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different so far. sure, maybe a little too much blood just from an 11 year old. I just hope the story goes away from that, though it will probably get worse in that regard. the world is already fresh from a background standpoint . bro, just needs a friend and to chill a little
Not a huge HP fan, but enjoying the take on the story and, HP is willing to do what it takes to get ahead.
Everything was good but the revenge part was dark. To kill is not a good form of revenge. Revenge could be taken by simply destroying their lives.
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What can I say other than THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTELY awesome breathtaking amazing stunning astounding astonishing awe-inspiring stupendous staggering extraordinary incredible unbelievable magnificent and many more Story wise: Masterpiece, this story have so much potential, it spent 300 chapter on mostly harry potter verse and it doesn't get stall or boring, the story is starting to touch the greater Marvel Universe and with how slow(in a good way) and diligent on the world background, I am sure this story will span over 1500+ chapter in order to end!! With how great the story and writing are now, if they continue this great work, I will follow this story to the end. Main and side characters: I love how the author didn't use a self insert or transmigration 100/10 Story: 1000/10 Stability of updates: 10/10 don't want the author to rush it! There is so many things I wanna say but I also want to sleep soon so FIVE STARSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
Gran obra 10/10 solo queda rezar para que no la abandone ..................... ................................ ................................ ................................ ................................ ................................ ...........
this is one of the best fanfiction that I ever read and I'm practically read all of fanfiction of Harry Potter from this platform the only Downside for me is that relationship in the story that I usually would skip it
The story flows, is very logical and expands in a way the reader can understand and appreciate. It makes it so frustrating abot the romance. My biggest issue is the romance with his mother. Like why? She lives in his mind and is corrupted sure, but then it becomes a weird grooming situation and it’s okay? The author definitely has a fetish for this kind of thing, so expect it to stick. I skip those parts.
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The story is good, i just dont prefer the main character to be more heroic. The author insists that he knows what anti hero means, but is really just making his character a villain. He even mentioned in a reply to a comment that grindelwald was an anti hero since he only wanted to enslave muggles, not kill them. Im sure author will either ignore this review, or come out and talk about how wrong i am, since he cant be convinced otherwise.
I think I Can say I have red most of Harry potter fanfics that are londer than 100 000 words and I must say this is one of the best probably top 3 or 5… i have been watching this for almost year because the inteoduction somehow wasnt appealing to me. But after I have red leviathan I have this chance and I have to say it is Amazing of course I would have loved ut better if it was finished but What Can We do but wait… please dont stop… Thank you author for this amazing fanfic
A great book I’m not done yet but I was wondering if he can produce the power of the infinite stone and if so what will he do.
DANMMMMM!! Only word to sum up this novel ITS freaking amazing, so well paced, amazing fights, great character development and super unique unlike other fanfics that follow the original story timeline you are thrown into the world we love of ‘HP’ but a twist with another world thrown in the mix and nothing seems forced unlike in other novels when incorporating a harem. A simple must read in my opinion the only problem you will have is when you catch up and realize you will have to wait for more JUICY chapters to drop.
Overall Rate 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I have found this novel entertaining..the only problem i have is that sometimes put too much details on something that doesn't have much relevance to the story that it appears like a long winded narrative and i found it somewhat annoying..but overall the story is good that's why I'm giving it 5 star
yuri????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Gripping story...good writing quality and good content.. hopefully it lasts till the very end of the fanfic. The Marvel addition makes it all the more interesting.
I love this fanfic. I liked the take on Lily from how she went from a kind, simple mother to twisted, obsessed mother. If you are look for a Harry Potter fanfic, then try it. You will not be disappointed.
Top tier, good plot and character development. Has some fresh tropes, and the cliches are not used in an annoying way
I love everything about this. It's great pacing storytelling world building, and it's just.
chère auteur comme déjà évoqué , j ai énormément apprécié votre histoire,je vous remercie encore une fois et j espère pouvoir découvrir plus de cette univers au travers de votre talent. quand a certain imbécile qui vous critique sans se mettre a votre place ,ni en prenant le temps de faire des critique constructive ( ma pensée bien sur ) qu ils aillent au diable. encore bravo
I really enjoyed this novel and I'm disappointed because now I won't be able to read the ending. It is a shame that this ship could not reach a safe port and our adventure there ended in the hands of a storm, but I am happy because the trip was wonderful and the company was welcoming. I look forward to the day when we embark on a new odyssey or resume this unfinished adventure.
Please don't drop this. The people who say the chapters are too short are liars i have seen stories with a lot shorter chapters than this on webnovel. Ignore the people who complain about filler chapters they are wrong.
Please continue the story don't care about the ones who diss this story but there are a lot of us who don't have the money to read this wonderful story from Patreon. Still, if you are going to continue the story on Patreon continue that so that those who are interested will pay and read there I too will after some time. good luck and take care author-san.
It's not bad, but i am not fan of too many OC in this fanfic. I just skimmed so much in hope for marvel arc to begin.
I'm not exactly a fan of HP Fics that puts a lot of focus on pre-Hogwarts days. I know it would be too much drama and will definitely be a frustrating read.
Next history jujutsu kaisen pls [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I like it a lot so far and hope you don't drop it.I was wondering if you were making Harry so overpowered like a Chinese protagonist where every enemy he faces is weak or is he going to be more a balanced person but still on the strongest like Thor and Hulk in the Avengersthx
Great balance in story. Not just 60% smut or nonsense. There is pretty good world building going on. My thanks to writer from other writer. fillerrr letterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrs
different so far. sure, maybe a little too much blood just from an 11 year old. I just hope the story goes away from that, though it will probably get worse in that regard. the world is already fresh from a background standpoint . bro, just needs a friend and to chill a little
Not a huge HP fan, but enjoying the take on the story and, HP is willing to do what it takes to get ahead.
Everything was good but the revenge part was dark. To kill is not a good form of revenge. Revenge could be taken by simply destroying their lives.
ネタバレを明かす What can I say other than THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTELY awesome breathtaking amazing stunning astounding astonishing awe-inspiring stupendous staggering extraordinary incredible unbelievable magnificent and many more Story wise: Masterpiece, this story have so much potential, it spent 300 chapter on mostly harry potter verse and it doesn't get stall or boring, the story is starting to touch the greater Marvel Universe and with how slow(in a good way) and diligent on the world background, I am sure this story will span over 1500+ chapter in order to end!! With how great the story and writing are now, if they continue this great work, I will follow this story to the end. Main and side characters: I love how the author didn't use a self insert or transmigration 100/10 Story: 1000/10 Stability of updates: 10/10 don't want the author to rush it! There is so many things I wanna say but I also want to sleep soon so FIVE STARSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
Gran obra 10/10 solo queda rezar para que no la abandone ..................... ................................ ................................ ................................ ................................ ................................ ...........
this is one of the best fanfiction that I ever read and I'm practically read all of fanfiction of Harry Potter from this platform the only Downside for me is that relationship in the story that I usually would skip it
The story flows, is very logical and expands in a way the reader can understand and appreciate. It makes it so frustrating abot the romance. My biggest issue is the romance with his mother. Like why? She lives in his mind and is corrupted sure, but then it becomes a weird grooming situation and it’s okay? The author definitely has a fetish for this kind of thing, so expect it to stick. I skip those parts.
ネタバレを明かす The story is good, i just dont prefer the main character to be more heroic. The author insists that he knows what anti hero means, but is really just making his character a villain. He even mentioned in a reply to a comment that grindelwald was an anti hero since he only wanted to enslave muggles, not kill them. Im sure author will either ignore this review, or come out and talk about how wrong i am, since he cant be convinced otherwise.
I think I Can say I have red most of Harry potter fanfics that are londer than 100 000 words and I must say this is one of the best probably top 3 or 5… i have been watching this for almost year because the inteoduction somehow wasnt appealing to me. But after I have red leviathan I have this chance and I have to say it is Amazing of course I would have loved ut better if it was finished but What Can We do but wait… please dont stop… Thank you author for this amazing fanfic
A great book I’m not done yet but I was wondering if he can produce the power of the infinite stone and if so what will he do.
DANMMMMM!! Only word to sum up this novel ITS freaking amazing, so well paced, amazing fights, great character development and super unique unlike other fanfics that follow the original story timeline you are thrown into the world we love of ‘HP’ but a twist with another world thrown in the mix and nothing seems forced unlike in other novels when incorporating a harem. A simple must read in my opinion the only problem you will have is when you catch up and realize you will have to wait for more JUICY chapters to drop.
Overall Rate 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I have found this novel entertaining..the only problem i have is that sometimes put too much details on something that doesn't have much relevance to the story that it appears like a long winded narrative and i found it somewhat annoying..but overall the story is good that's why I'm giving it 5 star
yuri????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Gripping story...good writing quality and good content.. hopefully it lasts till the very end of the fanfic. The Marvel addition makes it all the more interesting.
I love this fanfic. I liked the take on Lily from how she went from a kind, simple mother to twisted, obsessed mother. If you are look for a Harry Potter fanfic, then try it. You will not be disappointed.
Top tier, good plot and character development. Has some fresh tropes, and the cliches are not used in an annoying way
I love everything about this. It's great pacing storytelling world building, and it's just.
chère auteur comme déjà évoqué , j ai énormément apprécié votre histoire,je vous remercie encore une fois et j espère pouvoir découvrir plus de cette univers au travers de votre talent. quand a certain imbécile qui vous critique sans se mettre a votre place ,ni en prenant le temps de faire des critique constructive ( ma pensée bien sur ) qu ils aillent au diable. encore bravo
I really enjoyed this novel and I'm disappointed because now I won't be able to read the ending. It is a shame that this ship could not reach a safe port and our adventure there ended in the hands of a storm, but I am happy because the trip was wonderful and the company was welcoming. I look forward to the day when we embark on a new odyssey or resume this unfinished adventure.
Please don't drop this. The people who say the chapters are too short are liars i have seen stories with a lot shorter chapters than this on webnovel. Ignore the people who complain about filler chapters they are wrong.
Please continue the story don't care about the ones who diss this story but there are a lot of us who don't have the money to read this wonderful story from Patreon. Still, if you are going to continue the story on Patreon continue that so that those who are interested will pay and read there I too will after some time. good luck and take care author-san.
It's not bad, but i am not fan of too many OC in this fanfic. I just skimmed so much in hope for marvel arc to begin.
I'm not exactly a fan of HP Fics that puts a lot of focus on pre-Hogwarts days. I know it would be too much drama and will definitely be a frustrating read.
Next history jujutsu kaisen pls [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I like it a lot so far and hope you don't drop it.I was wondering if you were making Harry so overpowered like a Chinese protagonist where every enemy he faces is weak or is he going to be more a balanced person but still on the strongest like Thor and Hulk in the Avengersthx
Great balance in story. Not just 60% smut or nonsense. There is pretty good world building going on. My thanks to writer from other writer. fillerrr letterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrs