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It would be 5 stars if it wasn't a disgusting old man. Please change the looks it is too disgusting to imagine.
Muito bom 😊 eu sempre volto para conferir se o autor atualizou. O MC é um velho tarado com sistema, não é minha primeira vez vendo o tropo bastardo feio em uma fanfic, mas esse foi um dos melhores no quesito, fetiche e R18. Por favor autor não largue!!!
I'm rating this book 5 stars because it has great story development mc don't lick Tang san and don't let go any female mc .I really want this book to continue and have a perfect ending . sometimes the story update is late but i am great full Because it did not got abandoned . overall it is a heram book with greatest story I have ever read .so please don't abandoned 🙏🙏🙏 this story. if you have problems in your life we can understand because everyone one has good and bad time we only ask that if you have problems you can take a break but please don't abandoned the story we want a a perfect ending .
Best fanfic----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------update please
Hahahahah what a story ===|=|=|==|=|=||=|=|=|=|=|=|=|=|=|=||=|==|=|=|=||=|==|=|=|=|=|=|=|=|=|=||=|=|=|=|=|=|=||==||=|=||=||=|=|=|=|=|=||=|=||=
Огидний старий робить цю історію огидною 🤮 Якщо автор намагається цього досягти, ви точно перевищили свої плани🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢
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No se olviden de agregar a bai chenxiang es un buen personaje y es poco o recordado personaje para agregar al harem en las novelas y cuando actualizaras la historia de old gin en fairy tail o podrias hacer uno de old gin en one piece
not deserving of 5 stars but to increase the average rating. I liked it as a pervert.
Disgusting old man makes this story disgusting 🤮 If that’s ehat the author tryin to achieve, you have definitely exceeded your goral🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
Disgu sting Low Life You Should K ILL Yourself (Contains CLO Ne, Net O Rare, Net O Ra Se) and he doesn't change the Main Character’s appearance even after he got the Blue Silver Emperor’s Inheritance. Man Don’t use some else’s character for something as fil Th Y as this. Contains full blown Y U R I
overall a great work, story is cool, the world is cool, MC is cool, the only flaw is that he's a hairy guy with a beer belly and bald, but I'm hoping he'll get an upgrade, well I don't know what the work appears to have been abandoned. that sad
La escritura es regular. Aunque la historia es buena,pero supongo que es para gustos muy "especiales" ya que es bastante desagradable el mc. Si solo fuera viejo no estaria mal, pero es un viejo desagradable y que a la vez es un cerdo, en todos los sentidos de la palabra, por lo que no es realmente muy agradable
норм ееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееее[img=рекомендовать]
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
Perfecto!!!!! _--------_---------------hgk jaja ecosistema glorificando pidiendo iríamos floren leído fotos rodilla rifle rodilla del laburo
is this still being updated ? Also it is a good creation although slow/not being updated at all.
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Excellent perfect unique creative outstanding entertaining wonderful very well done author
I love it so much ..........................................................................................................................................
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Good ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The fic would have been much better if the author used a normal guy instead of an old disgusting man . It's a huge turnoff . not everyone has old man fetish , it is a very questionable taste . Every dude giving 5 stars is very weird .
It would be 5 stars if it wasn't a disgusting old man. Please change the looks it is too disgusting to imagine.
Muito bom 😊 eu sempre volto para conferir se o autor atualizou. O MC é um velho tarado com sistema, não é minha primeira vez vendo o tropo bastardo feio em uma fanfic, mas esse foi um dos melhores no quesito, fetiche e R18. Por favor autor não largue!!!
I'm rating this book 5 stars because it has great story development mc don't lick Tang san and don't let go any female mc .I really want this book to continue and have a perfect ending . sometimes the story update is late but i am great full Because it did not got abandoned . overall it is a heram book with greatest story I have ever read .so please don't abandoned 🙏🙏🙏 this story. if you have problems in your life we can understand because everyone one has good and bad time we only ask that if you have problems you can take a break but please don't abandoned the story we want a a perfect ending .
Best fanfic----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------update please
Hahahahah what a story ===|=|=|==|=|=||=|=|=|=|=|=|=|=|=|=||=|==|=|=|=||=|==|=|=|=|=|=|=|=|=|=||=|=|=|=|=|=|=||==||=|=||=||=|=|=|=|=|=||=|=||=
Огидний старий робить цю історію огидною 🤮 Якщо автор намагається цього досягти, ви точно перевищили свої плани🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
No se olviden de agregar a bai chenxiang es un buen personaje y es poco o recordado personaje para agregar al harem en las novelas y cuando actualizaras la historia de old gin en fairy tail o podrias hacer uno de old gin en one piece
not deserving of 5 stars but to increase the average rating. I liked it as a pervert.
Disgusting old man makes this story disgusting 🤮 If that’s ehat the author tryin to achieve, you have definitely exceeded your goral🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
Disgu sting Low Life You Should K ILL Yourself (Contains CLO Ne, Net O Rare, Net O Ra Se) and he doesn't change the Main Character’s appearance even after he got the Blue Silver Emperor’s Inheritance. Man Don’t use some else’s character for something as fil Th Y as this. Contains full blown Y U R I
overall a great work, story is cool, the world is cool, MC is cool, the only flaw is that he's a hairy guy with a beer belly and bald, but I'm hoping he'll get an upgrade, well I don't know what the work appears to have been abandoned. that sad
La escritura es regular. Aunque la historia es buena,pero supongo que es para gustos muy "especiales" ya que es bastante desagradable el mc. Si solo fuera viejo no estaria mal, pero es un viejo desagradable y que a la vez es un cerdo, en todos los sentidos de la palabra, por lo que no es realmente muy agradable
норм ееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееееее[img=рекомендовать]
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
Perfecto!!!!! _--------_---------------hgk jaja ecosistema glorificando pidiendo iríamos floren leído fotos rodilla rifle rodilla del laburo
is this still being updated ? Also it is a good creation although slow/not being updated at all.
Like this one 👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻
Excellent perfect unique creative outstanding entertaining wonderful very well done author
I love it so much ..........................................................................................................................................
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Good ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The fic would have been much better if the author used a normal guy instead of an old disgusting man . It's a huge turnoff . not everyone has old man fetish , it is a very questionable taste . Every dude giving 5 stars is very weird .