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It's very difficult to objectively evaluate this fanfic. Perhaps this time I will criticize. The plot construction is incredibly bad, the events seem illogical and rushed. The characters' actions are exaggeratedly emotional, with illogical reactions to events. The secondary characters are poorly written and do not react to the actions of the main character, or react unrealistically.The cause-and-effect relationship between events and consequences is not observed. And as the cherry on the cake, the author constantly forgets what he wrote earlier, and therefore many changes to the canon are often ignored, and characters often forget about information that they already know.Moreover, the characters' reactions to the events of the plot are dulled to please the author. End. You can read it, but only once, and only if there really is nothing better.
Hopefully, Tsunade becomes a love interest. It'd be awesome because not many do it, and it would destroy jiraiya.
It would be a good story if anything happened in it's massively bloated chapters. No joke, the author draws out single actions like he's trying to write Shakespearian poetry. He stomped his right foot down, the crowd going silent, the breeze gently fluttering his golden hair as he studied his opponents face and stance, a single drop of dew falling from a blade of grass in another country sealing his opponents fate as he made his first decision of the match, hoping to come out on top as he had always done. He moved his left foot forward. Like that, but entire 5k word chapters.
This is one of the best naruto fanfiction ever...................................................................................................................
MY MAN HAS COME BACK!!! THANK YOU FOR UPLOADING TO CONTINUED TGIS MASTERPIECE!!!!!!!!
i need more stories like this[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I feel so sad for Hinata in this fanfiction. I hope the author gives her a chance to be with Naruto. like doing perilous missions together and love bloomed among them. If it's a harem route. never hold back. and just do it anyway.
Author forgot drama tag…. Every fkin chapter naruto is crying… The only people he cared about were killed in uchiha massacre. And the pacing is very slow.
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Absolutly amezing perfect so good i love this its amezing in my opinion one of the best naruto fanfics
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Não dou 5 em escrita pois os últimos capítulos foram meio estranhos, mas ainda é muito bom, a única coisa me incomodando é o relacionamento com a Hinata, já comentaram aqui, e já comentei em um dos capítulos, mas já que é harém, não faz sentido ficar fazendo outros casais, simplesmente pega TD mundo e foda-se kkkkk, Temari e Hinata tem que entrar, gosto bastante da Sakura, mas como não teve um desenvolvimento não logo que ela não entre no harém, Yugao foi uma pena não entrar tbm. Agora sobre a história, simplesmente muito boa mesmo, e sobre o aviso de quem não quer ler a infância do Naruto, não faça isso, vc irá perder muito desenvolvimento, apenas leia
It's very difficult to objectively evaluate this fanfic. Perhaps this time I will criticize. The plot construction is incredibly bad, the events seem illogical and rushed. The characters' actions are exaggeratedly emotional, with illogical reactions to events. The secondary characters are poorly written and do not react to the actions of the main character, or react unrealistically.The cause-and-effect relationship between events and consequences is not observed. And as the cherry on the cake, the author constantly forgets what he wrote earlier, and therefore many changes to the canon are often ignored, and characters often forget about information that they already know.Moreover, the characters' reactions to the events of the plot are dulled to please the author. End. You can read it, but only once, and only if there really is nothing better.
Hopefully, Tsunade becomes a love interest. It'd be awesome because not many do it, and it would destroy jiraiya.
It would be a good story if anything happened in it's massively bloated chapters. No joke, the author draws out single actions like he's trying to write Shakespearian poetry. He stomped his right foot down, the crowd going silent, the breeze gently fluttering his golden hair as he studied his opponents face and stance, a single drop of dew falling from a blade of grass in another country sealing his opponents fate as he made his first decision of the match, hoping to come out on top as he had always done. He moved his left foot forward. Like that, but entire 5k word chapters.
This is one of the best naruto fanfiction ever...................................................................................................................
MY MAN HAS COME BACK!!! THANK YOU FOR UPLOADING TO CONTINUED TGIS MASTERPIECE!!!!!!!!
i need more stories like this[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I feel so sad for Hinata in this fanfiction. I hope the author gives her a chance to be with Naruto. like doing perilous missions together and love bloomed among them. If it's a harem route. never hold back. and just do it anyway.
Author forgot drama tag…. Every fkin chapter naruto is crying… The only people he cared about were killed in uchiha massacre. And the pacing is very slow.
ネタバレを明かす Absolutly amezing perfect so good i love this its amezing in my opinion one of the best naruto fanfics
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Não dou 5 em escrita pois os últimos capítulos foram meio estranhos, mas ainda é muito bom, a única coisa me incomodando é o relacionamento com a Hinata, já comentaram aqui, e já comentei em um dos capítulos, mas já que é harém, não faz sentido ficar fazendo outros casais, simplesmente pega TD mundo e foda-se kkkkk, Temari e Hinata tem que entrar, gosto bastante da Sakura, mas como não teve um desenvolvimento não logo que ela não entre no harém, Yugao foi uma pena não entrar tbm. Agora sobre a história, simplesmente muito boa mesmo, e sobre o aviso de quem não quer ler a infância do Naruto, não faça isso, vc irá perder muito desenvolvimento, apenas leia