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Es muy bueno espero que sigas con esta historia y no la dejes tirada ya qué tiene futuro hahaha[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
good start great story Is there another episode? I want to read the next chapter I thought it wouldn't be bad. The character character is good. Probably because I like the protagonist to be good.
.............very Good one............... .............pls don't drop ...............
goooooddddddddd[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Hey, Author. this is one of the best start i've ever seen in a fanfic. And it would mean so much to me if you could continue this fanfic. Wish you the best of luck.
the best starting fan fiction i have ever seen 🔥🔥 i will give you power stone everyday is that tempting enough? if not then take these kisses 😘😘 so continue this amazing fan-fic
Till now, it's pretty good. And I hope he doesn't drop from the middle. many anime sports fanfics are always dropped. So, that's all to say.
Only one Chapter until now, but it looks promising. Good Writing Quality too, only little mistakes that you don’t really notice when you are reading.
A story about a bunch of men kicking balls and is trying to get on top of each other........................................................
Es muy bueno espero que sigas con esta historia y no la dejes tirada ya qué tiene futuro hahaha[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
good start great story Is there another episode? I want to read the next chapter I thought it wouldn't be bad. The character character is good. Probably because I like the protagonist to be good.
.............very Good one............... .............pls don't drop ...............
goooooddddddddd[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
subarashi------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
goodgooodoeihenleidhrbeloeudvdbeleoeidubdldodudvmeoeidgvala9fyfbwkpqoaudbrlwpwidbmfpwuwhnrodidhdnwleorh
Continue please......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Hey, Author. this is one of the best start i've ever seen in a fanfic. And it would mean so much to me if you could continue this fanfic. Wish you the best of luck.
the best starting fan fiction i have ever seen 🔥🔥 i will give you power stone everyday is that tempting enough? if not then take these kisses 😘😘 so continue this amazing fan-fic
Till now, it's pretty good. And I hope he doesn't drop from the middle. many anime sports fanfics are always dropped. So, that's all to say.
Only one Chapter until now, but it looks promising. Good Writing Quality too, only little mistakes that you don’t really notice when you are reading.
A story about a bunch of men kicking balls and is trying to get on top of each other........................................................