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this fanfic started out good but it became clear in the latest chapters that it's just a way to make you go to the author patreon , than the mc of the story is incredibly retardet by giving drop items to the others familias
The protagonist is terrible, this is fanfic so not much is required of the author, just that his character is at the level of the original protagonist or surpasses him, unfortunately this protagonist is very difficult to follow and gets emotional when he does something stupid. after another
Lo dejo aqui, fue interesante al principio, pero los últimos capítulos dejaron de gustarme. Lo que me molesta es que no es una historia de comedia, ya que no hay muchas escenas graciosas pero se nota demasiado lo aleatorio que se esta volviendo, los cambios entre cada capítulo son desconcertantes, los pensamientos o planes del protagonista cambian de un momento a otro casi sin motivo, las interacciones entre varios personajes no se sienten muy coherentes, probablemente estés escribiendo esta historia a medida que te llega la inspiración, talvez agregando cosas de los consejos de sus seguidores, pero desearía que tuviera menos aleatoriedad.
the girl at the cover picture is tina sprout right i'm not very sure cause its been quite a long time since i watched the anime, i cant even remember the tittle right. i think its called black bullet but yeah
Interesting idea, it was certainly developing in a cool way in the beginning, but the MC suddenly has a 360° change and starts making stupid and even questionable decisions, I even tried to continue reading when he started selling the unbreakable and super OP items of terraria to everyone, and even started giving out the chance to fight and get drops from bosses, hoping that it would improve or that there was an ulterior motive for the MC to do this, but then soon after he just makes Bell take a gender changing potion, that's it, I'm done.
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Absolutely love it, putting terraria together with danmachi is absolutely amazing for a story. Love it and keep up the good work. I support what you are doing.
Despite the less than glowing reviews, before anything give the fic a shot and read a good 30 to 40 chapters, you get a good idea of what it’s like ahead. Despite what everyone says about the MC being stupid and not using the system as well as he should apparently be doing, this fic is not about so crazy overpowered person who abused their system to kingdom come. It’s about a person who has a system that allows them to utilize mods for terraria, nothing more nothing less. The MC ain’t some 1 billion IQ person who min maxs everything, they are simply a person who knows and has used these mods in their past life. Now knowing all this, I can say for certain that this fic is not some 10/10 amazing work, it’s got its issues and fair share of convenient plot devices. The characters aside from the MC can either be rough or ok to you depending on how you interpret their personalities form the anime or manga. All that aside the fanfic was an enjoyable read and hopefully there is more to read in the future, keep up the good work Author!!!
it's pretty good in my opinion (but pro tip: turn off your brain and don't think to deeply about it, that's best way to enjoy this fanfiction)
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Main character is the type of character that gives away a high priced item for a low price Just because he is a goodie. The trade= what he gives: impossible to break weapons and armor, special items that can make you hit %20 faster ect. And many more. Train them and give them exp and the loot from the bosses. => what he takes: some minerals and acompany him to kill A Boss.
Best terraria fan fic I've read so far and I've read alot. Keep up the good work and I'll keep sending you stones to support your work[img=More pls]
The story was great till the mc gender bend bell and I’m not saying bell was a girl from the beginning of the story but a guy that was turned into a woman. This completely ruined the story for me and yes the now female bell is part of the harem. So if you like men turning into females then being part of the mcs harem this is for you .
At the start it was good,But after mc meets Freya the mc was getting more stupid chapter after chapter, not only the mc all the characters too. The mc doesn't use the system well both of them, the terraria system and the danmachi system
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Honestly, the story was quite good at the beginning but then its became an harem and there was also the genderbanded Bell which felt so forced.
The main character is so infuriatingly stupid that it makes me wonder if the author is purposefully trying to make people mad
Sinceramente deje de ller la novela cuando empezó a cambiar de género a bell y que se enamore del MC, osea, cualquiera, demasiado forzoso, y no valía la pena.
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pls update, also sometimes the dialog is a little wonky, like a translated Chinese novel or to sudden without any smoothness
this fanfic started out good but it became clear in the latest chapters that it's just a way to make you go to the author patreon , than the mc of the story is incredibly retardet by giving drop items to the others familias
The protagonist is terrible, this is fanfic so not much is required of the author, just that his character is at the level of the original protagonist or surpasses him, unfortunately this protagonist is very difficult to follow and gets emotional when he does something stupid. after another
Lo dejo aqui, fue interesante al principio, pero los últimos capítulos dejaron de gustarme. Lo que me molesta es que no es una historia de comedia, ya que no hay muchas escenas graciosas pero se nota demasiado lo aleatorio que se esta volviendo, los cambios entre cada capítulo son desconcertantes, los pensamientos o planes del protagonista cambian de un momento a otro casi sin motivo, las interacciones entre varios personajes no se sienten muy coherentes, probablemente estés escribiendo esta historia a medida que te llega la inspiración, talvez agregando cosas de los consejos de sus seguidores, pero desearía que tuviera menos aleatoriedad.
the girl at the cover picture is tina sprout right i'm not very sure cause its been quite a long time since i watched the anime, i cant even remember the tittle right. i think its called black bullet but yeah
Interesting idea, it was certainly developing in a cool way in the beginning, but the MC suddenly has a 360° change and starts making stupid and even questionable decisions, I even tried to continue reading when he started selling the unbreakable and super OP items of terraria to everyone, and even started giving out the chance to fight and get drops from bosses, hoping that it would improve or that there was an ulterior motive for the MC to do this, but then soon after he just makes Bell take a gender changing potion, that's it, I'm done.
ネタバレを明かす Absolutely love it, putting terraria together with danmachi is absolutely amazing for a story. Love it and keep up the good work. I support what you are doing.
Despite the less than glowing reviews, before anything give the fic a shot and read a good 30 to 40 chapters, you get a good idea of what it’s like ahead. Despite what everyone says about the MC being stupid and not using the system as well as he should apparently be doing, this fic is not about so crazy overpowered person who abused their system to kingdom come. It’s about a person who has a system that allows them to utilize mods for terraria, nothing more nothing less. The MC ain’t some 1 billion IQ person who min maxs everything, they are simply a person who knows and has used these mods in their past life. Now knowing all this, I can say for certain that this fic is not some 10/10 amazing work, it’s got its issues and fair share of convenient plot devices. The characters aside from the MC can either be rough or ok to you depending on how you interpret their personalities form the anime or manga. All that aside the fanfic was an enjoyable read and hopefully there is more to read in the future, keep up the good work Author!!!
it's pretty good in my opinion (but pro tip: turn off your brain and don't think to deeply about it, that's best way to enjoy this fanfiction)
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Main character is the type of character that gives away a high priced item for a low price Just because he is a goodie. The trade= what he gives: impossible to break weapons and armor, special items that can make you hit %20 faster ect. And many more. Train them and give them exp and the loot from the bosses. => what he takes: some minerals and acompany him to kill A Boss.
Best terraria fan fic I've read so far and I've read alot. Keep up the good work and I'll keep sending you stones to support your work[img=More pls]
The story was great till the mc gender bend bell and I’m not saying bell was a girl from the beginning of the story but a guy that was turned into a woman. This completely ruined the story for me and yes the now female bell is part of the harem. So if you like men turning into females then being part of the mcs harem this is for you .
At the start it was good,But after mc meets Freya the mc was getting more stupid chapter after chapter, not only the mc all the characters too. The mc doesn't use the system well both of them, the terraria system and the danmachi system
It's a good work Suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper!
Honestly, the story was quite good at the beginning but then its became an harem and there was also the genderbanded Bell which felt so forced.
The main character is so infuriatingly stupid that it makes me wonder if the author is purposefully trying to make people mad
Sinceramente deje de ller la novela cuando empezó a cambiar de género a bell y que se enamore del MC, osea, cualquiera, demasiado forzoso, y no valía la pena.
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pls update, also sometimes the dialog is a little wonky, like a translated Chinese novel or to sudden without any smoothness
is this dropped or something because I liked this a lot