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The best cyberpunk fanfic that I have ever read, solid 10/10, and would recommend to read right now
Nòooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo can't be bothered writing a review it's pretty good if you don't mind the huge power creep towards the end
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dont know a thing about cyberpunk but it was a fun read for a bit. The pacing is a bit odd to me but its stylized so I can understand why some people like it. Not my cup of tea but not a bad cup either way.
Amazing, just reading the first chapter I know how this fanfic has almost 5 stars [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Give me moooooore!!! Its great! Now where is the "Jiraiya's son" updates...... ehhehehhehehhehehhehehehhehehehehehhehehhehhehehehhehehhehehhehehhe
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Just wow. I love these type of fanfics. This I simply a work of art. GLORY TO THE BIG JUAN
Can you at some point do your 40k si again this is really good but I like Warhammer,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Yooooo! Dude It's like your reading my mind. when I was in for an Invincible mood, not two days later you wrote a fic about it. Now I'm in Cyberpunk mood for nearly two weeks and suddenly I thought "Maybe I should go and check in on my man, Jman and BAM!. New Fic with a Genre that I was currently obessing over
Honestly great work the story, characters whole writing style not to mention it is rare to see good overpowered character that isn't just wish fulfillment and if you like this story then I can only advise to check out authors other stories.
The writing seemeed familiar Io and behold it was the god emperor of krogankind himself
Even coming in to this know bare minimum about the universe this fan fic is based on I’m hooked
Review at chapter 10 JMan is back at it again with great ideas for his story. Its still rather small and not enough chapters but so far its really good and decent fun. Theres a lot of potential in the story of cyberpunk with many routes. The author has a good grasp in Writting OP but fun characters and really excels in chaotic fun worlds. Some writting issues here and there but legible and can be mostly ignored. Give it a try!
Pretty Good!!, Harem or not, I like anyway. Hopefully we get to see an end to this one! [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
Very good fic. How does it not have way more views. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
so far love the story dude but on a side note when are you going to write something new about everyone's favorite Big Chunga Space Lizard Chad and ultimate Krogan God of blood and metal?
Unbelievable. I have a huge problem with this book. It’s that you haven’t made it sooner…because if you did, I would’ve known how good you are at bad writing. And when I say “Bad” I mean Micheal Jackson Bad. You know how he looked really, really bad at the end of his life?…….Whats that? You don’t know if I like this or not? The author should delete everything he has in his notes and destroy his online presence. Because he should be hired by the best authors in the world to ghost write their books, and become globally recognized as the best author in the world. …Just not any world I’d want to live in. Because im jealous….at your ability to not give a care about the stuff you write. This book is not fit for human consumption….No! This should be read by a higher life form with more complex mental capabilities and intelligence. ….But also a altruistic drive to eradicate books like the ones this author puts out. Joking…NOT! YOU DESERVE TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!! So you wont have to live in a world where you will never exceed what you have made here. In conclusion….. I mean its JManM writing this, what did you expect? Overall greatness of course… Or is it? Perhaps you should just read it. (Spoilers: ultra level work right here)
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The best cyberpunk fanfic that I have ever read, solid 10/10, and would recommend to read right now
Nòooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo can't be bothered writing a review it's pretty good if you don't mind the huge power creep towards the end
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dont know a thing about cyberpunk but it was a fun read for a bit. The pacing is a bit odd to me but its stylized so I can understand why some people like it. Not my cup of tea but not a bad cup either way.
Amazing, just reading the first chapter I know how this fanfic has almost 5 stars [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Give me moooooore!!! Its great! Now where is the "Jiraiya's son" updates...... ehhehehhehehhehehhehehehhehehehehehhehehhehhehehehhehehhehehhehehhe
ネタバレを明かす Does this story have Edgerunners?........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Just wow. I love these type of fanfics. This I simply a work of art. GLORY TO THE BIG JUAN
Can you at some point do your 40k si again this is really good but I like Warhammer,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Yooooo! Dude It's like your reading my mind. when I was in for an Invincible mood, not two days later you wrote a fic about it. Now I'm in Cyberpunk mood for nearly two weeks and suddenly I thought "Maybe I should go and check in on my man, Jman and BAM!. New Fic with a Genre that I was currently obessing over
Honestly great work the story, characters whole writing style not to mention it is rare to see good overpowered character that isn't just wish fulfillment and if you like this story then I can only advise to check out authors other stories.
The writing seemeed familiar Io and behold it was the god emperor of krogankind himself
Even coming in to this know bare minimum about the universe this fan fic is based on I’m hooked
Review at chapter 10 JMan is back at it again with great ideas for his story. Its still rather small and not enough chapters but so far its really good and decent fun. Theres a lot of potential in the story of cyberpunk with many routes. The author has a good grasp in Writting OP but fun characters and really excels in chaotic fun worlds. Some writting issues here and there but legible and can be mostly ignored. Give it a try!
Pretty Good!!, Harem or not, I like anyway. Hopefully we get to see an end to this one! [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
Very good fic. How does it not have way more views. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
so far love the story dude but on a side note when are you going to write something new about everyone's favorite Big Chunga Space Lizard Chad and ultimate Krogan God of blood and metal?
Unbelievable. I have a huge problem with this book. It’s that you haven’t made it sooner…because if you did, I would’ve known how good you are at bad writing. And when I say “Bad” I mean Micheal Jackson Bad. You know how he looked really, really bad at the end of his life?…….Whats that? You don’t know if I like this or not? The author should delete everything he has in his notes and destroy his online presence. Because he should be hired by the best authors in the world to ghost write their books, and become globally recognized as the best author in the world. …Just not any world I’d want to live in. Because im jealous….at your ability to not give a care about the stuff you write. This book is not fit for human consumption….No! This should be read by a higher life form with more complex mental capabilities and intelligence. ….But also a altruistic drive to eradicate books like the ones this author puts out. Joking…NOT! YOU DESERVE TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!! So you wont have to live in a world where you will never exceed what you have made here. In conclusion….. I mean its JManM writing this, what did you expect? Overall greatness of course… Or is it? Perhaps you should just read it. (Spoilers: ultra level work right here)
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