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its not bad the author is definitely iffy when it comes to Escanor's powers that's for sure. But not the worse fanfic I've ever read.
I like it very much. Though the update is really slow. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Very nice so far. Pls don’t drop. Did you take inspiration from fff-class trans hero for the system type thing with the gods. Djjdmcmmckdmdmdmmdmdmdmdmdm
Honestly? Pretty good, I'm surprised someone on this App actually knows the difference between past, present and future.
Dude, you should do more research on abilities, Escanor's grace Sunshine let's him harness energy from sun not day. The reason Escanor becomes weak at night because Sunshine is the ability of Mael a goddess clan member and Escanor's mortal body cannot handle it. At night Sunshine user is at his weakest form means he has no buff from the ability and is at his base power. MC in your fic is not a mortal human but Asgardian, at night his strength should be what a normal Asgardian would have(if he never trained in his life to get stronger and only relies on his sunshine ability, which in my opinion is pathetic). Other than this diffence in opinion with MC's ability. This fic is great👍.
Interesting topic 👏 👌 🤔 👍 😏 😀 😀 👏 👌 **************************??*?*******************************************************
La idea del fanfic me parece interesante le daré una oportunidad aunque los capítulos son demasiado cortos.......................................................................................................................
Pretty good, I just feel like the author doesn’t accurately depict Escanor and his abilities. It feels more like an Asguardian god of the sun than Escanor.
its not bad the author is definitely iffy when it comes to Escanor's powers that's for sure. But not the worse fanfic I've ever read.
I like it very much. Though the update is really slow. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Very nice so far. Pls don’t drop. Did you take inspiration from fff-class trans hero for the system type thing with the gods. Djjdmcmmckdmdmdmmdmdmdmdmdm
Honestly? Pretty good, I'm surprised someone on this App actually knows the difference between past, present and future.
Dude, you should do more research on abilities, Escanor's grace Sunshine let's him harness energy from sun not day. The reason Escanor becomes weak at night because Sunshine is the ability of Mael a goddess clan member and Escanor's mortal body cannot handle it. At night Sunshine user is at his weakest form means he has no buff from the ability and is at his base power. MC in your fic is not a mortal human but Asgardian, at night his strength should be what a normal Asgardian would have(if he never trained in his life to get stronger and only relies on his sunshine ability, which in my opinion is pathetic). Other than this diffence in opinion with MC's ability. This fic is great👍.
Interesting topic 👏 👌 🤔 👍 😏 😀 😀 👏 👌 **************************??*?*******************************************************
La idea del fanfic me parece interesante le daré una oportunidad aunque los capítulos son demasiado cortos.......................................................................................................................
Pretty good, I just feel like the author doesn’t accurately depict Escanor and his abilities. It feels more like an Asguardian god of the sun than Escanor.