think what’s there is worthwhile. Revenge, underground, crime, adventure, action, magic… Strong emotions, but no specific romance, no harem. It’s a fanfic based on the world and magic system from the Mistborn series, but the characters and plot are original. You don’t need to be very familiar with the books to understand this story, most can be gleaned through context. (And if there are any questions, I’m pretty good about responding to comments.) Thanks to everyone for the support! (Today I broke in to the top 100 power stone ranking—whaaa?!) Fans have been unexpected—a unique group! 😂—but so very appreciated, especially as I’ve gone out on a limb and done something out of my comfort zone. Thank you! Happy reading! 🧡